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I started with the idea of writing everything through Rarity's perspective, in a noir style with some links to a few relevant tunes. Then after tearing half of my hair off trying to make it sound good through the sex scene I just scrapped it all. Not even sure I got the intro right, even after fiddling with it for way too long. The sound of trumpets give me shivers now.
Epilogue ruined it.
Hnng my fetishes
Also d'aww, didn't expect this kind of ending
6874207
Sorry you feel this way, but I wanted to finish in a cute manner. You can ignore the epilogue if you want though. Also I'm curious to know what you didn't like about it.
6874246
Impreg is best fetish. But most of the time clopfics about it don't go into what happens next, so I wanted to give at least a quick glimpse of the future. Furthermore I thought it would seem a little too dark if I left it in suspense, so I added some optional fluff. Glad you liked it.
Man, the chapter was funny and sexy, especially RD's reaction to Rarity getting "cooties" and how Rarity acted as if she was still in a detective novel even when she was rutting the stallions.
The epilogue was funny, especially with how destructive the foals are, the fact that Rarity somehow managed to marry the three guards (with each of them showing varying degrees of enjoying being Rarity's husband), and the fact that Rarity loves her foals despite their violent tendencies like Lois from Malcomlm in the Middle. You get a fav.
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Thank you kindly! I tried to be as quick as possible for the epilogue, since this story was meant to be clop only, but I couldn't help but sprinkle some story on top of it.
I have to say, I've read all your stuff so far and I've enjoyed most of it. I'd say that your clop is a guilty pleasure if mine. Keep it up.
But in the previous paragraph you said the two were a colt and a filly
... I smell a changeling infestation
Anyway, I can only commend Rarity's approach to solving mysteries; her methods seem to be quite effective in extracting information... among other, less intangible things
6875631
Proud to be a guilty pleasure, gives me warm fillings. Will continue to provide, don't worry about that. Writing silly stories is really too fun!
6876185
Ops, I forgot that in English grammar the masculine doesn't overwrite the feminine. In my language when you have two genders in one phrase you refer to both as masculine. Thanks for the catch!
6876451
The masculine does overwrite the feminine in English, but only sometimes. For example, it's perfectly grammatical to refer to a mix of boys and girls as guys, but it's incorrect to refer to a mix of genders as men.
English is just inconsistent like that
Only read the epilogue. Have a like, though
6877043
Well I'll forgive English for having some inconsistencies, it's still one of the easiest languages to learn. When you compare it to Spanish or French or German, you can see how streamlined the grammar rules are. Still have much to learn though.
6877421
That's like eating desert before the main course! You monster! Thanks for the like in any case, hope it was sweet enough for you.
6877616 english is a bitch XD seriously, you can spell Fish "GHOTI" XD
This was probably one of the best stories in this category of fetish I have read in a long time I'm so glad you are here keeping the impregnation alive.
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I had to look that up, it's a good example of why I have still so many problems with English: it's not a phonetic language, while I learned it by ear first. Nightmare I tells you.
6877984
Thanks for the compliment, really happy you like it so much! But frankly I don't think this story holds a candle to some of the best out there, like Tribute, or The Milking Chamber. Those don't go as far as I did into the impregnation fetish, but I still recommend you try them if you didn't already. In any case, I aim to please, so if you enjoyed it to this point I take it as a big win. Cheers!
This gave me a boner in the middle of class
6878514 Ehh Milking Chamber wasn't my favorite in the impregnation category but honestly that was not the main focus of that fic. I haven't read Tribute and am eager to thank you for the recomindation even if I still think your fics overall are the best.
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Tribute is an awesome fic, even if impreg is not the focus as well, you should like it. I think it might be my favorite clopfic on this site. I took a lot of inspiration from it.
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Look out, teachers might make you read it out loud if they see you distracted. Depending on your location (a simple classroom or an amphitheater) that could be pretty bad. Pretty good exposure though, I won't complain!
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I didn't like the epilogue because it ruined the entire illusion that Rarity uses whomever she please to please herself. I don't find it cute in the least having best pony settle down with three low-tier guard stallions and not sell away her kids for cash. In fact, I find that notion absolutely disgusting. It's like you don't even understand how consensual-gangbang-impregnation works...
Oh well, I'll just erase that chapter from my mind and pretend you're a competent writer, thanks.
6878514 XD
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Oh, you're one of those people. Well if you can enjoy the first chapter have at it, but if you want things to be super dark and grim, you won't find that with my stories. You might want to look for another clop provider.
Unexpected but not unwelcome. Great premise and an interesting climax.(Pun not intended)
Maybe I'm just a sap, but I absolutely love these types of endings.
Bravo, good sir.
I'd like to say that this conforms to my favorite fetish exactly; vanilla impregnation that is unwanted by the female and/or male, but without it involving rape.
The dirty talk helped, too~
6879268
I'm still pissed off I couldn't do the premise full justice, writing the whole thing in a noir style, but at least I had fun with it. Thank you for the compliment!
6879304
I love fluffy cutesy endings, I'm 100% sappy. Even my story with a dark tag finished with an adorable tone, full of babies, kisses and a sprinkle of murderous intents.
6879513
It's one of my favorite combos too, I find that it's way too rare on this site. Glad I could scratch that itch!
Wait, that sounds really dirty...
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Wonderful as always.
6879231
Yep, definitely one of those people.
Sorry, I don't fit into to the hugbox norm called the mlp fandom. I guess not all people can be part of the hivemind, but thanks for relaying you prefer to ignore throwing in even a teeny bit of realism (aka, super dark and grim, by your dictionary definition). I'll keep that in mind.
6879535 do you know of any other stories with cutesy endings such as this?
6879770
And we'll keep in mind that you think Rarity selling off her children is "realism".
This is a really well written story. Good job!
6879770 In what world is the mare of fab selling her children considered realism? That's the most out of character and impossible thing she could do with her kids, you know, aside from killing them supcakes style.
But I think you would be into that kind of thing.
6879770
Realism doesn't necessarily always have to mean grim and fire and brimstone all the time. If you're into those stories, more power to you, but I wouldn't fault the author for not writing a 'bad end'.
I would consider the epilogue optional anyways
6880122
In a clopfic I don't think I do, but I'm sure there are many out there. I bet there are some Twilestia fics with this kind of ending, that ship is ripe for fluff and rainbows.
6880562
Happy you enjoyed it!
6880798
Yep, it's optional fluff for those that are curious about what happens next, that's why I put it in a separate chapter.
Of course Rarity would keep the kids, as befits her generous spirit. Though marrying the fathers... She probably pressganged them into it.
6879535 No problem devourer of armadillos. Mixing comedy with clop is a difficult thing to do. But when done right it's fantastic.
6880927
And read too many clopfics. I'm very aware of how a real cervix works, I've studied animal husbandry for years and I've had hands on experiences with the internal organs of farm animals (ever seen how you do an ultrasound on a cow?). But if I have to choose between facts and kinks when writing smut I'll always go with kink.
6880997
I see her as a generous but practical lady. She would care for her offspring, but would know she's going to need help to raise them. As for how she worked things out with the stallions, I'll let people imagine it. I didn't even write specifically that she married them, you think what you want on that one.
6880122
Actually I went into my favorite folder to see if I could find any, and I remembered Eternally Loved. It's an awesome impreg fic with an epilogue that's both cuter and more complete than mine. Check it out!
This was amusing at places, but mostly an enjoyable read. Also, a nice little addition in the bonus scene, was pretty adorable.
Fun though, 3 foals, 3 different fathers, one night.
Magic! Ain't gonna explain shit
This was a lot of fun. There aren't nearly enough good impregnation clopfics.
6882170
Actually, having multiple kids that are each from different fathers in a single pregnancy is possible in real life. It's certainly very rare, but it CAN happen.
*Looks down* Oh...Well...Alright fine I guess was ridiculously hot sheesh.
Good stuff, I caught a few spelling errors here and there but certainly nothing game breaking. Keep up the good work and always remember the peanut butter.
6882328 Huh. The more you know!
6882395
Still some errors? I will have a look tomorrow to try and find them all, thanks for warning me!
6882170
Rarity is very generous, she knows how to share with everyone, even with her ovules. Holy crap that sounds weird.
6882328
Impreg group deserves more entries, that's for sure. I'll do my part, writing one shots between updating my two stories, until I draw my last breath! FOR PONY!
6882445
Awesome, I'm very glad to hear that. And I do appreciate the epilogues as well. In my opinion, the best kinds of impreg stories are the ones that show the results. ^_^
I'm locked n' loaded!
6881324 Will do! :D
6882445 That... Welp. Yeah, makes sense. She just didn't think this one though the whole way since she knew the risks yet went for it anyway
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6878514
But that is exactly what happens in the horse. A stallion inseminates in the uterus of the mare. That is what the flare is for, it widens and blocks the cervix so that the semen stays in the uterus. So, not watching too much hentai or reading clopfics, just anatomically correct biology.