Tranquility

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A young Discord enjoys the sunrise. It's very quiet here, which means there is plenty of time to think.

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Violet Rose in The Rain #1 · Jul 13th, 2016 · · ·

I've only skimmed through the early sections of the story and them some, but I can tell that the sentence structure for some of the sentences seems a little awkward and stilted. Moreover, some parts could be a bit more fleshed out.

Unfortunately, I'm not operating at optimal capacity, so could you kindly wait before I post more constructive feedback later?

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Ice Star #2 · Jul 13th, 2016 · · ·

7388983 Sure, I can wait for more feedback.

CoffeeBean

CoffeeBean #3 · Aug 14th, 2018 · · ·

7388983

Unfortunately, I'm not operating at optimal capacity

Are you a rocket engine of some kind?

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #4 · Dec 6th, 2019 · · ·

Nice look into a young Discord in his early days and how some of his imaginative side here led to the the bedrock foundation of who he is in cannon.

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