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Well at least it was only in the dream and not real, I do hope that this isn't going to end up like the first story, I really don't want to see Luna or Celestia die.
It would seem even a princess can't resist such royal treatment of such a imperial belly~
Ooooo, please let this be like the first story. ^w^ Would be so awesome if it is.
Yeah, I'm with dusk Star Shine on this one.
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Even though it was Starlight who you have as your Avatar.
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I don't really see what that has to do with anything.
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It was meant as a joke, after all in the first story it was Starlight who took the Elements of Harmony to the Neo-Changeling Hive and they were vored and digested then by the changelings leaving only their souls in the Changelings stomachs. Which I still find very odd since Changelings only eat love or lust, how do they even have a stomach or stomach acid that can digest living ponies.
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I just chalk that up to AU fanfiction weirdness
Well I certanly hope this will be like the first story wouldnt make sense for it too be a sequel otherwise .
And the writing is as good as the first one so im looking forward for further chapters^^.
well it looks like they will both eventually jump down the throat of the real Thorax on their own accord^^
Murrr... wish I could have that dream. <3
So then I guess we are to assume that The Changeling Gorbfest is to be canon? Twilight did stay with Thorax, then. I do hope all the digestion descriptions will be similar to The Changeling Gorbfest. I found those to be almost as entrancing as Thorax' throat is to Celestia.
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Yeah, I tagged this as a sequel story. However, I tried to approach it in such a way that you don't need to have read the first fic to enjoy this one.
Gods Damit you got me again, my heart was racing a mile a minute again reading this. Also, thanks for the renewed inspiration, it got me working on my own story again.
Sweet I'm glad this has continued! Can't wait for the next entry.
So that's it, no coming back for the Alicorns or anypony then unless they are able to use a spell while they are souls to reform themselves and then kick the changelings butts then.
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Sorry. I just really like it when they're gone forever. If you don't, that's alright too, but I won't change what I enjoy for someone else.
Based on chryssalis past succesrate im guessing the only thing she will get out of her dragon eating attemps is first hand knowlege that dragon digestion isnt nearly as plesant as changeling digestion.
Fantastic story btw
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Thanks!
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Don't worry, the birth rate is still higher than the gobble-up rate.
LOVED IT!!!!! ^W^
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Glad that you did! I knew that you'd like the grand finale.
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Heehe, oh yesh. X3 Heh, Poor Chrisi, beaten to the punch. =P
"And I, for one, welcome our new incect overlords"
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I've had a handful of vore dreams over the years. First one was when I was still a kid, though. Terrified me. Back then Star Wars: Shadows of the Empire was still a fairly new game. Dreamed I was Dash Rendar and was trying to fight a giant alpha lion with nothing other than the starting blaster. Didn't end well.
Dragons really chrysalis? Shouldn't you cast your eyes on a easier meal size? Like maybe Griffins?
8368691 My main issue isn't the permanence... it's that there's something missing in the whole scenario which ties it together.
I find myself asking certain questions: Why didn't Chrysalis ever use this clearly exceedingly effective method of conquest if her species was always capable of it? Why did Thorax appear so clearly to simply want this to be about mutual pleasure... then suddenly go on to conquest? Since Thorax and the rest have become Skittles Bugs, the reformation episode clearly took place... so why is he now apparently a cunning villain rather than the kindly, simple-minded dimwit?
I think I have a way to solve these issues: Chrysalis taking over and focusing on aggression turned them bit by bit into the black, hole-ridden bug monsters and removed their ability to get energy from swallowing ponies, since that would require the ponies to consent (because soul magic rules or whatever, anything like that instantly fixes the plotholes). Thorax would then be revealed to ALWAYS have had this cunning side and he wished to return to the old ways, but needed to overthrow Chrysalis.
He could explain this is a bit of an exposition-dump to Starlight, maybe in a prequel? And they could concoct the whole plan of his 'reformation' ahead of time, thus solving how the episode could still take place. And in return, Starlight (after being revealed as something of a vorarephile herself) would receive a long, slow devouring and digestion... maybe she'd want to enjoy being swallowed a number of times before melting away for good.
Now, all that's something you'd have to hint at in the first story and develop through this one, but it really would solidify the plotting.
Fun fact, Germany literally called it a "Food Orgy"
Though, we didn't use "Food", rather a word that means "to gulp or guzzle down food". Basically, eating hastily or sloppily.
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Wow, that definitely does paint a different image.
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Yeah, we got em swearing sometimes.
Y'know the time Fluttershy said "peeved"? She's actually pissed in the German dub.