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Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Jan 2nd, 2018

I have to say this is a good read. can't wait for the gore and sex... parts for this fiction. very promising.

Nice story.



If that ass wipe Hamster_Master comment this story again just take no notices of him.

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*If that asswipe Hamster_Master comments on this story again, just ignore him.

Still messing up that grammar, eh?
You're welcome.

I enjoy reading this and can't wait for more.

The only problem i have is when he and the priest were talking i couldn't understand can you add a translation for it. Thx.

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I will think about it. But there is a site that I used to translate for it so if I don't you can translate.

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... I can never seem to avoid you when I just want to have a good time...

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I read a lot of shitfics. You're going to need to be more specific.

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Oh that leaking hemorrhoid. I forgot about that, uh, story.

Huh, i've never seen a Sauron displaced before (Not the real Sauron, but someone who dressed up like him):twilightsmile:

This is gonna be interesting:pinkiehappy:

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I will take liberties when it comes to his power seeing as he can perform great acts of magic and will listen to any input on his powers.

8725452 Well, you kinda have to take liberties with his powers. Otherwise, assuming he's not the best guy, would easily CRUSH Twilight, Celestia, Luna and Cadence.

Just hope you don't nerf him too much. Sauron (in Tolkien) is supposed to be powerful, at least more-so than your average hu/man.

YOU FOR MORDOR YOU FIGHT FOR THE DARK LORD.

Oh Lord Sharon let me be your servant and make your Enemies fear you so much i can make a army of uruk that can cut down enemies like a scythe in wheat.

I wish to add characters to the story those I have trouble thinking them up. So if you wish to add your own characters then feel free those I will place restrictions.

1, No reformed Changelings.

2, religious fanatics like nightmare moon cultist are will be allowed as the story progresses.

3, No Caribou I will be strict on that unless you provide a good reason.

4, Any other Ocs you add must have a reason to join or to be dominated.

I wish you luck.

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Will those characters be part of your story permanently or can it be temporally?

Ether as long as it makes sense

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quite guessing on the no Caribou rule. Is that due to what the main story with them is because to my knowledge they were supposed to be more like Norse riders instead of sex-crazed feeds. You could have them be that or like Warhammer Norsca for SAG.

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Yes that was the plan but because of FOE noterity and reputation I thought it best exclude them till I hammer things out then reintroduce them as a group like the Vikings or Saxons raiding from land or sea

I wonder. Will the witch King turn Bitter's castle into Carn Dum or something more like Minas Morgul?

Carn dum as each nazgul will have a part of the isle to rule over as a overlord of the region and minith morgul was just there main strong hold for the nazgul.

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But curn dum was his capital when he angmar. So I see that bitter's being the capital of his region.

Get an editor, your grammar sucks balls.

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I'm a 6'2, 196lb brown man in a land of "socially progressive" hobbits. I don't blend in. At all.

To be honest, you didn't portray the Witch King of Angmar properly. He isn't the ruthless monster that he truly is. The Witch King of Angmar doesn't thank people and the grammer errors so you should find a editor. Not trying to put you down. It's just my critique.

No offense, but your story’s bad.

Another displaced another down vote.

*Feels for pulse* *sigh* it’s dead Jim

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Darkness, Evil, Mordor. My Lord Damien. We will fight. Hail HYDRA.

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Non-reformed Changelings that produce their own love. The love of money. Mercenaries hired by Diamion to spy on the other lords.

you do no i do not like rape and slavery right :ajbemused:

I just finished readind it it is great i hope the dark lord takes canterlot too

Don't give up on the story keep it going

Not often do I see a Sauron Displaced story.

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