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Mister Phoenix


Since the show over, I'm gone, no more stories from me

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Spin off to the cancelled Scootaloo & Sweetie Belle: The Thousand Year Door, not need to understand this story


"Aha, there they are. Anyways... I am a dazzling shadow of the ni-" He stopped, noticing no pony was there. "Oh come on!"

In the bright and fun fill town of Ponyville, one small pegasus colt will come and try to save the day and try to win the hear of his crush, Scootaloo. Well, at less he tries to be a hero, Rumble is The Masked Dork, I mean Crusader.

It looks like the word, loser has a new meaning when Rumble became The Masked Crusader.

Edited by: OmniWriter

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Comments ( 6 )

well that was as great and funny story:rainbowlaugh:, but I would have wish their was going to more stories about the Mask Crusader's Shenanigans.

7278693 If you like it, then give it a like :derpytongue2:

7279153 I thought I did:rainbowhuh:

The town of Ponyville, the bright, peaceful, and quiet town with the small monster coming in to destroy the town.

That's not a complete sentence.

Short and cute. Nice job!

Aside from a few grammatical errors, I love this.

Also, the ending. Super Cafe ftw!

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