I believe if there's any kind of god, it wouldn't be any of us. Not you or me, but just, this little space in between.
Waltzing into Sugarcube Corner, Trixie intends on acquiring the tastiest of treats, only to find herself caught up in the baking process. To make matters worse, there seemed to be an irritating voice harassing Trixie at every turn.
Warning: Features my crazy, runaway imagination.
Edits by Level Dasher
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Is this complete? Great story, BTW
7833047 Heh, yeah, it is, my bad. I'm glad you liked it, it's not a story I think everyone will like, but that's okay. If those ponies that don't enjoy my story don't inform me about what it is that they don't like, then there's not much I can do, oh well
7833539 I'm a voraphile and I like food transformation, so nothing in here bothered me. It was goofy, silly, and fit both characters perfectly. (Mostly. XD)
I found this tasteless and rather hard to swallow. I guess I have no stomach for it. On the other hand, sounds like Trixie's finally in the dough. I think she kneeds the experience. And even if Trixie was grouchy, filling her order was the yeast Pinkie could do.
Perchance, please provide a perview of how Trixie's princess pranking plan pans out? Luna and Twilight batter watch out!
7834241 You...are a terrible person, and I love you for it
Also, I hadn't initially planned a second course for this, but maybe I'll give it some time to stew in the back of my mind.
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Definately! It would be souper wouldn't it?
Well, doesn't that just make for fridge horror when the Princess in charge of patrolling your dreams decides to give you a nightmare for shits and giggles. Who are you going to complain to, Trollestia
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7841708 Playful and joyful dreams for all the good little ponies...and nasty nightmares for all the bad little colts and fillies.
Mildly amusing.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
15:52_1/10/2017
fun story. a bit weird but silly.
Love the Fic Dreams
7867967 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it
Well-written... but I kinda wanna punch Luna and Twilight and verbally rip their heads off after that. [/dead_serious]
7878748 I've been asked to do a revenge fic for Trixie, so maybe that'll happen.
7878932 I... would look forward to that. Although it depends on the revenge.
Musketeers is a better candy brand!
well i did it dreams its up https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=azxtSpz1cfM
8200570 Listening now, also added a link in the story description. You're the best, K.
I'm sure some people enjoy this another way…
It was funny. Good ol' equivocation of beneficiary-object and source-object…
This review is brought to you by the group, "A for Effort".
Name of Story: The Great And Powerful... Twixie?
Total Score out of 10: 7
Pros:
I could not spot a single grammar or spelling mistake, so grammar and spelling wise, it's a 10/10. The story also had good prose and was vividly written.
Cons:
The "Pinkie turns ponies into cupcakes" idea isn't very original, but the attempt to make a comedy out of it was a good twist. Despite that, I didn't find it funny. Honestly, it actually made me quite uncomfortable and I almost backed out of reviewing it. The description didn't really hint at where this story was going to go, but the random tag kind of makes up for that.
I can overlook Pinkie being out of character because it was a dream, but it just didn't feel right that Luna and Twilight would do something like that to Trixie.
Additional Notes:
For what it is, it's good. But it just wasn't for me. Still, I tried to judge it fairly based on it's merits and for those who do enjoy this kind of story I'm sure they would like it.