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Futile Task
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Lovely stuff so far! I hope you continue!
Oooh, def gonna be keeping an eye on this one!
Dang someone made their sequel before I could...
oh well... Wonder how much of different direction they took.
OKAY MUCH different direction than what I was going to do. Still looks interesting. I guess mine would be the darker sequel and yours would be the lighter?
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Yeah, it's going to be a light sequel, I have my own preferences when it comes to vore, but I would still encourage you to write your own, after all, alternate universe's are a thing, and you may make a better sequel then me, after all this is my first time writing vore.
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I do plan on continuing, after all this is proving to be really fun, and I'm almost done with chapter two so soon the real fun will begin.
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I am just going to say that it is really weird seeing you comment on one of my stories after seeing you comment on many a vore pic and fic I like, still though, thank you.
Why don't you have the Dark tag ?
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It's not going to be as dark as the last fic, much more light hearted really, thus I felt that it didn't need the dark tag.
Unless that's a required thing for vore fics, in which case I will add, but only if it is required.
While I won't fave this, since vore isn't one of my fetishes, I think I will be tracking it, mostly for the lightheartedness and the mind control.
Since Celestia bringing back the dead explains away the plothole of how they can stick around with their original personalities (and is something I can see happening), I'll assume that THAT'S what the AU tag is for (not the bringing back the dead, AJ's parents being alive).
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Yeah, pretty much, that and other things.
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And also may I say, thanks to your profile pic, I can never imagine you saying anything you write down in anything but the most happy of voices.
8148058 I do hope it's a happy Starlight voice.
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Yeah, yeah it is a happy Starlight voice.
8148070 Excellent.
She IS best pony after all.
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One of them anyway.
8148365 Yeah.
RD and Scoots exist
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So do Celestia and Luna.
Interesting lore...I liked the mental image of the changelings cuddling their former prey.
I realize that's not likely to be included given the focus of THIS story, but I'd still like to see that at some point.
Maybe as a side-story to this once it's complete.
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Maybe, maybe not, we shall see, I know I am going to be going to a few weird places with this fic, so Faust and Metamorphosis being brought back may come up.
please please please have a regular ling gobble celestia! I love preds smaller than their prey~
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I was planning on it, after all Luna did call dibs on Thorax so.
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Well to an extent its already written... but too busy with finals and stuff to edit it and things. if you want a link I could show you it in a pm.
A brilliant, suggestive name.
Nice chapter.
I'm curious what might happen next.
(Aside from filling some bellies.)
I think I found an typo here.
Shouldn't that be "no"?
Well now that we know that the ponies can come back from being vored and digested then I can't wait to see what happens next, any chance that you could bring in other ponies besides the Mane 6, Starlight and the Two Princess sisters, maybe like say Sunset Shimmer, Trixie Lulamoon or maybe the CMC, heck it would be cool to see the Human Mane 6 (that's with Sci-Twi and not Sunset) go through this if you could make it possible.
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I tend to like a bit of story with my porn, makes it more enjoyable.
Awwww... The first story was so good, and this ruins it for me. =< Would have liked this story to keep the Willing, Fatal-Vore theme with Celestia and Luna being Perma devoured. =<
8146620 Oooo, I'd read that. =3
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Well, to each their own, glad you gave it a look though.
8161858 Yeah, sorry. =<
8162040
No hard feelings.
waaaayyyy too much explaining and not enough eating.
I'm not a fan of fatal vore, so this is a good alternative for me, but the amount of explaining needed to justify why they're not dead, and Celestia just bringing back the dead...
oof, not my favorite. sorry.
Damn that was GREAT, I can't wait to see what happens next, also will Fluttershy get to Discord and Ask/Order him to free the Princesses mother and Chrysalis mother also from where he trapped them?
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Thank you for the compliment, also cant comment on Fluttershy, that would be spoiling the fun.
Another amazing entry...or should I say entrée ....into this amazing story. I can't wait to see where it goes!
How is it that a vore story manages to be adorable as it really is?
Also, any plans to include ponies outside of the mane 6 and the princesses?
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Many, many plans, and thank you, I was trying for cute in some instances.
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I kind of want to see the CMC and Diamond Tiara
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I hope to see more of this 
yay~
Is it going to be continued?
This certainly promises to be amusing, if nothing else. :)
Thorax is a she??
never
quiet
shouldn't this be 'the' and not she?
out
-
Please get a proofreader. Much as I enjoy vore this is driving my inner grammar nazi nuts.
*no
^no
wiped
*word not needed.
'erased' or 'lost' could replace all of that.
"people" should have an 's' at the end in this case.
should be 'phew!' "Few" is referring to a vague small amount.
Will this be continued?
The Apple parents being alive, and virtually every pony who has died on accident being alive, I feel rather makes this too silly and weirdly-perfect in how the setting works. It would work better I think if Celestia and Luna were imperfect at catching souls, so background ponies could die to a gorbfest permanently.
Well, it's been a while, and frankly, I think you should at least set this to On Hiatus. It stopped just as it was really hitting any payoff from its buildup.