Equestria is suffering a dire problem. You are part of that solution, even if you aren't entirely aware of it. No, we don't need a dragon slayer or something like that. We're sure you can handle this just as you are.
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#3 explore the castle
I say 2 and 5. I hope our hero can talk to Twilight as I feel she would be more inclined to be helpful and would actually possibly find a way to fix this. Applejack would be a good way to get into contact with Twilight.
#6 It'll be nice to show the moon princess some attention in preparation for proper loving.
That end on refusing to explain what happens to non-converted humans demands to be elaborated on.
That Careful Study mare might just be a human once.
(1) But if you still don't get the answer after a few pokes then don't press. No need to antagonize the adorable little pone in lab coat trying to save her species.
(2) You are hungry. You will need the energy.
(3) Help prevent/resist cabin fever.
(6) or (7) Maybe IF you come across them while you're exploring the castle? Though, there is no need to be impolite. Back off when/if the signs show that pressing is unwise.
(5) You will need to relax and rest after all the "adventuring". You're going to need it.
7728777 *guiltyyyy*
6 or 7 because I want to see the royals bred
7) If the spell is so weak and the human males can make healthy foals, why not try a daring experiment, make a human child out of a pony with enough strength in magic that his spell never wears down, make if possible a male (AKA, ask if Celestia, Luna…or even Cadence or Twilight have try to turn themselves half human so their baby have the best of both worlds and save Equestria) . Or the other way around, instead of tampering with the male seed work with the mares eggs, make them more receptive to all seeds, so they don't need all sorts of them to fertilised them.
7728952 Time for a new vote :D
1)But persuasive not demanding.
7728959 The male 'get pregnant!' spell works, but damages the male body/magic when broadcast with such strength.
Female eggs are damaged and missing a lot of the needed genetics. On the bright side, they can accept multiple(implied a great number of) sperm until they have the complete set they need.
If they could just zap a female and not only fix her eggs but the eggs of any daughters she had, well, problem solved, right?
The mystery is deepening, and easy solutions are not immediately present. Celestia's idea may work, though it will take time to see if it has measurable effect. Breeding programs with a species that has generations as long as ponies seem to? This'll be a while.
My vote is for #2. Hunger can keep you from getting your "work" done very easily.
Get that man some grub!
1&2
1) and 2)
Hm, I have mixed feelings about this chapter. It honestly seemed to spend too much time getting into the why's and wherefore's regarding the biology problem that you've been called to help solve. On the other hand, that's sort of to be expected when you head to the research facility, so I can't really fault this chapter for doing what it was supposed to do.
A new plot-thread has been laid down, with regards to what happened to the previous studs. There's clearly meant to be a mystery there, but the major question I have is the apparent lack of the most obvious answer: were they not sent back? That doesn't seem to be the case, but why? If Luna can visit other worlds, and drag studs to Equestria, can't they be returned? Or does she only visit via dreams, and use those dreams of foreign dreamers to "tug" them into Equestria, which wouldn't make for an easy way back (e.g. no point of reference for "where" they should go)?
Since I think we need some answers about this, I say go for option 6.
Pony equivalent of flipping the bird.
Door #1! Door #6! TAKE THE MONEY!
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That is why, I though maybe make a mare give birth to a human, perhaps if the humans share the genes of his father then he could breed more easily, and slowly start to solve the problem
7729047 I've heard worse ideas. :D The only trick is that they already scrambled you up to have a genetic sequence in a pony's order. They need an unscrambled human male and a scrambled mare to produce humans.
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I think I'm reading this wrong, the stallion bit confuses me? Are you talking about IVF, still reads funny in that bit if that's right? Assuming the last female is referring to a human?
No.1 is a dead end I believe, she ain't talking, 2 and 3 combined works for me and should keep him plenty busy to round out the day without resorting to 4, maybe another day. A bit of sister talk, 6 & 7 mixed in with 3, exploring. Maybe with 'some' questions answered he retires a little early for a good nights rest (5) for what he imagines is going to be a workout tomorrow?
2 cuz once again you're not gonna be good at breeding if youre hungry as fuck. then three cuz the castle is huge.
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Oh that is why, hmm yeah this might be more difficult that I though…I wonder if changelings are having similar problem with them being genderless and all that
Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait! In order to put a band-aid on the problem, I was altered in a way that is specifically going to come under so much stress that it will eventually break? No, no, no, no! We're not leaving that right there like that! I was just trying to be helpful, but now it sounds like they've given me a problem! Get those damn answers!
#1
Or, if she refuses, storm off after #6 or #7, whichever you can find for pointed questions.
Heck, these are the princesses, there's probably some light snacks (#2) near them too.
And now I have a theory. Ponies used to be much more violent, and that was hurting themselves and the world. So Celestia and/or Luna did "something" and toned down that aggressiveness. But it was a blanket effect, and now the "GET PREGNANT,
WOMANMARE!" spell is now a "you should maybe think about getting pregnant, y'know, if you'd like... please...?" spell. And now the princesses are trying to fix the spell to be more aggressive without making the ponies more so, but it might not be that easy, and they might have to put up with more aggressive ponies so their species can continue until they find a more targeted solution.EDIT: "I" suddenly have a thought/suggestion, do they have a pre-stress scan of healthy, working magical signature with proper pregnancy setup? (me) If they don't, then they totally should, because it could help them know where they're trying to go with their healing efforts. It also might provide the basis for a better/longer-lasting stopgap than they're currently using. More pregnant mares is good, right?
Also, the misspellings are infiltrating this story too!
Needing more males to each female in a civiisation where it naturally started more females to each male, sounds like Celestia was wanting to make the numbers Equal, and instead caused an Inversion. Starting with equal numbers, things aint that bad, but this Squares the numerical problem, giving all the rushing around like Mannys and Elizabeaks.
Its almost like you need an Inverse IUD , Viagra, or trigger spell item instead of needing teh whole third wheel caster, as apparently Six Jock Debby home movies havent made it to Equestria, or social interactions have progressed due to Celestias isolation so long to avoid such.
Dont demand answers from a scientist, for you are soft and look good on the gurney.
Try and give the scientist something to think about, like Debbie, so they search you out instead. Explore the Castle by asking for mess hall, guards will not say it but they tend to intensely despise Nobles, especally those who refuse to accept its the underlings that keep them where they are. No underlings, no Nobles.
Find a Towel. If you are going to go Sean Connery, James Bond, might as well do it with Style.
7729075 Typos shooed out of the clean zone. Yes, she was speaking of in vitro, which works in humans, and not so well in ponies. Mind you, it can even fail in humans. She's given the pony explanation for why that may be. Forgive her, she specializes in pony biology, not human.
Your vote! I can't... really tell what you're voting for :D Everything but 1?
7729109 Typo fixed, and perfectly valid explanation for the male side of the issue. Not that females escaped the mess intact.
6+7 with princest to avoid answers
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Hmmmm...
Stallions sound like they were the activating trigger, so mares likely had an "active scan" that started up either when in season or because of arousal. That active scan was similarly toned down with the blanket de-aggression change, and now the "Get pregnant, mare!" spell has to be overcharged to even register on the mare's 'radar.' That could be why the studs are stressed to the breaking point.
I still think a third party temporary fix, like the spell Scientist Pony said doesn't work, would work. The problem may be having the user also be the caster - that's divided concentration. Have somepony else cast and hold the spell(s) so the participants can concentrate on doing their thing. Friendship/Orgies is/are Magic, after all. Right?
Can we have two votes? I vote for 2 and/or 3. You just got transported to a magical pony land. It's human nature to explore and be inquisitive after base needs are fulfilled.
7729119 Outright 2 & 3 explore and food, couldn't hurt to meander about and happen to catch up with one of the sisters and ask more questions, probably Luna as I guess Tia may have left the castle on something urgent? 1 & 4 out Careful is too careful and no need to to escape yet he's going to enjoy himself tomorrow right?
Just realised I'm seeing it wrong 'sneak out and "sees" Canterlot', depends how inquisitive he is I spose, I'd think the castle would keep me busy for the first day though, it's certainly big enough too not run out of things to look at and pester heck out the guards with questions like informal tour guides.
I think #2 is extremely important. Can't have this adventure ending early because you died of hunger now.
Might as well get some castle exploring done to help settle your meal.
I vote 1 if it can be modified from 'demanding' to pressing firmly for more information without raised voices.
Otherwise I vote for 6. Princess Luna seems to be on the level and we already know that Princess Celestia is responsible for all this so possibly not the best source of information. And by the way, have we been paying enough attention to note the color of 'Princess Celestia's' mane? Just who are we dealing with here?
Typo hunt to follow.
I vote 7
7729266 "Bred warrior needs food badly!"
3
Xplor! And find that kitchen along the way. (2)
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That makes it sound like the spell is being cast by Fluttershy.
As much as you want answers, you know getting the answers won't be that easy. You could try one but ears can be anywhere and everywhere. Celestia and Luna might answer your concerns since it's too late to reverse it now. I would wait until after mating with a mare or two before probing any further.
Too much can go wrong if you try to leave the palace. You don't know who's trustworthy and you won't have any protection from hostiles.
My vote: #3 while trying to #2.
7728960 #5.
I think the story is interesting, and I am happy to see that there is more depth to it then just clopping to it, that there sort of en actual story behind it. keep up the good work.
7729500 I will endeavor to do so :) The mystery must be delved into.
We may delve into a mare or two along the way. We'll see how it goes!
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I vote for number 6 by asking her to join you in number 2. Food typically makes people more willing to talk and relaxed, right?
I vote #5
stop messing around and just relax
2. lets get food, all the hard questions will come in time, but we cant stud on an empty stomach.
Thinking about the ponies problem, why attack it from the male end? Normally a females immune system would naturally do its job of weeding out undesirable or unhealthy sperm. But it seems here the male system does all the work. Why not create a sequence for females to prepare their own bodies? Even if it burned out the females Magic circuit at least she has the opertunity to get pregnent without need for an alien stud. Also perhaps an enchantment that could take the strain off the males circuit. Kinda like a circuit breaker to take the magical load off the pony....
I am having fun with this story and will thumbs up, but ususally i dislike this kind of 2nd person stories because they tend to lack charecter development. So it is possible some people dislike stories for elements of this nature without even giving it a try. You cant please everyone, so please dont mind the downvotes. Your doing a great job.
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My issue with waiting is that I've been told this process will eventually break my ability to reproduce, and the end goal is to repair everyone's ability to reproduce. How much wear and tear are those one or two dalliances going to put on my reproductive system before we get to the questions about my pre-worn-down reproductive capabilities? This doesn't sound like a "let's wait until later" kind of issue to me.
2, 3, and 5. In that order
7729119 OK 2nd thoughts alternate event #8 All the randy mares find out he's there and try and fight there way to him!! They storm the castle so to speak!
I'm going to go with 2 and 3
i vote for 1 and 6
1 or 6 WE NEED ANSWERS!