• Member Since 28th Dec, 2016
  • offline last seen Jan 15th, 2020

AJtheRaven


Appledash shipper. Critical of everything. Except Appledash. Because Appledash.

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How do you tell somepony that you love them?
Rainbow Dash has no clue.
That's why she goes to see Applejack, who gives her some good old sound Apple family advice.
That's why she tells Fluttershy anyway.
That's why she tries to take Fluttershy on the perfect date, with some help and advice from her best friends.
That's why she realizes that you don't always have to tell your partner 'I love you' - you just need to show it, by doing your best to make them happy.
And if any of that happens to involve a long-awaited kiss, then that's a definite bonus.

(Link to cover artist's page: https://derpibooru.org/tags/artist-colon-nightmaremoons)

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Comments ( 24 )

7850021
Is that a good thing? ;)

I've never been much for shipping, but this was a genuinely great story. Funny, well written, and heartfelt from start to finish. I'm sure a more experienced writer would have some useful criticism to give, but not me.

I sincerely enjoyed that story!:pinkiehappy:I don't usually comment but I felt the need to thank you for putting time into this.(even if you don't ship it.) So keep up the good work!:twilightsheepish:

7851152 wow, thanks so much! I feel honored.

7851171
Thank you;););) really happy you liked it!

She'd checked her alarm clock at least ten minutes in the past half hour, and each time it had only been a few minutes later than the last.

Think this should be times

Indeed, bowties are cool. Almost as cool as fezzes. :derpytongue2:

You did a great job on keeping the ponies in character for this story, I can really see this as being a two part eppisode, if Hasbro did some real world applicable shows. I lost count of how many times I squeed.

I found this fic because I needed a nice story to wash the grimdark fics i have been binging out of my head, and this did the trick perfectly. Thank you.

7851870
Yes. Almost. :) you get a virtual cookie!
Thanks very much. Glad you liked it. I will go fix those mistakes posthaste;)

7851728
Yep thanks for telling me, I fixed it:D:ajsmug:

This was amazing! I absolutely loved it. I couldn't put it down and was sad when I finished it. Keep up the great work. :D

7872197
Thanks so much!! :D glad you liked it.

This story is a little old, but it's incredible. For someone who doesn't ship them, you got it almost perfectly spot-on.

8092491
Awww, thanks! I'm glad to hear that. My goal is a writer is to be able to write about any subject even if I don't like it, so I guess I succeeded ;) thank you!

8207366
Oh man!!! Thanks so much! ANd thanks for the watch! :)

Using vegetables to defend herself. Typical Fluttershy.

:rainbowlaugh:

Damn flutters is making the moves know

considering your normal ship, you did well.
It was a enjoyable cute read and read very well.

8941835
Thank you! I'm glad to hear that. :)

Wow, I never would have known that you didn’t ship Flutterdash if you hadn’t said anything. I thought you portrayed their relationship really well, and the characterization for everyone was spot on; I was imagining all of their voices when I was reading this. I really liked this story and I’m hoping to get around to some of your other works sooner or later.

9384522
Awww thank you! I appreciate that:)

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