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Raptormon132


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Luke Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi talk about the tragic story of Tempest Shadow together.

This is a Star Wars/MLP crossover short-fic in celebration of the MLP movie soon to be released in theaters this October.
And Spoiler warning for those who don't want to know about the character.

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Comments ( 11 )

This was most impressive. I would have never have compared Tempest Shadow to Darth Vader. And I'm a huge Star Wars fan.

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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

Good little one-shot! Loved the many references to Star Wars. You're indeed right. Tempest is indeed almost like Darth Vader.

is there a AS in the story ?

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AS? What's an "AS"? :applejackunsure:

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Asperger, Autistic...

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Oh. Well, to answer your question from before: No, there isn't. As far as I know, neither Luke or Obi-wan are anything of a sort.

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I just read your review of my story.
I should tell you that many bronies have labeled Tempest Shadow as the Darth Vader of MLP due to her and Darth Vader's backstories being remarkably similar. In fact, I even speculate that much of Tempest Shadow's character was based on Darth Vader. I should tell you that I have written another Darth Vader/Tempest Shadow story. It's called "I Will Not Fail", and it's an alternate scenario story on what if Darth Vader was part of MLP: The Movie, and was in league with The Storm King.

EI Will Not Fail
Tempest Shadow gets a visit from none other that the dark lord himself, Darth Vader.
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I based the story on an image created by EJLightning007arts, and I even got permission to use that same image from EJLightning007arts himself. As a result, I got demands from readers to make squeals to it, and I even asked EJLightning007arts if he could make title images of each sequel story, and he did. If you're interested, have a read. Also, take the time to watch Star Wars more too, to understand it better.

"I know there's good inside them. I can bring both my father and Tempest into the light I'm sure of it!"


"Burry your feelings Luke. You'll have to face both her and your father or the Storm King will use your feelings for his own plans."

Sometime later, after reading about Tempest Shadow's backstory on the MLP wiki, Luke was shocked at what he had just discovered about both Fizzlepop Berrytwist and Tempest Shadow backgrounds. To his great shock and disbelief, he found out that both Fizzlepop Berrytwist and Tempest Shadow were one and the same. To find out the whole truth, he returns to Obi-Wan, this time on the swamp planet of Dagobah to question on what he told him to get more information on Fizzlepop Berrytwist and Tempest Shadow, and to find out the reason how a gifted, good unicorn fell to such evil.

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I like how Luke looks up the MLP Wiki on the holonet.:rainbowlaugh:
Got a solid laugh out of me!:rainbowlaugh:

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