• Member Since 30th Nov, 2015
  • offline last seen 39 minutes ago

Rambling Writer


Our job is not to give readers what they want; our job is to show them things they never imagined. --Walt Williams

E

The Realm of Chaos. A bewildering, distorted mess of a place, where black is white, up is down, short is long, and the laws of physics sometimes forget to exist. Someplace only the bravest, boldest of ponies would dare to go. And yet, this pony not only goes there, but does so so frequently it has become routine. This is just one of their many, many journeys.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )
Comment posted by Set deleted Aug 13th, 2016

Is this the story of the mailpony who delivers Discord mail daily? I always wondered what that would be likr. And we never did find put what happened to him after delivering the invitation.

[author bio:] I write stuff. I like it when people read my stuff. Please read my stuff.

There, I read your stuff. I like it when I read your stuff as well. They’re very nice to read.

He’s such a wuss that he can’t walk outside without using his powers to secure himself to the ground.

He’s such a wuss that Fluttershy sorta ‘reformed’ him in one episode. Not that that’s a bad thing, but he’s too tame for his moniker. The self-professed ‘Lord of Chaos’ should be called ‘Mildly Annoying Prankster’ instead. :derpytongue2:

Random quotes aside, I found the story lighthearted and enjoyable. The narrator’s blasé attitude to Discord’s not-so-chaotic realm is amusing, and their detailed descriptions of the world made for some fun imagery. J’aime bien. :heart:

*laughing* Oh man, this is a GOOD one. I love the tone of the mailpony; he's (it is a he, right? I'm assuming this is the pony from the one episode, but I also thought it might be a mare while reading, so forgive me if I got confused) so used to this that it's like talking about a casual day at the office, with just enough reassurance to either us or maybe himself that this place IS in fact amazing even to him, almost to the point that it feels like he's trying to convince himself that he hasn't gotten too used to it yet. And I genuinely didn't realize he was going to be a mailpony until the end, I figured it would be some adventure pony, so nice job with the twist. :D Love the thing about heat becoming a solid and a bunch of your other made-up physics, those were really creative. Awesome job, thanks for the fun read!

I love this. A nice warm-up stretch for the mind.

Re the chapter title: Beware! Your brain may no longer be the boss!

This has been reviewed by me HERE.

The Realm of Chaos. A bewildering, distorted mess of a place, where black is white, up is down, short is long, and the laws of physics sometimes forget to exist.

I live in this place. We call it 'New Jersey'.

:trollestia:

And of course, all of us Pineys know the OTHER resident Draconequus, Leeds.

sleepingbearpress.com/uploads/product/cover/11613/l_9781585368372.jpg

Given enough time, all things begin routine. I heard from operators who run CAG that even kicking in doors and grabbing bad guys got mundane after a while. You conveyed that tone well.

Lol. What would happen if Derpy was here then?

Login or register to comment