On her weekly walk through the park, former siren Aria Blaze comes across an old enemy, who she'd like to talk to.
While walking home from hanging out with her friends, Sunset Shimmer has an unexpected conversation with someone she didn't expect to see again.
Just a little one shot about my favorite characters. It's my first time writing these two, So I hope it's okay.
Cover art by the fabulous Wubcake, used with permission.
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It's a very nice one shot. Not too long nor too short. Simple, yet interesting. I like it.
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Yay! Validation! First comment and it's not an insult! It's a compliment! Thanks!
How is Wubcake doing by the way? I haven't heard about what went down with that incident when her Grandmother called the cops on her and unjustly put a 6 month restraining order against her.
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Fine I guess, still active on Deviant art at least.
So What'd ya think of the story?
An interesting story buddy, i liked it!
7378328 It's in my read later library. I still have a bunch of other reads to catch up on.
that is the kind of sliced life i like.
interesting pairing, nice setting, believable dialogue, well written, good flow and short enough to not become tedious.
i would not be opposed to another story in this "universe".
well done.
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That is the kinda comment I like!
I'm glad you think they were believable.
And I would not be opposed to writing more of these two
It was good. There's one thing that always bothers me though, not just in this fic but in a lot of EQG fics. They talk like they're stranded on Earth, if Sunset misses Equestria, its just a portal away. The Sirens I can kind of understand but I'd bet Sunset vouching for them would be enough. That's just me though.
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This is true, but Sunset is just starting to make friends with Aria. Trust takes time yknow.
Cool and relaxing.
Loved that story!
Especially because Aria and Sunset Shimmer, are my favorite characters.
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Mine too! I'm glad you liked it!
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Well, this is a very casual slice of life fic. It's a good read, but this needs editing, man. Nothing serious, just a few capitalization and few spellchecks. Maybe make other phrases shorter, since some of them are really chunky. Other than that, this is likable.
Could have used a little bit more editing, but I enjoyed reading this. I don't know if you intend on writing any more about the Sirens, but I would certainly be interested in how you write the other two.
Also, Sonata playing a saxophone is a mental image that I find strangely amusing. Nice touch.
Why does this not have more views? Like seriously? I thought it was a pretty well written, well thought out short story. There really wasn't anything wrong with it. This story should have AT LEAST twice the amount of views it currently has.
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Why thank you! I'm almost assuming it's because strangely enough, Aria Blaze seems to be the least liked siren. I have no clue why though, as she's my favorite.
But thanks for enjoying the story! I'd say keep an eye out for the sequel but I hardly ever have the time and motivation to write at the same time.
8143351 *chuckles.* Tell me about it.