After an arduously difficult month of battling hunger pangs, Spike is faced with an ultimatum: does he bite the bullet and swallow the risk to sate his hunger by devouring the CMC who graciously offered themselves to him? Or does he decline and suffer more days of hunger before finding a solution? The aftermath of both answers are colossal, but which one will our draconic hero take.
So yeah, this was a collaboration between me Supernova2015. Won't even lie, the way this played out was inspired by Hunger and Heat by Mass Driver.
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This isn't for me… so I'm just going to back out of the summary page slowly without leaving a dislike.
This was...underwhelming. I was expecting more with Spike's conflict, more setting for what was happening, more of an ending, et cetera. Very disappointing, downvote
This is nothing like Hunger and Heat.
I would've liked Spike to at least savor their rears...oh well. Also, the intro is pretty much just a justification instead of actual story and everypony is massively out of character.
How dare you all!!! Base Anonymous has spent ages to get it perfect. The least you all can do is give him respect.
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Or we would've ranted on and on about the story being bad in ways that held no substantive points, like saying it's bad just because it has Spike with no strict age definition or something
How dare we what? Critique a story that has genuine flaws that it would be ridiculous to simply overlook?
Seriously Supernova, chill out
If we were really being disrespectful, our comments would've been about Base, not the story
Spending effort and/or time on a story does not excuse one from criticism pertaining to it.
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yes.
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I'm aware that this story is the equivalent of a man baby flinging their shit with the accuracy of a blind toddler. Thanks for reminding me.
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Its a great story. You did a good job but not everything is perfect. I'm not trying to make it seem horrible. Bit you must realize that vore isnt everyones cup of tea. It is mine tho. The vore scene was to DIE for. Have a moustache!
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I'm glad you liked the story, especially the vore scene since I wasn't all that sure about it myself. And my comment was more of a jab at myself, not really an attack on you, not that I'm sure you thought of it like that.
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I was just worried that you felt bad and were gonna stop writing. You have a lot of potential for more vore stories. Please do a sequel to this! I want to know what happens next.
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I wasn't going to stop writing vore because I still have a lot I think I can bring to the table, and you can't bring food to the table if you stop cooking. As for a sequel, well, as you can see this is a request. But the requester did say that he wants a sequel to this, so the idea of a sequel isn't completely lost.
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Yaaaay
What the hell, Sweetie Belle?!