Interesting lore...I liked the mental image of the changelings cuddling their former prey.

“Wait.....couldn't Discord fix all this, I mean he is on our side now,” said Twilight.
“I think he is afraid of what they will do to him if he frees them,” said Luna.
“I'll have a talk with him,” said Fluttershy, a determined look on her face as she spoke.

I realize that's not likely to be included given the focus of THIS story, but I'd still like to see that at some point.
Maybe as a side-story to this once it's complete.

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Maybe, maybe not, we shall see, I know I am going to be going to a few weird places with this fic, so Faust and Metamorphosis being brought back may come up.

please please please have a regular ling gobble celestia! I love preds smaller than their prey~

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I was planning on it, after all Luna did call dibs on Thorax so.

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Well to an extent its already written... but too busy with finals and stuff to edit it and things. if you want a link I could show you it in a pm.

And during that time, a brilliant mare by the name of....Suggestive Intent, thought of a brilliant idea.

A brilliant, suggestive name.

Nice chapter.
I'm curious what might happen next.
(Aside from filling some bellies.)

I think I found an typo here.

there is really know history from before Equestria's founding.

Shouldn't that be "no"?

Well now that we know that the ponies can come back from being vored and digested then I can't wait to see what happens next, any chance that you could bring in other ponies besides the Mane 6, Starlight and the Two Princess sisters, maybe like say Sunset Shimmer, Trixie Lulamoon or maybe the CMC, heck it would be cool to see the Human Mane 6 (that's with Sci-Twi and not Sunset) go through this if you could make it possible.

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I tend to like a bit of story with my porn, makes it more enjoyable.

Awwww... The first story was so good, and this ruins it for me. =< Would have liked this story to keep the Willing, Fatal-Vore theme with Celestia and Luna being Perma devoured. =<

8146620 Oooo, I'd read that. =3

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Well, to each their own, glad you gave it a look though.

8161858 Yeah, sorry. =<

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No hard feelings.

waaaayyyy too much explaining and not enough eating.

I'm not a fan of fatal vore, so this is a good alternative for me, but the amount of explaining needed to justify why they're not dead, and Celestia just bringing back the dead...

oof, not my favorite. sorry.

Thorax hesitated, then sighed, feeling Starlight's reassuring hoof on her back, which brought him comfort as he spoke.

Thorax is a she??

“Well that was something she ever mentioned,” said Chitten, “so Metamorphosis was actually Chrysalis's mother?”

never

“Um....” said a quite voice, everyone looking to see Fluttershy looking at them all, the changeling that had eaten her snuggled up close to her side as she normally timid mare spoke.

quiet

er snuggled up close to her side as she normally timid mare spoke.

shouldn't this be 'the' and not she?

the maid demanded to have a chance to try it our,

out
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Please get a proofreader. Much as I enjoy vore this is driving my inner grammar nazi nuts.

for as you *known doubt have realized, there is really ^know history from before Equestria's founding.”

*no
^no

“I always just figured Discord whipped out a lot of the history from before that time,” said Twilight, “he doesn't care much for books.”

wiped

“While that is true for some of it,” said Celestia, “not all of the history was wiped *it out by him.

*word not needed.
'erased' or 'lost' could replace all of that.

“And as it would seem,” said Celestia, “Chrysalis set out to re-write changeling history as well, though thanks to Starlight, now we can begin repairing the damaged relations between our two people.”

"people" should have an 's' at the end in this case.

Few, k that's the history lesson over and done with, now onto the first bit of vore in this story.

should be 'phew!' "Few" is referring to a vague small amount.