Equestria is suffering a dire problem. You are part of that solution, even if you aren't entirely aware of it. No, we don't need a dragon slayer or something like that. We're sure you can handle this just as you are.
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I might be dense, but I am not understanding question 4. "you're getting bred after Applejack" ? Doesn't make sense.
As for my vote, if I were promised .. well, what this dude was promised, and was only told the positives, then I get there and it's, "oh, btw, you're stuck here" ... I'd be pissed. So #2, then I'd probably need some time to chill so #5 after that.
edit : Sorry if I'm cheating by repeatedly picking 2 answers
7731638 You'll insist Luna gets bred after Applejack.
3, 5, 8
7731642 ah, I get it. You as in talking to Luna. Thanks. Ohhh...that's tempting. I might have to change my answer hehe. Vindictive sex FTW.
I vote number 8. She is trying as hard as she can to find a solution for everyone, without the duplicity. She shouldn't have to feel bad for what her superiors are doing. Perhaps after you are expended, you can continue to work with her to find a solution, so that others aren't ripped from your home like you were. If you can prevent this from happening to others, then it will all have been worth it.
4
You know, I read this chapter over, and all I can think is "there can be too much of a good thing, you know."
Most porn is (usually far) too thin on the plot. That this one isn't is a very welcome surprise, but it is possible to go too far in the other direction. Plot without porn isn't a vice...unless you've advertised the porn in advance. Which is the case here. At four chapters in, we don't seem to be getting much closer to climbing on top of Applejack, and given that she's put her name on a list of wanting to have a bun in the oven, that just seems wrong somehow.
Having said that, I honestly can't bring myself to select any option other than #6. Getting angry (violently or no) will serve no purpose at best, or make things more difficult for ourselves at worst. Being understanding, on the other hand, overlooks that we have a legitimate grievance. Sleeping on it is unlikely to offer better choices than have been laid out here. Likewise, I'm very tempted to chastise Luna into telling the truth from now on, as well as being kind to Careful Study, but the former won't ever be anything more than a suggestion to Luna (particularly since she is, strictly speaking, correct - when the survival of your species is at stake, questions of morality need to be put on the back-burner), while the latter can wait at least a little bit.
That leaves us with only one remaining option: compensation. It's easy to pick the option where we demand that Luna put her head down and bottom up for us, but I think it's smarter to discuss the other rewards that we could get...it's not like talking about it takes sex off the table.
My vote is 8, followed by 5 and then 3 or 7 depending on how I feel the next day.
I keep trying to be a good person even though the reason I'm here is to give in to more base desires.
I say combine 2 and 3
#5 please
3 then 8, followed by 6. We got into this knowing there would be risks after all.
Disappointed is my answer -- too bad it isn't there. I doubt Luna gets too many who are genuinely such.
7731658 I've given a choice every chapter. Every. Chapter. To get on with it and get to planting a new apple tree. Every chapter!
I don't know what more to do.
7731713 I'm not sure that the choice that said "go directly to knocking AJ up" was ever explicitly laid out (choice 5 in chapter three notwithstanding).
7731715 Like most games I've run into of this nature, going to sleep = next day = Stuff happens. Any time folks finally decide to call it a rest, AJ time!
This situation is a bit too complicated to pick just a single answer. least thats how i feel.... so...
8, followed with a combination of 2 and 3. I'm a pragmatist. I wouldn't like it, but i can see where they are coming from. Desperation makes people ( and ponies ) do stupid things.
9... Quick, cold, simple statement of angry disappointment. Asking for help and kidnapping are very different things. Luna, of all ponies, should know that and should have at least mentioned something... Especially since she can find more while dreaming.
Failing that, 8. Careful knows how important this all is and seems trapped. If she quit, she can't guess who might take her place... Suffering that knowledge rather than letting someone who doesn't care take her place.... She could use the support.
...
And Luna might just need to get the cold shoulder...and pass it on to Celestial too.
Comfort Careful but talk compensation. She seems like a nice mare, but if there's no going back home, ask for a home and a decent job... and no taxes.
Let's go with 6. I mean, she had to pick someone and she specifically picked you because you had few ties to your homeworld, so it's not like this is really a surprise. But 'room and board and a retirement fund' is kind of a bare minimum payment for the job, especially since it's going to cripple you magically and you won't be able to go back to a world where that doesn't matter. So maybe you can get more.
Careful will be a great ally and friend if you need one. Help the poor girl out.
Tell Luna she needs to make sure people know they can't return BEFORE they get yanked, probably in a disappointed way. Let's face it, disappointment hurts more than anger if the person cares.
But getting some time to sort through everything and sleep is important too... Plus if Luna butts into your sleep... Well... A good hate-fucking could get it out of your system.
I would go with 8 & 5. We need to comfort our new friend and not act rashly here. Anger is a horrible idea right now.
8 5 and 6
3, I say.
i'm definitely on 7) and 8).
at option 4. (Not my pick, just my reaction to the list.)
Okay, first, #8. I like this mare, so I'm not gonna' leave her hanging.
That said, I'm upset, but I'm more than willing to #5. You're in an impossible situation, princess, but still, fuck you. So, when all's said and done, I'm telling her #4, though I'm joking in a mean-spirited kinda' way. Partially. But turnabout and a vindictive sort of "parity" would make me feel a little better. (Because 4 sounds more like something we can reserve for later, and less like a choice that will move the plot forward now.)
How nice they say that now.
Question: That's it, you're totally getting bred after Applejack
Did he meant Luna is getting bred by him (willingly or not) after he finishes with Applejack?
(Vote will arrive later after receiving the answer.)
Edit: you had already answered that. (7731642). I recommend to make that one clearer.
7731946 Yes, this is you saying that to Luna.
I vote number 2, 6 and 7.
(Just how many choices do I have at most?)
Technical background-question: How do you count the votes?
Do you read each comment one by one filling a checklist or something automatic?
7731957 She made her stance clear. She would become a mother, so long as she had someone to call a father. She doesn't want to be simply inseminated.
It is, in some ways, a very selfish request. In others, very human (pony?). It does match up with her horror at the idea that the studs had been being deceived and jerked around so cruelly.
So, yes, if you agreed to get to know her and become a true friend, she will raise her tail without remorse. Otherwise, well, she still has to, but there will be tears.
This is an emotional minefield if it was me at the moment, those numbers won't mean much to me but I'd definitely leave out 1 violent anger, 3 understanding would be an instant yes, leaving 5 sleeping on it, out as you can see pretty well where this is headed. 2 anger would come into play for a short while concurrently but that grenade is a dud in the long run as with the understanding you realise it won't do any good now or possibly ever (but never say never). 4 threw me a bit til I saw Honey Badgers question and your clarification, read it as 'doing AJ then go bonk yourself silly and stuff their list up their plots, first come first serve'. But I see where it's coming from now and I would defer to 8 instead but with an added twist of after anger feeling utterly depressed (alt opt:9) with situation you are now in before deciding to demand from Luna, in front of Careful for her benefit, that if Careful is on the list as a candidate you want her bumped up next after AJ or as near as possible. The mutual hugs and feelings from Careful would certainly cheer her and I up again to some degree. 6 well you already know you are going to be looked after right if you don't lose the 'plot's (pun intended). 7 IDK if that means everyone in Equestria, Earth or both? In all fairness I don't see that helping the situation in any event, it would cause chaos on Earth and cause Equestria to lose confidence in the sisters so no to that one as well.
After all is sad and done I wouldn't mind settling down with Careful, if she was willing and agreed of course as she (and this is now just my own preference) is a similar spirit to Maud, who I based my avatar choice on, but with at least an open emotional personality, even if we have only the one foal together. Maybe work with her to see if you can find a remedy.
So basically 3,2,8 with an extra of 9. Well that's my view done with at this point, hope it helps.
7731983 I enter each person's vote into Surveymonkey as a poll that you can answer more than one in.
This does mean someone who votes for multiple things is, in an effect, a 'weaker' vote.
Say We have these votes:
1 2 3
1 2
4 3
4 2
1 2 3 4
Alright, 1 2 3 4 literally means nothing. It's there, but it's not raising the percentages of anything.
2 has a vote 4/5 times, 80%
3 has 3 votes, 60%
1 has 3 votes, 60%
4 has 2 votes, 40%
Winners: 2, 1 and 3 close behind.
Make sense?
it's a tie for me #3 and #8
6 with a dash of 7
7731984
oh, duh, she intentionally signed up for motherhood, and there's probably no check box for "only if I get to keep him afterwards". Yeah, that makes sense then, and is fair enough consent and forethought. The way she first phrased it implied that we had a right to her just because she was a mare, whatever her personal feelings were be damned. Which would be bad.
Gotta say three. We knew we were leaving when we were chosen, so being angry on other people's behalf that had the same general thing happen to them... is hard. Even if it's a really really shit deal for those that are less accepting.
Really, there's not enough evidence yet that there is crap going on with studding, yet, so no need to "spread the word."
Other than that, resting, waiting for AJ. etc etc.
7731658 That is an excellent argument.
I have to ask. Is herding a thing in this Equestria?
As for my votes, #6 and #8. Of course, you're going to be angry, but when you think about it, if the situation was reversed, what would you do? Sleeping on it might be difficult, knowing that Luna can walk into your dreams. Tell everyone might do more harm than good. Knocking up Luna, well, depends on how/if herding works.
7732155 Some readers, clearly, were under the impression they could return after things were done.
I totally want to vote 8
3-6-(some questions)-8
The survival of your own species is paramount. The cost is never too great, no matter what atrocity you commit. They can hate you for it, revile you for it, but the point remains they will be alive to do so. If many others have to die, or be inconvenienced, or kidnapped, so what? The alicorns are doing their jobs in this respect. Good on the writer for not painting them as evil for being concerned rulers.
I believe we also need to question what happens to send the Studs into a rage at the end of their fertility. Does impregnating a mare reduce mental capacity in some way? If so we need to get as much shit done RIGHT NOW as we can. This question before 8.
I also don't believe we should try to breed Luna. For revenge is what it looks like on that list, but I also don't think that True Alicorns are fertile? No hint of blood relations for either Celestia or Luna aside from themselves. Cadence ascended to become an alicorn, she's had a foal. It'd be a waste of nut-butter if this was the case.
/ I'm actually really enjoying the story format. Anyone complaining they can't beat their meat yet needs to learn some goddamn restraint. The porn will happen eventually, but we don't want no Bad Ends.
4) That's it, you're totally getting bred after Applejack
Might be Understanding about things, but that would take some rational thought, which means Cool Down and then Sleep On It, as going to sleep angry, gives angry dreams, which can leade to runaway Rage. Different people from different countries have differnt ideas of Angry as well. Depends how Machaeveilian you want to be as well. Repeat of Nightmare Moon, once the history is discovered, or worse?
Being pulled through via dreams and not being able to be sent back is the weird top end quantum mechanical stuff thats had a few mentions in the popular science magazines, but relatively few people would have seen it, less read it and very few understood what they were trying to say never mind what it meant. As in, the next time a dreamer in the same reality was discovered, trying to keep a lock on their location so you could be pushed back through, you would be lucky to end up in the same Galaxy. And given change in rate of time with gravity relative to voids and clusters etc, be lucky to end up in the same millenium.
TL:DR Going back is Pinkie Pie type thinking.
A big part of the problem is the insistance and force put on the Sterility idea, which is made to sound as if your junk shrivels up and falls off, meaning no more shooting flies in bathroom, instead of, well youve made 20 offspring, now you cant have any more, when most males only have a couple in a lifespan and many dont have any at all, just the pleasure of the action.
Rewards? Even without Greed, for helping save the race with no other chance, currently of return, Comfort and Stability. Room, Board, Companionship, Resources.
But, we have no background for our protagonist if its not going to be straight 10 chapters of porking 10 mares, so are we aiming for ten shorts of porking, end of story, or are we aiming for a 15 minute diary of Protag Vs Magical screwup and after a month of porking ten mares, he succeeds or fails, works out how to let the next guy return, or dies foaming at the mouth with Canterlot in Flames?
Sorry, Ive always been terrible at making up Character sheets, thats why I keep breaking PCGen.
Um if four is breeding luna then 4
3 and 4. #4, as hard as possible
8 4 3
8,4,6
7
After everything that has happend I have to say there is no going back. Lets look forward. Nothing to be done about our situating or thoes in the past. But perhaps a better intake could be made for future studs. But thats Future us's problem. Lets talk getting paid, at the very least I think settling down with one of the mares to be bred would be a requirement. Happily living out the rest of our days with the family we helped create would be the best reward for the service. But helping transition new arrivals might make for job security. So lets see what other perks we can get.
5 with a little 2
6 5 4
6-8
I'm a bit materialistic, Sue me!
'Careful Study' is kinda your ony friend at this point, show some care.
Other choices doesn't help the situation, screw 'em choices. Being a bit angry is a given but it doesn't help. Rationality and Practicality are what we need here.
7732534 You meant 6 then. 7 doesn't seem doable...nor actually solve anything.