This Is a squeal to Scootaloo & Sweetie Belle: Partners In Time (prequel is not needed to be readed to understand this story.)
With Apple Bloom being sick once more, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle go to their newly reformed friend: Diamond Tiara. Who finds a book that was hidden deep inside her home.
While Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle were hanging out with her, they watch her get kidnapped into another world making the two fillies to team up once again to save they now reform friend.
Before it too late, kidnapped by the evil King Sombra the two friends must journey into through the alternate version of Equestria meeting new friends and enemies.
Cover art and edited by OmiWriter
Chapters (5)
THIS IS AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
Why doesn't this story have a King Sombra tag?
6966262 Where did you get the icon for your avatar?
6980149 What does your username mean in English?
6983615
Because I don't have enough room, seeing Queen Chrysalis, Kind Sombra, the sort of mane six, Apple Bloom, Rumble, Changelings, Diamond Tiara, The Breezes, and many, many more characters. Plus in Paper Mario the main villain is more of a side character Bowser is gets more character then the main villain.
Plus King Sombra is really only going to show up in Diamond Tiara parts and he's not there for long. Lord Chump is more important character then who King Sombra got. So that's why his tag isn't in the story plus the story mostly covers Scootaloo & Sweetie Belle.
6983620 I don't know. I'll be honest: I named my profile (on all internet things, not just this) after the katana Ise no Kami, the sword Edea starts out with in Bravely Default. Yes, I named myself after a piece of starting equipment, but damn if it's not the best piece of starting equipment I've seen. (Probably because it takes a long while before you find another katana.)
Just one request, slightly longer chapters, like maybe 4,000 words? Other than that, excellent story.
7016796 Well I don't know about that,
I can see what I can do but I like keeping my chapters around the 3,000 word mark because that just feels like a good stopping point. Then there is Glitzville and Twilight Town that maybe that level of words. It just well after chapter one it may just be one chapter each so I don't know if I can make 4,000 words of that.
7017746 Works for me, as long as Creepy Steeple gets the Atomic Boo, is all that matters. Will Badges be introduced though? Like in the form of Sweetie trying something new for jumps and Scootaloo with the hammer? Just curious.
7020054 That's chapter four stuff if my mind is right. Badges no the Quick Change Badge is already there and well that's the most important one. Hammer and Jump up-grades yes, with Scootaloo getting the hammer and Sweetie getting the Jump and paper plane, boat and other paper stuff I want to put in.
7021672 Is what I was asking, the badge hammer and jump stuff.
If you have problems with the story, instead of cancel it, did you think about rewrite it?
7066975 Well I can't really re-write a story half way through and well if I did I would be changing the whole story. If anyone wants to re-write this story or just pick up where I left off, PM me about it.
7066989 And what could be the problem with changing the whole story? After all you cancelled it, you could try again, only if you want, making another story as you try to make it better.
Sorry if it seems that I insist but the story before was good, so that's why I suggest that.
7067042 Because of this;
I don't enjoy writing any of the chapters and I didn't make it mine own piece of work like Po-Gi-Oh Season One. Having this cancelled is for the best for me. Sorry about it, I stop enjoying writing the chapters, I would write a story no one like and enjoy writing the chapters then write a story everyone like and not enjoy writing the chapters. If I don't enjoy them what's the point in writing it?