OKAY MUCH different direction than what I was going to do. Still looks interesting. I guess mine would be the darker sequel and yours would be the lighter?
8146620 Yeah, it's going to be a light sequel, I have my own preferences when it comes to vore, but I would still encourage you to write your own, after all, alternate universe's are a thing, and you may make a better sequel then me, after all this is my first time writing vore.
8146421 I do plan on continuing, after all this is proving to be really fun, and I'm almost done with chapter two so soon the real fun will begin.
8146448 I am just going to say that it is really weird seeing you comment on one of my stories after seeing you comment on many a vore pic and fic I like, still though, thank you.
While I won't fave this, since vore isn't one of my fetishes, I think I will be tracking it, mostly for the lightheartedness and the mind control.
“Wait what....” said Starlight, before turning to Applejack and pointing an acusitory hoof at her. “When Apple Bloom got her cutie mark you said that if her parents were there they would be proud of her, doesn't that mean they are dead?” “Uh....no,” said Applejack, looking at her with a puzzled look, “our parents travel the world helping out other farmers with their crops. They visit any chance they get, and send letters almost weekly.”
Since Celestia bringing back the dead explains away the plothole of how they can stick around with their original personalities (and is something I can see happening), I'll assume that THAT'S what the AU tag is for (not the bringing back the dead, AJ's parents being alive).
8148041 And also may I say, thanks to your profile pic, I can never imagine you saying anything you write down in anything but the most happy of voices.
The Apple parents being alive, and virtually every pony who has died on accident being alive, I feel rather makes this too silly and weirdly-perfect in how the setting works. It would work better I think if Celestia and Luna were imperfect at catching souls, so background ponies could die to a gorbfest permanently.
Lovely stuff so far! I hope you continue!
Oooh, def gonna be keeping an eye on this one!
Dang someone made their sequel before I could...
oh well... Wonder how much of different direction they took.
OKAY MUCH different direction than what I was going to do. Still looks interesting. I guess mine would be the darker sequel and yours would be the lighter?
8146620
Yeah, it's going to be a light sequel, I have my own preferences when it comes to vore, but I would still encourage you to write your own, after all, alternate universe's are a thing, and you may make a better sequel then me, after all this is my first time writing vore.
8146421
I do plan on continuing, after all this is proving to be really fun, and I'm almost done with chapter two so soon the real fun will begin.
8146448
I am just going to say that it is really weird seeing you comment on one of my stories after seeing you comment on many a vore pic and fic I like, still though, thank you.
Why don't you have the Dark tag ?
8148023
It's not going to be as dark as the last fic, much more light hearted really, thus I felt that it didn't need the dark tag.
Unless that's a required thing for vore fics, in which case I will add, but only if it is required.
While I won't fave this, since vore isn't one of my fetishes, I think I will be tracking it, mostly for the lightheartedness and the mind control.
Since Celestia bringing back the dead explains away the plothole of how they can stick around with their original personalities (and is something I can see happening), I'll assume that THAT'S what the AU tag is for (not the bringing back the dead, AJ's parents being alive).
8148041
Yeah, pretty much, that and other things.
8148041
And also may I say, thanks to your profile pic, I can never imagine you saying anything you write down in anything but the most happy of voices.
8148058 I do hope it's a happy Starlight voice.
8148065
Yeah, yeah it is a happy Starlight voice.
8148070 Excellent.
She IS best pony after all.
8148074
One of them anyway.
8148365 Yeah.
RD and Scoots exist
8148371
So do Celestia and Luna.
This certainly promises to be amusing, if nothing else. :)
The Apple parents being alive, and virtually every pony who has died on accident being alive, I feel rather makes this too silly and weirdly-perfect in how the setting works. It would work better I think if Celestia and Luna were imperfect at catching souls, so background ponies could die to a gorbfest permanently.