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AJtheRaven


Appledash shipper. Critical of everything. Except Appledash. Because Appledash.

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It's Spike's birthday, and his six best friends have promised to give him whatever present he wants. And not just any promise - a Pinkie Promise. An unbreakable promise.
Big mistake.
Now Spike is asking all of them to trade places with each other, to try living like each of their friends, for an entire day - and they have to act just like their friends, too. Also, yes, he does have a camera... so no one will be forgetting this anytime soon. Even more disturbingly, if they give up before the day is over, they have to pay Spike a fee of ten bits.
Applejack is furious. Rainbow Dash is trying (and failing) to stay casual. Twilight is thinking about just how many things could go wrong. Rarity is appalled. Fluttershy is downright terrified. Even Pinkie Pie is disenheartened.
Thirty days. A whole month of weirdness, mishaps, surprises, hilarity, and - in every case - failure.
This is going to be a wild ride.

(This is not my art. Link to cover artist's page: http://tomfraggle.deviantart.com/art/Mane-6-Looking-At-Us-or-You-471258622)

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Comments ( 49 )

when do you think the next part will be out?

7871044
Hmm, I don't know. I have a really important exam this week, so I'm doing a lot of studying. But I'm trying to write a little every day, so I'll do the next part as soon as I can! :)

Looks like a funny premise. I would have preferred if Twilight was the one doing farmwork, but it's fine.

7871057 ok I hope you do well on the exam

Sorry, but first in description you say "to try living like each of their friends, for an entire day", and then - "Thirty days. A whole month of ... ". So, which of these is true? A day or a whole month?

7872317 They are going to take turns. Each of them has to spend one day as one of the other 5. That is actually smart of Spike, as if was all 6 of them being one of the others all on the same day, true that would only take 5 days, but it would be 5 days of utter chaos for Ponyville. By each doing it one at a time, it takes 30 days, but that is 30 days of minor confusion. Minor confusion is much preferred to utter chaos for the citizens of Ponyville.

Rainbow Dash as Rarity: "I don't know why Darling, but I think I like this." (Rainbow Dash always dresses in style)
Applejack as Pinkie Pie: "I'm sure a klutz today." (Who's a silly pony...)

Oh, and I wonder what Discord will make of it if one of his and Fluttershy's scheduled tea parties takes place on a day when somepony else is Fluttershy, or when Fluttershy is somepony else.

7871635
Oh, she will be!! Each of the ponies is going to try living like each of their friends for one day. So twilight will spend five days living like her five friends, one day for each friend. And it'll be the same for each of the Mane Six:)

7872317
So actually both are true, lol. Each pony will try living like her friends for a whole day each, so that'll be five days for five different ponies that they are imitating. And since six of them are each going to try living like their five friends for one day each, that's thirty days. Sorry if I wasn't clear enough... If you can think of a way I could phrase it better, I'm up for suggestions:)

7873092
My thoughts exactly. And oh my Celestia, what a wonderful idea about Discord. Would you mind if I used that? (I would give you credit of course:D)

7873096
Well then! This is going to be fun! In that episode when AJ goes with Rarity to the spa, and Twilight and Spike try some farmwork, I had hoped to see her try and buck trees... sadly it didn't happen.

7873110 Feel free. Ideas I have. Writing skill I don't. Essay questions were terrible for me back in school. Tests I should have been getting 90-100 on I'd be stuck only getting 75-85.

7873156
Yeah, I thought the same thing! And the best part is the rules of the game won't let Twilight use her magic, so she'll have to do all the farm work by hoof:D

7873326
Lol? thank you so much!

You know, I believe this is the first time I liked a story before I read it. This one's going straight into the high priority shelf.

7881993
Wow, thank you! I'm flattered!:ajsmug:

Don't have the same pony switched two days in a row.
One sort of fun thing would be if the pony who was switched was the next to be switched.
So, that would mean that the next chapter would be about Pinkie trying to be one of her friends for the day. (But not Pinkie as Twilight. In fact, you should save that one for the end. Let Spike's month end the reverse of how it began.)

Oh please don't let this story be one of the good ones that fade into incomplete territory. Please! :unsuresweetie:

Still, I'm really liking this. The only problem is that the girls, or Spike for that matter, can no longer call off the whole challenge. With that Pinkie Promise in play, they're forced to do nothing but go along with it. Let's just hope that there's a plus side at the end of this.

Does the sudden AJ/Dash shipping free kiss add something to this fanfic? And/Or is it for the sake of it, out of the blue and without background?
About the chapter in general, having to tend to the bakery, re-bake everything and taking care of the foals at the same time sure was too much for one pony. I think even Pinkie couldn't. The Cakes should get an oven who can be set on stopping itself as the timer gets to 00:00!

7929164
Haha, I'll try not to let it fade away! ;) yeah, good observation. I guess the plus side is that they'll all gain a greater appreciation of how hard they all work on their respective jobs? Hmmmm.

7929213
Nah, it doesn't really add anything, I have to admit I just added that for my own enjoyment. Although in my defense it's not entirely out of nowhere - I did mention in the first chapter that there would be a tiny bit of appledash shipping.
You could be right. It does seem like a lot of work even for pinkie pie.. but, I mean, not every day would be like that. This day in particular, Twilight just got really unlucky because the Cakes had to leave. :twilightsheepish:

7931663
I didn't mean the author note. I meant story wise. I am not against shipping but I'm growing weary of seeing dozens of fics containing backgroundless shipping.

7931706
Ahhhh, I see. Well, I'm trying not to mention it too much. This chapter I really only mentioned it very briefly so I could make the joke about turning rainbow into a stammering puddle. In future chapters, I'll really only touch on it every so often and there will probably be chapters where I don't actually mention it all. I guess I could try to just emphasize how strong their friendship is rather than putting so much emphasis on them being marefriends, though.

7931711
I agree with showing the strength of their bond instead of just to write "kiss".

They do have an out. They just have to give Spike 10 Bits for each one they feel there is no way they could pull off. So, Spike could earn 300 Bits if they all decide to quit. But I don't think AJ or Dash would quit. Except Dash as Fluttershy. She'll have the 10 Bits ready for that one to come up. (Repeat of the Cutie Mark Mixup? Those animals tried to cook her!) Just like how Fluttershy would not want to deal with being Pinkie. (too many ponies to deal with)

7931750
They definitely do have an out, but I think it would be cheating for me if I let them take it. That would just be a way for me to get out of writing hard chapters. So I'll make it so that they still have to try.

7939938 True. But if Rainbow does just pay up right when Spike selects Rainbow as Fluttershy (Rainbow: Here's your 10 Bits. I'm not letting Angel and his mob get another chance at me), that means Spike picks again. Thus Ponyville does NOT get a break from the craziness, but it will be over a day sooner.

I also forsee that AJ as Rarity will go a bit different that it did during the Cutie Mark Swap. After all, we know that AJ can do the high society voice and manners when she needs to.

The craziest ones will be when they have to be Twilight. Especially Rarity. She'll WANT to act as she thinks a Princess should, but that's not how Twilight acts. Will Spike fault her for it, or will he be too lenient with the mare he adores?

7939975
Wow, you're coming up with some great questions here. You're right about twilight, I never even thought about that! Hmm...

7948275 And Rarity or Rainbow as AJ will be more a test for AJ than Rarity or Rainbow: How long can AJ hold her temper watching her friends imitating the way she talks? My guess: ...Twilight, you do have that FREEZE spell ready, right?

7948523
Oh my GOODNESS. I literally never thought about that! Suddenly, a whole new world of possibilities has opened before me... wow. The chapter where Rainbow has to imitate AJ is going to be absolutely hilarious.

7948939 Glad to be of assistance. Ideas I have many, but writing talent I have not. My cutie mark is about knowing trivia and looking up trivia. Nothing to do with writing.

It helps that I have over 3 decades of TV viewing and reading stuff to pull ideas from. (I'll be 40 in a little over a year)

7948959
That is super cool. Not many people have that talent. :) and I bet that does help! what tv do you like to watch?

7949060 Growing up I watched Sesame Street, Card Sharks, Wheel of Fortune, Jeopardy, Transformers, GI Joe, MASK, MLP, Smurfs, Wuzzles, Gummi Bears, Tailspin, Sonic the Hedgehog, 3-2-1 Contact, Square One, Carmen Sandiego (cartoon and the two live action game shows), TMNT, Power Rangers, Star Trek (TOS, TAS, TNG, DS9, VYG, ENT), various documentaries on PBS (I really enjoyed the travel ones with Michael Palin), Sailor Moon, Pokémon, and many other shows. These days, I seem to like watching the Food and History shows on Travel Channel and Food Network. I also like Legends of Tomorrow, and am very anxiously waiting for new episodes of Doctor Who.

7949789
Oh, I used to watch some of those! Jeopardy and Sesame Street were my faves. :) and DOCTOR WHO! Yes! I'm so excited to see the new companion in action. I miss Clara though. But Donna was my favorite. ;)

let pinkie have a dragon suit that looks the same as spike.......lol.

also, this is just a request as well.

1) all of them make spike go one whole day acting as each of them.

consider it as payback.

it will be hilarious to see spike taking care of children, making dresses, clearing the clouds by acting as rainbow dash.......etc.

don't forget about the cutie mark crusaders as well.

8034683 Oooh, good idea! Maybe I'll turn that into a sequel story that connects to this one. I'll definitely take your request! ;)

8053512
Oh, they will, don't worry. And Rainbow is totally gonna blow it and make AJ super mad;)

8054641
Oh man, I have no idea. I've been so busy... I'll get it up as fast as possible, I swear. But I really have no idea.

8061043
No worries! I'm just glad to know there are people who actually care about my writing,haha. And just so you know, it may be a while before I update this story, but I have a new one coming out on April first and another one a few days after that, so once those are done I promise I will try to get to work on this one again! Thanks for encouraging me!

8062684
Aww thanks! That's really sweet! I'm actually really excited to get back to writing this;)

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