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Do you know why Zecora is so rarely seen in episodes or fanfics? Because writing dialogue for her is the worst. Just... my god. Hope you enjoy, cause this one was a challenge, let me tell you.
nice work.
Rhyming, you have gone too far
Writing for Zecora may twist your tounge, but in the end, it can be quite fun.
Also, during the editing, I/we thought of 2, arguably 4 passable rhymes for "orange"
But there are still none for "silver" that come closer than "pilfer" which doesn't work.
This needs a sequel so badly!
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Cheers man!
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I sure hope rhyming is someone's fetish.
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I'll admit I had some fun trying to find the rhymes, but it was reaaaally aggravating at times. I'm sorry Zecora, I like you, but nope.
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We had some fun, trying to make some phrases sound better, only to realize "oh wait... you can't, because rhymes!
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Can I put Zecora in a muzzle?
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I figured you put rhyming in the fetish spoilers because you knew it was mine.
Stupid sexy Zebras stealing all the mares.... Good stuff!
As much as I enjoyed this fic, the biology nerd in me demands that I point out that zebra/horse hybrids (or zebra/pony in this case) are always born infertile so starting a new tribe is probably out of the question.
Yyyeah...this definitely needs a sequel. Not a bad thing at all of course, but I'm intrigued by the possibilities of Zecora making a tribe within Equestria.
Overall, really good story!
Yay, I'm not the only person to write Rarity/Zecora on this site! :D
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No, they can still start a tribe.
It will just take a while, since only one of them will be capable of breeding, and it'll only last for one generation.
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Aye. Granted, it is easier for certain creature pairings more than others, and some just outright skip a genetic code that would inhibit it... I know a saw a nifty video about it, but the details were pretty intricate, though it can happen.
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Poor Rarity didn't know what she was getting into. If she does go to Zecora's tribe I wonder if she would want to come back.
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Yes, but you are forgetting something: they are magical horses in a land where you can brew dick potions. I'm pretty sure their offspring will be fiiiine!
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That or Rarity taking Zecora up on her offer to visit her home. I'm not saying I can imagine a fun story about a zebra gangbang, but...
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You sir have a lot more patience than I do. After this story I have a newfound respect for writers that use Zecora as a character and keep her rhyming intact.
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Well, it helps that I went though a major poetry phase back in high school, so keeping Zecora's dialogue with matching rhyme and meter was only slightly tricky at times. She's a really fun character to write, just like Rarity. :D
How does one juice a dried fruit? Probably earth pony magic
Zecora paused, and turned to give Rarity a confused glance. “I know that word, but have never understood its meaning. We have no such notion in my home, for it is a land of free loving.” She shrugged. “If pony stallions are out of the question, you could go to Applejack’s and make use of her bulls’ production.”
“I have heard of that word, but of its meaning, I have no record. We have no such notion in my homeland, for we are free, like [burning/flowing/blowing] sand.” She shrugged. “If pony stallions make you feel like a fool, you could go to Applejack’s and make use of her mating bull
“Aaah, better, I already feel.” Zecora hummed, pumping on her massive cock. “Rarity, would you help me finish our deal?”.”
“Aaah, truly, it feels very real.” Zecora hummed, pumping on her massive cock. “Rarity, would you help me finish our deal?”
My own little versions of a few particular rhymes. I love rhyming so if you ever break your own promise and decide to go for a Zecora fic again, hit me up. <3
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It sounds like it could be fun to write, maybe one day... Also when are you going to release your next story/chapter? It's been a while man!
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Today I learned that "raisin" is the name for dried grapes. The more you know. In french "raisin" just means normal grape, hence my confusion. Thanks!
And that's a tempting offer, I'm really not a good rhymer. We'll see!
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So if I go to France and ask for raisins they'll give grapes? What is the name for dried grapes in French?
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"Raisin sec". Literally "Dried grape".
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Pretty obvious in hindsight. Never realized how strange it is to have a word specifically for dried grapes until now. Then again we have names for oats fermented with a very particular strand of bacteria (beer) so I guess it's not that crazy.
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Well, either English is too crazy about specific words, or French is too lazy
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I've heard that the German language has a word that means tripping upwards on stairs.
Silly Rarity, thinking she and Zecora were not genetically compatible. Silly Zecora, thinking Rarity knew what the 'proposition' was.
Good thing (for us) that all that silliness resulted in a lot of fun!
But boy, is Rarity in for a double-dose of a surprise
awesome story wish i knew what the foals would look like but all in all a lovely story
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Basically just Rarity but with a stiffer mane and faint stripes. That's how real-life crosses tend to look, anyway.
RhymeBrain should be your closest friend. It's a resource that I will greatly recommend.
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Yeah! Then she can go off to a distant land where every character but her will speak in rhyme
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I thought it was a funny idea to have them juicing dried grapes. That's why I left it :P
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The part about it "feeling better" was her saying that the uncomfortable soreness was fading.
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true
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Memo to me. Never attempt dry humor. I clearly suck at it. Sorry.
Yes.
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Aye, you truly must. It got me soaking wet.
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Look up pics of zony foals.
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Shiver works, for example "The old ruins are filled with Gold and Silver, just the thought of it makes me Shiver".
River also but they aren't hard rhymes and aren't perfect which is a shame.
Also with your other story Another Approach and now this I think you might be giving me a Rarity Fetish.
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Nah, those wouldn't be close enough for me.
No nut November failed
Ohhhhhhh that was so damn sexy! Just, all the UNF!
Some sexy Zebra breeding, futa, just everything is all the YES! Now to wait for the sequel of Rarity (or some other mare) taking Zecora up on that offer. OHHH Or maybe Daring Do trying to fit in in a tribe she's visiting! So many options. Either way, amazingly hot, sexy story.
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Probably...though a bit altered in mind and body.
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Depending on how you pronounce silver, fever... how in the hell did I think of that after only ten seconds?
Edit: never might work as well... WHERE IS ALL THIS COMING FROM?
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Eh. Some might if you twist pronunciations, but I'm not Rihanna.
Truly hot fic.
This was a blast to read!
The descriptions, the atmosphere, Rarity's naivete and innocence contrasting with Zecora's calm confidence, it all blended into one deliciously sexy concoction
I would ask for a sequel... but I'd rather spare any more innocent keyboards from the gruesome fate such challenge would require
I wouldn't mind a short epilogue featuring a heavily pregnant Rarity, though... hint hint.
Thank you, both for the fic that was of the highest quality, and the rhyming that took so much effort and time
You did a killer job on the Zecora rhymes! A few words like "cunt" and "pussy" I don't really cotton to, but all around just a solid fic with great details in the margins like Rarity not thinking she'll get pregnant but Zecora knowing she will!
Liked and faved.
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Cheers mate! Actually, I do agree on the words: I've been going over my ongoing story lately, updating stylistic choices and what not, and I get irked by those terms. They sound so "porny", for a lack of a better term, and don't really fit with the setting (same reason I dislike ponies using words like "fuck", seems weird), issue is you quickly run out of euphemisms. My favorites are "intimacy", "nether", and stuff like that, but I feel you quickly run out of options before having to resort to the more "rustic" ones.
Dunno, still griping about that for ongoing writings.
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Nethers is good and I use that one quite a bit. Over the years, I've gotten pretty creative, myself. Perhaps a bit bold of me to suggest it , but maybe you could find some inspiration from one of my more recent stories? Been a pretty good year for me.
Setting that aside, this story is still amazing. Great scenario and the way you focus on key details is commendable.