I believe if there's any kind of god, it wouldn't be any of us. Not you or me, but just, this little space in between.
This story is a sequel to The Great And Powerful... Twixie?
Twilight is in for a strange night as she is awakened from slumber by a strange dripping noise. As she begins to investigate, the fur on the back of her neck begins to stand on end. Further inside, she finds something that will horrify and shock her to her very core!
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moot
While I can imagine that this is trying to say that the cheese is permeating her consciousness, greased is a usual and efficacious state for cogwheels. Oiling makes them tend not to squeak.
…wondering how Trixie got the narration going if it was no dream…
Dammit, how did I miss that?
In regards to your second point, that was indeed the case, and I let it go for the sake of the wordplay.
For the third, I'd just go with suspension of disbelief.
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Fixed errors, and de-degreased Twilight's cogwheels....
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Looks good to me.
Cheese puns *twitch* did I just *twitch* SEE CHEESE PUNS
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Well... if you didn't see them, you would have smelled them from a mile away
Dreams wrote a dark comedy story? Hmm, wonder where he got his inspiration from.
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I've been wanting to write this sequel for a good while, Jack. But sure, you can be my muse for the next time I write something crazy and ridiculous