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Ice Star

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The King is going to talk and Sombra is thinking once again. One is happy, one is suffering. Neither of them exist to the world around them, and each has words of their own. Except these words seem to say things that are impossible and with each thought the ruler of the Crystal Empire seems more and more like an impossibility.

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"And no one knows what it's like
To be the bad man.
To be the sad man.
Behind bl-RED eyes."

7307378 Thanks very much! This version of Sombra appears in my other stories as well, in case you wish to look at them. :twilightsmile:

I don't like to read

:pinkiegasp: You are missing out good sir.
Also, I really like the repetition. It was pretty good. :twilightsmile:

7307564 Did you read the second part? :pinkiehappy:

7309680 Great! Well he appears here and in these as well.

I was just looking through Deviantart for a picture of Sombra to use for a new story, and I saw your link to this story, which is funny to me, because you commented on my story yesterday. Small world, I guess.

I like this story. Its got style.

7489068 Thanks for the praise, and it is indeed a small world. :twilightsmile:

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

You should make a story where Twilight comes across his poem.
The story was really cool! I loved everything about it.

The poem as you read it is a non-diegetic insert rather than epistolary, so it wouldn't be anything another character could find. It's just Sombra's thoughts. Though, if you like this version of him and want him and Twilight to interact, they do in my main series. You can find it on my page; the first story is called Crystalline.

Yep! Most of the stories are complete, too. The other princesses show up a lot as well.

I will certainly check it out then.

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