Equestria is suffering a dire problem. You are part of that solution, even if you aren't entirely aware of it. No, we don't need a dragon slayer or something like that. We're sure you can handle this just as you are.
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Wait, what?
3. Is this a simulation? A window into the future, or even the past? Parallel universe? And, most important, do they have cake?
The boss should be able to tell
5
5
1 with 3. I just hope we don't lose too much info from Kyle's conversation while we speak...
5? Why not
I don't know what I am getting myself into but I might as well jump into this story head first and see where it takes me.
1. 5
1, 3 and 4. Let's continue to watch the "rogue" agent and see if we set him on the right direction. The boss man may refuse to answer our questions, so then we can ask our fellow operators if that have better insight to the current situation. I'll say one thing: Things just got interesting.
2
4, 1, then 2.
Though I have to ask. Does 5 get us more choices, or back to what we had before the error?
3, 2, 1. Let's dance!
I know that feeling...
Good enough for me.
But I'm totally confued now. What/Who/When is this "Kyle"?
And where/what/when are we currently?
I vote for option 2.
3, 1, 5. We're basically doing 4...wait a minute....!
We think we know who The Bearded one is, but it's good to confirm. We still have morbid curiousity at his success, even though it no longer rests on our input.
Wild speculation: is Careful's human name John?
Keep going! ;)
7769919 we think someone hasn't paid close attention to the comments.
Maybe we'll find out next chapter? Some Temporary memory loss is expected after all...
I vote 1. I wanna see how this goes!
I am confused
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You've gone off the deep end again, Silver.
And screw y'all, I'm going for Celestia! (Okay, not really...) Since I'm so confused, I'm going to approach Davi- I mean, the bearded stranger (#3), since he seems to be in charge, and can explain what I'm doing. Hopefully. I want to get back to watching poneh poon.
I am not Kyle, and yet he s me, for I would do what he has done, and I understand him more than me.
Also, have you ever heard of the Tenno? The cursed children? They are also known as the Operator, for they utilize transference to enter the warframes and control them, even if they aren't within. They were once in pods to allow them to transfer, but could do it outside the pods. They are young, orphaned, when their ship was lost they were born and then their parents went mad and then they were the only ones aboard, the Tenno. They aren't the Warframes, they are the warframes, they are within and without them.
Back to this, 2, 3, and 4. We must know more about ourselves to become ourselves, for we are not truly ourself yet, despite our body being returned.
Have I gone mad? Nay, I've not gone anywhere. I've always been mad, but one must restrain it and become sensible. I know Kyle will make the right choice. The question is, will I?
Heh, that was an amusing way to bring the audience "into" the story, in terms of explaining how our choices influenced the main character's actions. Of course, that's over now, and we're left wondering how this new quasi-meta part ties into everything. To that end, I say option #5.
Insofar as "Kyle" goes, I still think that he needs to have a slightly firmer hand with Trixie. She's not pushing for any sort of reciprocity on the imprinting that happened to her, and so I say she's going to need to live with being a part of his harem. That's kind of what was going to happen anyway (particularly since he pretty much said he'd give her a foal), and to be perfectly frank, she doesn't have much of a claim on anything more than that. After all, as she noted, Applejack has the most legitimate claim at the moment, since she's the only pony he's knocked up at this point, and while he may not have bukkake'd Careful, they had their own intimate encounter (more intimate than Trixie's going down on him, in fact), so really Trixie should be happy with what she can get.
Of course, that's all after whatever it is Kyle's about to do. To that end, I'm honestly not sure what that is, but in point of fact it's not going to matter unless it causes a mass event that restores everypony's fertility. I have to wonder if he's going to do something that turns ponies back into humans? Or maybe a great cutie unmarking? We shall see...
Okay now I am severely confused now.
Go Kyle. I have faith in you. We will be watching.
1, 2, & 3. I am not willing to quite yet.
7770049 But he does care about her. He's just not harmony-indoctrinated into love.
He got a little taste of that with AJ, but Celestia broke them up.
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2 and 4
Kyle? Who's Kyle? I thought 'we' were supposed to put 'ourselves' in the role of the human?
I am completely and utterly confused about what's going on? All I know is that 'you' are now named 'Kyle', Careful now knows that the Stud Program has been cancelled (which is sure to piss off mares still on the list wanting to have foals), and that both Trixie and Careful will be vying for 'your' affections. Everything else, I have no clue. Therefore, I can't cast a vote.
Eh, I vote 3 because why not
-.^ dafuq are we
3
Hm. Hopefully we didn't fuck up Kyle too much. I guess with how time travel was established to work it's not decided we actually mind controlling him at all, and instead just re-directing our remote viewers down different timestreams at his decision juncture, but thag doesn't totally jive with that one chapter where we could ask whichever question, or how ties worked...
Also we were able to follow him through time, so our actual temporal location is somewhat irrelevant. Who knows when we at this point? The fact we don't have any memories is kind of a bad sign though, definitely complaining about that to whoever's in charge. Ethical concerns about mind control can be swept aside, given that I at least tacitly agreed to this.
I kind of want more closure on Kyle's story, but at the same time it feels like prying, without at least getting some more context on what he is first. Can spare a few moments to get some clarity from our dear author.
None of this fits neatly into the fertility/destiny/cutie mark schema, though! I mean, we're not destiny or else we would have gained more control of Kyle after the cutie marking, not less. Unless, like, the end of mankind was everyone entering a semi-collective pseudo-conscious in some kind of attempt at world peace bullshit, and getting a cutie mark means that an end interface has synchronized with and is now only tied to a single operator? None of that explains why they would stop being able to reproduce, though. Nor how we actually inside Kyle's head, given he was from the past. When was he even from!? Was he coincidentally pulled while already an 'agent' or did we hijack him at that event? The story structure suggests the latter, but could just be a result of memory tampering, since that had to happen at least a little. Why do we have memories from the early two thousands (AD) given that seems to clearly not be when we are?
*raises hand* teacher? I have a confused.
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Well.
This is an entirely different story from what it was a few chapters ago. It's not even a clopfic, the clop was just a gimmick to lure us in!
I'm not sure if "Kyle" is a real person, or if the Equestrian setting is real, or anything really. At this point anything and everything could be a construct of this facility "we" are in.
I think the only was to get any real information is to (3) talk to Mr beard.
... I have hit full immersion. Not sure how to deal with that one.
Um... 1, I guess.
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Hey Reykan, good to see you here, I hope we get to see some more porn before this thing is over. Might make things a bit awkward with everyone here but I imagine it was why some of us joined this project.
I look around for people to talk to. 4
Is it just me, or did anyone else get a "Matrix" vibe from this chapter?
4. Getting kinda meta with this whole tube and agent thing
7770517 I tend to wander around. Don't normally get nabbed by Silver's stuff, and if I do I lose interest, but sometimes he catches my attention. Not sure where he's going with it, but we'll see.
Aha. So we're a hive mind... from... the nondescript Other Place. It's a pretty cool turn, here, I think.
I actually imagine that whatever the votes are are what each person who was now freed from the device does.
So if 5 people vote 1, that's five people still watching, and the others, etc.
I do 1, 3. I'd do 4 but as far as I'm concerned I've already been talking with the other operators, at least a little.
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Yes the meta is a bit thick, but so far has be rather entertaining. Im looking forward to seeing how our choices will affect the direction of the story.
Given Ive heard of researchers claiming they can discern if you are being similated but the artcles I read didnt have the simple description on how to do it, I would say.
3.
Ask if this is the Better Than Life Game.
As for watching out for glitches, Ive seen an entire bus do that, so theres no way of seeing how far down the Despair Squid goes.
officially cancelled - officially canceled
Celestia cancelled - Celestia canceled
1,4
The ride has left the rails at this point, I'm holding on for dear life and hoping for the best, or an opportunity to help again.
7770732 Be calm, operator. Hopefully the directions given were good enough.
Oh... OH! Oh yes, this is a nice twist, definitely.
I'm loving this! No story I've ever read has done this!
Another original from David Silver!
Is there a 'lick the window' option?
wow David Silver's muse really whit wiled with this chapter I am going to vote #1 as it seams the safest.