• Member Since 28th Dec, 2016
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AJtheRaven


Appledash shipper. Critical of everything. Except Appledash. Because Appledash.

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Applejack and Rainbow Dash are Canterlot High's most athletic, most competitive, and most stubborn students.
They're also the most oblivious.
Rainbow Dash is head-over-heels in love with her best friend, Applejack. Applejack has one hell of a crush on Rainbow Dash. And, naturally, neither one of them knows how the other feels.
Who knew saying 'I love you' could be so hard?
But they'll manage it in the end. And when they do, they'll go on to tackle the rest of the school year hand-in-hand, side by side. They'll laugh and cry; they'll be hurt and be healed; they'll live their life to the fullest with their best friends and encounter all sorts of surprises. They won't realize it, but their experiences - their love, their kisses, even their stupid competitions - will be documented by Pinkie Pie with her trusty camera, trying to immortalize the slow and sweet and sometimes stormy romance of her best friends.
And when she shows them her album at the end of the year, when they prepare to step out into the big wide world, Applejack and Rainbow will realize that, well...
It truly was their year.

Link to cover artist's page:
http://ranbluesue.lofter.com/post/39ebde_cf8e4b1

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 317 )

Very interesting so far, I might actually follow the story line as it goes on. 'impresed face':ajsmug:

7852252
Hahaha thank you:D *happy face*

Ok, I'm gonna track this.

Haha I'm definitely following the story now. Love how you are going to switch povs, keep the work up.:coolphoto:

7852276
Wowwww, thanks so much:D

7852319
Thank you! I'll try not to disappoint;)

You should try to find a perfect cover, want so.e help?

After reading your other story, I was super excited to start reading this when it first came out! But I had other stories to finish and I knew this would be my next one!

7852339
Oh my goodness, yes please! Thanks for the offer. I have a lot of pony art on my itouch (LOL) but surprisingly no human fanart, so i would love some help;)

7852389
Thank you! I'm glad you were excited. :D

I've got to say that you are one of my favorite writers! I feel like I've been doing an awful lot of flattery lately, but I can't wait for this story to continue!

7852468
Why, thank ya kindly, darlin'!
I'm actually really touched. I only joined the site like two days ago and these are my first pony fics ever, so I'm really happy you like them:) I'm excited to continue this!!!

7852440 OK I know a good site for art that you need, I try to find a human one for you :)

Comment posted by FlorescentPhoenix deleted Jan 8th, 2017

7852760
Thank you so much!! I found the perfect one;)

7853087 if you ever need an editor come to me,okay?:twilightsmile:

7853087 don't forget to credit the artist

7853112
Will do;) and thanks for reminding me.

7855824
Thank you so much! :D next chapter is in the works, although I have a big exam coming up so I can't guarantee when I'll be able to finish it. But I'm working on it:D

mon cher -> ma chère. T'is feminine!

7857063

Ahhh, thank you! Ive only started taking French this year so I didn't catch that:D

Just curious. where is sunset shimmer in this story?

7863629
Oh, um, I never thought about it. I guess I kinda just set this is my own alternate universe so to speak where she doesn't exist. But I'd be happy to include her if it would make these chapters more enjoyable. Lol, I honestly never thought about her. (Sorry sunset!)

7863670 Fair enough. I was just wondering. you don't have to add her in if you don't want to, it's your story after all :)

7863838
Haha, I'll think about it:) I'm not sure yet. The problems of an author... sigh...

7863899
I shall try to deliver;3

Some of these paragraphs get really, really long, it's actually kinda hard to follow through them because its such a large wall of text, do you think you could break them up a bit to improve their readability?

7865770
Oh, uh, sure. Sorry about that. I publish the stories from my iPad which has a pretty big screen so the paragraphs don't look quite as big on there.

7865788
7865770

In the future, my paragraphs will almost never be this long again. It only happened this time because I was describing AJ in such detail. ;)

Annnnnd it's still good

love this chapter and how much love for Applejack Rainbow has. keep up the good work :heart:

7869583
Awww, thanks! I will certainly try!;)

7869692 hehe , also what do you think about my new profile photo?

Love this chapter , I think I love the a.j povs better then the r.d because we usually don't get told of how beautiful r.d looks through someone else's eyes. Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy: PS. Yes we do have that class, it's one of the requirements.

Also if you need questions about public school, ask me

Also if you need questions about public school, ask me

Great story so far. Cant wait for the next chapter.

home Ec. is a real class, just letting you know.

7893098

Haha, thanks! As soon as I finish the new fic I'm working on, I'll get to work on chapter four. :)

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