Twilight and Rarity decide to spend the evening together, but Twilight is plagued by a weird feeling that she can't quite name which sends a shiver up her spine every time she stares at Rarity out of the corner of her eye. Which is very often. What she can say is that Rarity is looking a lot more attractive tonight than usual.
Twilight's friends, determined to help Twilight and Rarity hook up, pull out all the stops to ensure that the two of them have a perfect evening. And with a little bit of help from strange places, including taking suggestions from an alligator and writing to the Princesses, Twilight and Rarity's friends just might succeed...
Written for Monochromatic's RariTwi contest
Cover art (and proofreading!) provided by the great and powerful Multiversecrrrrrrrrruise! I'm indebted to you!!! :D
(Deviantart: http://wordsandpunctuation.deviantart.com/)
That ending is just sooo satisfying!!
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Thank you so much. That cover art is so satisfying
Gosh, that was sweet
! Oh, and that ending too! This one left me feeling pretty good.
By the by, just wanted to point this out:
Besides that, I don't think there were any other errors.
truth be told i half expect for twilight to ask for rarity hand and let the girls that they been date each other 2 week after freeing luna
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Thanks!! :) I'll go fix that now.
8169283 sequel!!!!!!!!!!
Naaawwww!
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Why the "naw"? Were you expecting a different ending?
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naaaw = daaw +nggh - NSFW overtones
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Oooh, hehe
As a judge for this contest, this scares me.
Since Spike has moved on what are the chances of him and the CMC?
8169952
Maybe in a sequel!
That was so sweet! I was a little worried we were being set up for a fake-out, but instead you wrapped the whole thing up in a perfect bow.
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! And I fixed the mistake, thanks ;)
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Hmmmm... we'll see. ;)
8169464
Hope you enjoyed! :)
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lol. That was sorta my intention... hopefully I scared you in a good funny way and not a creepy way? If that makes sense?
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Um, high I guess? Although I personally don't see him really ending up with anyone, I guess I could see him with sweetie Belle or something.
Edit: oh wait, I just contradicted myself. Well, hopefully you know what I mean.
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Awww! Thanks!
8171970 enjoy the follow
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Dude you're the best. Thanks. ;)
8172018 no problem
8171974 You forgot the Mare to Stallion ratio.
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How does that come into play?
8173988 Herds' law?
8174238
... is that something I should know about in order to call myself a self-respecting pegasister?
8174748 Herd or harem like ex. Spike dating the CMC, Diamond Tiara, and Silver Spoon.
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...? Still confused... I may officially be an idiot.
Sooo cute! Everything that happened on the hill was just so perfect and cutely romantic!
I love how all of their friends are rooting for them, but Pinkie is just like "No, this (lack of shipping) ends NOW." and pulls out every stop she can think of short of grabbing both of their faces and saying "Now KISS!" It was perfect. Thank you for the nice fic!
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Awwww thanks!! Glad you enjoyed it :3
Ahhh!! so cute.
I love the addition of the rest of the friends in the bushes, just the right amount of humor added to a touching moment.
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Awww thanks! Glad you liked.
*Insert fangirl screech here*
Twilight and Rarity are me favorite ship
Fat isn't bad for you though, its the sugar. That's like ordering diet soda with your meal, it's actually worse for you. Unless your on a keto diet you don't need to watch fat content.
For your first foray, this is FANTASTIC!
Words can't describe how much I love this fic now that I've finally gotten around to it, but I'll give it a shot:
Hey, I'm in this picture and I don't like it. This is possibly the cutest and gayest line in the whole story, complete with Twilight's little slip on the third word. (If it does happen to be a type, don't fix it! As a hopeless queer with an excitable speech impediment, it was really cute!)
Now, you always go aces on every romance, and I'm relatively sure my so-called "Romance" shelf is really just a veiled "Everything AJtheRaven Has Ever Written And Made Me Cry About Shelf", but I can't express enough appreciation for the fact it seems all of Ponyville is rallying behind Twilight and Rarity, and it ramps up by encounter from Fluttershy using colour-coded flowers to Applejack using clever language surely a librarian should have noticed to Pinkie Pie frosting them cupcakes that were more or less a neon-lighted sign for "NOW KISS" (The "I spent two minutes frosting those hearts! Which is two minutes more than usual!" line was also very amusing.), but my absolute favorite was definitely this one:
This was not only super enchanting and atmospheric to read, but by the time I got my breath back, I had to stifle a giggle because these two nerds really can't take a hint and it really does take a spotlight and a signal from the whole galaxy to tell them they'd be just right for each other. All in all, this was a super satisfying, absolutely breathtaking read and takes the cake as one of my favorites from you!