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Child of Stars


I like to write, I like to read, and I've got a lot of story ideas floating around in my head. What more can I say?

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~A Puss in Boots: The Last Wish and MLP crossover~

This is a sequel to the movie so there will be spoilers for it, you've been warned.


Puss staved off Death, his relationship with Kitty has never been better, and he's got a new friend in Perrito! Nothing should have gone wrong, but an old enemy and a few new ones have come seeking power. Power that threatens Puss and those he loves. To help defeat these foes and protect the ones he cares for Puss will have to travel far and wide in search of new and powerful allies. It's just his luck then that he happens to come across a gateway to another dimension. A dimension in which Puss will find six unlikely heroes. The question is will they arrive in time, or will their help come just a little too late? Can the legend beat the odds and save his friends? How did these two worlds collide? What is the Philosopher's Stone? And what is that ominous whistling, it sounds so familiar...


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Loved the movie so much! Seen it in theaters four times all ready (And a lot more at home), so good! Definitely my second favorite movie of all time. Didn't see a full-blown crossover with it on here yet, so here's my crack at it. I hope you enjoy!

More tags will be added as the story progresses. I don't want to spoil it through the tags you know.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 83 )

Didn't see a full-blown crossover with it on here yet

Well, I made a fic with Death in it.

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Slippin' in your story into a comment section maaay not be the best way to show off.

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Eh, prolly, I just wanted to share what I did. 'Cause I thought we'd bond over our love for this movie.

Pretty excited to see how it goes!

I’m interested, please tell me more.

Colour me invested. The Administration shall monitor this/these world(s).

Interesting start, though I'm concerned how Nightmare Moon already knew of Jack's name.

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All will be revealed in due time and all that jazz.

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Glad to hear it isn't being ignored.

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That's why I wrote full-blown crossover. I meant like a big long fiction that had to do with multiple parts of the movie colliding with multiple parts of MLP. I've actually read your story and considered it more of a light crossover where it is an MLP story with a character from the movie in it, and not a big crossover where tons of elements from both franchises collide if that makes sense. Also I mean no offense when I say this and I won't delete your comment, but for future reference to everyone reading this don't post your or some else's story in the comments section. That is what The Shameless Self-Promotion Bureau group and other similar groups are for. You can talk about other stories and stuff but just please don't post them, thanks.

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Well it's cool that we both like the movie, just refer to my previous response for my opinion on your last comment. But yeah I liked your short story and the movie was fantastic. Neat to know there are other people on here who like it!

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Also I mean no offense when I say this and I won't delete your comment, but for future reference to everyone reading this don't post your or some else's story in the comments section.

Yeah, it would have been smarter to just say; "Oh, neat, I made a crossover too" instead of posting it. I guess I was just a bit too excited.

Neat to know there are other people on here who like it!

In Puss in Boots, we trust.

I was wondering when someone would combine these two properties together.

About time we got one of these crossovers. Hope to see this story till the end.

Well this is a pretty interesting start of a story and apparently this is during the time of the first season of My Little Pony friendship is Magic and apparently the elements of harmony did not work but instead just send them somewhere else while this is happening with Nightmare Moon meanwhile that psychopath Jack Horner was about to get what he deserved even in death but something pulled him out and who is this mysterious creature I guess we'll find out next time

Who doesn't love puss in boots he's amazing I seen the first and second movie

Will Death’s siblings War, Famine and Pestilence appear? You know, to showcase the Four Beasts of the Apocalypse?

The dark figure that sat upon the throne was cast in shadow, making it impossible to make them out. Jack still tried, squinting. The only detail he could make out were a pair of slitted eyes as the creature’s voice boomed to life.

I bet this is Nightmare Moon:applejackunsure:

:duck:
Well, look what the cat dragged in... HIMSELF!!

NOW THIS! IS HOW YOU DO A CROSSOVER STORY! GREAT CHAPTER MY MAN!:pinkiehappy:

Given the weirdness I'd take a wild guess and supect Grogar has returned to derail things on both worlds.

Ah hell yeah, this is what a good crossover is all about.

I really hope we get to see more Death..cuz he's so fucking cool

LET'S GO!!!!! HYPE!!!!!!!!!

Wait I just realized that is Jack Horner was revived. OH NO! BABY UNICORN HORNS. Half as heavy, twice as sharp.

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That means somebody’s gonna die in confetti oh sh:yay: they better watch out for that crazy psycho pathic man

ngl kinda cowardly of you to pull the "before-during the pilot" thing
why not post-s9?
don't tell me you're one of those cowards who doesn't like anything post-s3 or somesuch nonsense

Holy hell. I hope Team Friendship is ok.. I want Puss to have another encounter with Death. But this time Death tells him about how Jack escaped somehow.

I think this was a great start and i look forward to reading more.

Another good chapter but i think you may need to go through it as there were some spelling mistakes that in some areas changed the meaning of the words for example you wrote "Hall" when you meant "Hull" and "Hulled" when you meant "Pulled"

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Thanks for pointing those out, they're fixed now.

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I have story reasons for why things happened to the main six during the season one premiere and not later. Just give it time, as the story progresses it'll make more sense. Also I do like all 9 seasons of the show, sure I like some seasons better than others, it's just for me it also felt fresh writing these characters at the beginning of their story as I've written and read plenty that were set later. Also just because someone doesn't like the later seasons of the show it doesn't make them a coward, everyone's got their own opinions and reasons for liking or disliking something.

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give me tips how make better story, my story found in my profile

“‘Team Friendship’?! Seriously Perrito, I cannot get over that!” Puss in Boots yelled over the sound of the turbulent sea, “I mean I don’t hate it or anything, but couldn’t we have all talked about it and come up with a cooler name?” The fiery orange cat stood upright on his hindlegs, which were securely placed within the boots of his name's sake, and paced along the bow of the boat. His black cape flapped wildly in the ocean breeze just like the feather sticking out of his black cap.

I like the name it sounds pretty cool

“Oh this is just so fun!” the pup yelled in excitement, “Team Friendship is getting along so well! Man, I can’t wait to meet all those people Puss was talking about. That Donkey fellow sounded like a real riot!”

I mean I'm sure he'll get along with donkey sort of lol 😆

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That literally makes no sense, you can't control what somebody can write about, if someone wants to write a crossover before the first episode, they have all rights to, that doesn't make them a coward nor does it mean they hate later seasons, it's called writing a story you want to write. And even if they disliked later seasons, calling them a coward is just imposing your own opinion on later seasons, and implies that their wrong for not liking it.

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Exactly, and I agree.
Edit: Just found out they're a troll, so if they come back ignore them:twilightsmile:

Oh, this is very very goood. Can't wait to see more, amazing crossover, dude!

“What just…” Kitty started before trailing off upon seeing Puss’s forehead. She hesitantly reached out and placed a paw on his head, using a finger to trace a scar. “When did you get this?” she asked in concern.

Oh yeah that's why both her and Perrito never saw the cut that death made in their first encounter

Oh man this is really getting interesting so far so after the aftermath puss kitty and Perrito are heading for far far away where Shrek and the others are and basically all of them are just resting up for the arrival and puss and kitty having the moment with each other but things escalated really quickly when there was a storm and they tried to hold on as fast as they can but Perrito fall overboard and kitty and puss got separated again things really got interesting I wonder how this will go guess we'll find out next time

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Good to know, thanks. Though what you and I said still holds true.

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