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The Abyss

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There are not enough words to express my joy at seeing this finally up. I hope everyone else loves it just as I do!

Very good read! :D

Interesting DiamondDiamond pairing.

8175781 You might even say it's...

Oh god what if DD actually showed up in this fic...

You have the power to make it happen.

8175792 Kinda. This is a commission, one that I've had a lot of fun working on. Next chapter will still have clop, but will be more focused on story.

Put me down for Filthy down for being ok with the relationship and Spoiled throwing a fit.


I'd say it's more of a...squared diamond.

This is just amazing. I'm loving this DiamondDiamond pairing more than I should. :rainbowkiss:

Most clopfics lack a plot. Well, the story one. This looks as if it'll be a very interesting story, with all the plots. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

There were several older ponies chatting away at a couple tables on the other side of the bar, and there was nobody to her left.


“My friend, SIlver Spoon, we, um... practice on each other every so often just so that when the time comes, we don’t, er... make a fool of ourselves.”


8175749 Thanks! I can't wait to hear what everyone thinks of this cute and romantic story.:twilightblush:

8175847 Coulda sworn I fixed that second one... Oh well! Thanks for pointing it out!:heart:

DiamondDiamond? Clop? Actual story? All of my yes!

Yes just yes :rainbowkiss::raritystarry:

8175905 Yeah, it is clop with an actual romantic story. Quite different from the usual clopfics I write, which are mostly smut. :P

Very nice! I actually really enjoyed the build up into the sex scene. It gives it a bit more depth. Can't wait to read more!

8176370 Thanks! I'm going to be adding more story to my clopfics in the future, though there will be some that will be clop for the sake of clop.

8176043 Thanks for the r8, m8.

8176398 awesome! I like both types of clop, but for different reasons.

Me likey. Wonder if there's going to be a Diamond Pony (Diamond Dog/pony hybrid) being born in this story. If there is, don't name the kid Butt-Stallion.
Sorry, I've been playing a lot of Borderlands 2. :twilightblush:

Might want to check for instances of "his" that should actually be "her" cause I think I saw one but now I can't be bothered to search for it.

Good stuff though, definitely going from Read Later to NSFW.

Knotting.. anyone want to fill me on that..?

8177861 Dogs have a knot at the base of their cock. When breeding, this knot keeps their seed inside the female to greatly improve the chances of pregnancy.

Raises the question of if Diamond Dogs do the butt-twist thing. ;)

As an aside, while it might be a half hour to go down entirely, I've heard from a presumably knowledgeable source that it can fit back out in 3-5 minutes, on the longer end with anal. In case she needs to disentangle and stop Spoiled from murdering poor Scruffy. ;)

(You'd be AMAZED what comes up during true crimes research.)

welp I'm going bed

Hey Abyss I just started reading your stuff and I gotta say mate, some top tier next level clop. How are you so good at making ponies fuckable??? Regaurdlesd keep up the good work!

Technically he should be shooting for almost all of those thirty minutes he is locked inside her.

Apart from that I loved it! Can't wait for more.

I'm eagerly awaiting for more! I've been looking for a good clop fic and most of the ones I read, ended or stop being updated.

I doubt I'll read this, but I feel the title has to be acknowledged. :rainbowlaugh:

8180016 Thanks lol. I was surprised that it hadn't been used.

As she wondered what their first date would be like tomorrow, her eyes shot open wide. Oh no... how am I going to explain him to my parents?!

Yeah Diamond, you really screwed the pooch on that one.

8180261 ...why didn't I think of using that pun? Fuuuuuuuuuuuuck it would have been so perfect!

I'll see if I can get that pun in there in the next chapter or two.

I didn't know what to think at first but[ well played. I approve of this ship. Onwards to glorious doggy-style love making!

Maybe it has been elsewhere. There aren't all that many diamond dog (or other canine) clopfics on fimfiction, so I'm sure there are other puns not yet taken.
As a chapter title would work too if you can't find better.

Given the description, I can only assume that this isn't Blaze.

8182618 No? The dogs in both pics different.

Hmm, I wonder if Ponies and DD's can interbreed and I wonder what the resulting offspring would look like?

That said, the meet the parents is going to be friggin' hilarious.

Don't mind me. Just introducing your readers to the only other DD OC/DT ship it was aware of. :derpytongue2:

Please tell me that when all is said and done, they get to be together ???
I don't mind if the ROAD is treacherous, Just that they end up with each other in the end.
Loving the story so far, I hope we can expect great things from you in the future!!

8183887 Heh, I'm not gonna spoil the ending.

8184792 dose this mean there'll be a sequel, or a second chapter.:rainbowhuh:

8184988 I mean, the story is marked as incomplete, so... :moustache:

At best? Two meh out of five... :applejackunsure: :applejackunsure:


It started out cliché, went into bland external entertainment mode of going to a regulars bar and then the erotic scene was just kinda there... nothing really stood out aside from the DT and a diamond dog getting it on... Even then it was meh since she apparently practiced on her toys so often and none of what one would expect of an experimental tryst showed up, not to mention the blah personality of the dog himself being so okay with whatever was suggested and done. Instincts and years of cultural conditioning would have made him a lot more aggressive in other ways despite being a bit of a runt could account for...


Instincts and years of cultural conditioning would have made him a lot more aggressive in other ways despite being a bit of a runt could account for...

Well, there is a very good reason why he was exiled ya know... :twilightblush:


Aside from the potential hostage/sex slave he would kidnap to prove his superiority after years of degrading abuse? I don't see it with his personality nor the tags... it's more like he left because he just worked differently mentally and wasn't ever exiled to begin with, more like indifferent to being the strange one in a strange land and left because the harassment got in the way of him living his life...

That being said, I think it could have gone either way depending on how you wanted to write it, but as long as you're happy with it, that's all that matters... I just find it meh as it is... :derpytongue2:


Plus, oftentimes, runts tend to be the superior members of any litter after they fully mature, so unless he was purposely malnourished when he was growing up, he would have turned his ex-bullies inside out with his little finger after they were older...

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