"Be good to yourself, because nobody else has the power to make you happy."
Fluttershy's bone idle brother Zephyr Breeze has finally turned his life around, and has stopped mooching off his parents! Everypony is happy! But are things as they appear to be? A knock on the door will soon answer that.
A little epilogue I'd have liked to have seen in the new ep because, you know, drama.
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[Most of all, when I zapped you with that storm cloud when you grabbed me in front of Soarin and announced we were a couple?"] Ouch.
[If you can't meet your quota, than I'm afraid it's jail for you, and you know what happens to stallions with nice hair in there..." Fluttershy: "And it rhymes with 'grape'!"
A lot of funny references and jokes in here but overall a great story!
It should have ended this way.
I loved it!!!
I'm sorry, but this is totally f
d up. I definitely would have absolutely HATED that episode if it ended like this.
Lol!
this just seems like another anti-zephyr breeze fic. not cool
7277401 Maybe as an epilogue, but another episode later in the series? I like where this is going...
7277401 me too. this just like a anti-zephyr breeze fanfic
7277689 I don't,
Man, I as much I as disliked Zepyhr he seemed to be wanting to change at the end of the ep. Sorry Deadpan, but this just comes off feeling like a bashing fic.
7277401 Nah, it would have improved it 100... Maybe 70%.
7277751 Too right it is. I HATE that guy. Aside from all of his obvious faults, like his narcissism and idiocity, he can't sing a note... And yet, the writers saw fit to give him a song. GENIUS. Pass the earplugs...
Also, I don't call wanting to move back in with your parents as soon as you graduate 'wanting to change'. He says it's only for a few days, but I think we all know differently...
7278218 Eh, I like to give people/ponies the benefit of the doubt unless they're really vile.
7278422 You see, that's where you and me differ... I suspect EVERYONE, until they prove me otherwise.
Chalk it up to life experience.
7277401 You probably meant this at a criticism... It's actually my favourite comment here, and I take it as a compliment of the highest order.
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So Fluttershy is a secret Dom?
7280061 They have a character tag for Zephyr Breeze now.
10/10
They say there's a ton of fics where Zephyr gets punished by everyone but I've never found one except this one