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Pen Dragon


"A new world awaits for you... A new beginning... With infinite possibilities... Until all six are united as one..." - Death

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He was Chieftain of the Brute Armada and had at one point conquered Equestria with the aid of Discord, but was imprisoned in a capsule by Discord, who had betrayed them long ago. Now that he is free he'll finish what he has started a millennium ago.

Takes place after Season Six

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 23 )

7871173 Well it is only the first chapter and if I had violence right off the bat I don't think it would be that good honestly

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I'm not implying I would unironically read a fic with this kind of tag-salad, I was referring to the Chieftain series of tanks.

7871215 There aren't that many stories about them and figured it would be cool to add them for once.

7871217 or you just thinking bout getting halo wars 2 this year when playing atriox and his banished army hmm.

7871241 Not really... I haven't even thought about getting the game.

7871247 Never been a fan of Strategy games

Good chapter can you do more

Hmm, not bad. Could use a bit slower off a pace in places, but not bad.

I eagerly await for Thorax to get a hammer shoved up his ass.

Hmmm, off to a bit of a strange-ish start, but I am definitely down for more:pinkiehappy:

Good chapters can't wait for more

Nice chapter.

You gonna get your ass whooped, Suicune.

A warhammer, up Thorax's butt, make it happen.

I have a hard time to get used to the new Thorax, I like the new changelings while I prefer the old once, but I can't get used to Thorax.
Maybe I just think it was a bit to chlichee that the first one that wanted to change, suddenly transformed into raindeer godlike Changeling.
Oh and I think I'm going to try this story even if I don't know that guy. Displaced can be good if they are done right and withouth ghost guides, knowledge about the show or...I forgot the third thing.

This may be the only time i will say this, but i'm starting to respect the Jiralhanae chieftain. If this continues on for a little bit more, i will start to respect them more (If he don't do anything drastic.)

My good sir/madam,

You had my curiosity but now you have my attention. Please do continue

Is this story dead?:pinkiesad2:

I see "Crossover" + "Adventure" tags = COOL You got me in already!
I see "s3x" + "romance" tags => Muh! I can work with that if the story's legit (= good Storytelling).
I see picture... :rainbowhuh: + "s3x" + "romance" => :pinkiegasp: WHAAAAAH ?!

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It is on a hiatus at the moment, I'll probably get back to it when I'm not busy working on other stories

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