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Child of Stars


I like to write, I like to read, and I've got a lot of story ideas floating around in my head. What more can I say?

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UPDATE - On hiatus until January 2024


King Sombra the feared, hated, and reviled regent of the Crystal Empire has finally returned from his banishment at the hooves of Equestria’s ruling diarchs. He awakens to see that his empire has returned with him before he swiftly reconquers it to little resistance.

Without wasting much time he draws up plans to defend the empire, now safely back under his control, from its Equestrian neighbors to the south. And knowing Celestia and Luna he’s surprised that they have not already reacted to his empire’s re-emergence; however, he just brushes it off thinking himself lucky for their sloppiness. As he waits for the princesses' response it eventually becomes apparent that there won’t be one.

Confused, he begins using various methods to try and get in contact with Equestria. After many failed attempts and a worrying report from a border guards’ patrol he starts trying to get in touch with the other countries of the world only to receive nothing in return. Following an even more worrying report from a scouting mission to Equestria and the appearance of a mysterious plague that only seems to afflict the crystal ponies, Sombra is at wit's end.

Determined to find out what is going on outside his empire’s walls he puts his plans of war against and the conquering of Equestria aside and sets out on a mission. A mission that will soon lead him to find out that the world he and his empire have returned to is nothing like the one they left. And the answers Sombra seeks could threaten to destroy not only him, but the entirety of the world as well. 

Something has happened while they were gone, something sinister


Featured: At some point apparently


In Progress: Arc 1 ~ The Wasteland

Story will be split up into different arcs with some interlude chapters spread within and between each arc. Some sections of the story will also be prewritten while others are written then shortly posted thereafter (after editing of course😊)!

Different story tags will be added to the story as it goes along so as to not spoil certain story elements for those reading this story as it comes out. Also, additional tags will be written here if they are important, and/or I have reached the tags limit. An archived tags section may also at some point be added.

Additional Tags: OC, Crystal Ponies

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 19 )

Man this story starts very well,I’m excited to see the rest.

I’m excited for this story.

Esta historia empezó bien, pero me pregunto dos cosas, primero, King Sombra será un Anti héroe? Segundo y más importante, estas pensando en incluir un multiverso? Porque si todo lo demás en equis está muerto, es casi imposible mantenerse en ese mundo y aunque se que sombra es uno de los seres en FIM más inteligentes y astutos, es solo un pony (muy loco) y no creo que sea suficiente como para mantener tanto tiempo el imperio de cristal oscuro de una u otra forma sombra deberá agarrar su imperio y largarse de allí

Interested to see where this goes be interesting if things are so bad sombra end up being the good guy in comparison to what happened to the world

So far so good. :twilightsmile: Nice chapter, though I did spot an error earlier on.

It is meddling, not metaling. Or did you mean Sombra magicking the door?

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Good to know you like my story so far, and no I did not intend to have Sombra start metal bending :twilightsheepish:

Thanks for catching that, and it's fixed now! :twilightsmile:

Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work.

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Thanks, that means a lot! Glad to see you and everyone else is enjoying the story so far, more chapters soon. :raritywink:

Is this Sombra going to be anything like that weird goofy Sombra from Season 9? Because I really didn't like that Sombra.

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I'm not going to spoil what he will become, but I will say that while he'll start off a bit more cocky and arrogant he'll be very quickly given an ego check. So how he starts out here is not how he'll be at the end of the story. TLDR: He's going to be more like season 3/5/comics Sombra for a decent chunk of the story.

Nice to see this story get an update. Though I am curious about that magical dead zone. Just what happened to this world?

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Well, you'll just have to keep reading on to find out! 😁
All will be revealed in due time... :raritywink:

Sombra's method of governing is too low.
His rule was based on military victory, and he relied on deterrence to overcome all injustice and tyranny.If he fails in the war, he will be finished if he loses his national foundation.
Must change this method, such as claiming that there are wolves outside, so that the national consciousness can not live without the king, they will naturally support you.
The economy must be controlled, and all facilities related to people's livelihood must be personally intervened by the king. So that the people can not organize, must know that there is a king, they can live a normal life.
Ordinary people never care what you are, he only cares if you can make him live a good life, at least not a bad life.

Hmm, does this have to do something with Nightmare Moon?

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This story started well, but I wonder two things, first, will King Shadow be an Anti-hero? Second and most importantly, are you thinking of including a multiverse? Because if everything else in equis is dead, it is almost impossible to stay in that world and although I know that shadow is one of the most intelligent and astute beings in FIM, it is just a pony (very crazy) and I do not think it will be enough to maintain the dark crystal empire for so long in one way or another shadow will have to grab his empire and get

I haven't had a chance to get very far into the story yet, but as long as there is still rain, with a city full of people, he has the ability to restart the world. There are enough people to repopulate without the problems from inbreeding. And he should have enough from farms and city trees, bushes, etc, to regrow the land around them. It all boils down to wind and water. Mainly rainfall.

Todavía no he tenido la oportunidad de llegar muy lejos en la historia, pero mientras todavía llueva, con una ciudad llena de gente, tiene la capacidad de reiniciar el mundo. Hay suficiente gente para volver a poblar sin los problemas de la endogamia. Y debería tener suficiente de granjas y árboles de la ciudad, arbustos, etc., para volver a hacer crecer la tierra a su alrededor. Todo se reduce al viento y al agua. Principalmente lluvia.

Monk

The darkness will never be G Switch dominated for a long time. I always believe in my beloved horses.

So far I have really enjoyed this and I'm happy your sticking to season 3 Sombra.

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