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Dusk_Shine6995


I am me. Nothing more, nothing less.

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The colts, Dusk, Elusive, and Rumble have been friends for years. Everything is looking good for their usual guy time fun, but when three fillies they've known for years as the Cutie Mark Crusaders crash into their lives they find themselves changed. What will become of the CMC and the three colts? Only time will tell.

Marked Sex for inuendos and situations.
(A note for new readers, first off thank you oh so very much for looking at my fic. Secondly, Dusk and Elusive are not Rule 63 Twilight and Rarity, I had thought up the names before I knew of r63. That's not a "I had it first" thing I'm only pointing it out because I have gotten many comments about it.Thank you so much again for reading, have an amazing day!:twilightsmile:)

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Comments ( 222 )

it's so beautiful, and so heart warming. :heart::heart: I can't wait for more.

... Interesting.

What do Dusk and Elusive look like? When I here the names I think of R63 Twilight and Rarity (Which was why I was confused for the first part of the story, before I decided that they were not, in fact, a R63 Twilight and Rarity.

wait... That would make an interesting shipfic.

Boy are they gonna get it in the morning. :trollestia:

NobleQuickSilver that means more to me than you may ever know thank you. :twilightsmile:

clap2times Dusk Shine and Elusive are the r63 names but not in design, My picture here (though the older version) is what Dusk looks like.

moguera Maaaaaaaaaybe :raritywink:

Really like the story! Looking forward to updates!

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Good to hear I'm going to be writing this friday maybe tomorrow depending on how tired I am. :twilightsmile:

thanks for the comment!

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I should be writing chapter two on friday. thanks again for the compliment. :twilightsmile:

1344706 Great, now i have something to look forward to.

Riz

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So this is not a r63 fic ?

" curdling with a cute filly, comforting her, or getting kicked through a wall"
I think you meant cuddling, also i kinda think that elusive's story could have been dragged out a bit more, ended to quickly in my opinion, but otherwise you did a great job and i can't wait for the next chapter.

ERK! MAI HART IS DIEYING!?

Nah, but seriously. This is a great start to a good looking story. It is quite heart warmingly adorable as well.

You'd think that AB would be strong enough to kick plot :pinkiehappy:

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No no it's not. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for pointing out the cuddle and Elusives story will be drawn out a bit more... the next day :trollestia:

Good story! I love it haha and quick question: are the CMC a based a little older in this than in the show? I see them as about 8ish in the show, so that would be a little... weird...:unsuresweetie: ...
haha

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yeah haha they are based as 16 17 in the fic sorry i didnt make that clear enoug :twilightblush: :twilightsheepish:

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haha koolkoool, can't wait for the next chapter!

Celestia WHY is this not featured??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!/
its my favorite fimfic along with my little mommies
1. this story
2. My Little Mommies
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel:
:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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Wow... Thanks

:pinkiegasp: was pretty much my expression when i read that.

Anyway sorry for the long time no update everyone but I gots my reasons and you'll see em in my authors notes.

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I really think it should be featured and i had my mother read it and she was a harry potter fanfic writer and she said it was amazing!
:twilightsmile::raritywink::raritystarry::yay::ajsmug::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::raritywink::raritystarry::yay::ajsmug::pinkiehappy:

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Holy crap thats awesome tell her I said thanks!

Also thanks for sayn that :twilightblush:

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My mom also got into a war with Cassandra Claire the person who wrote city of bones
and Cassandra Claire threatened to choke and gut my dad for catching her with copying other peoples work
and then she wrote a book about how SHE was the one cyber bullied...
sorry had to get that out
:rainbowderp::applejackconfused::twilightblush:

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Well that is strange and she need to get her prioities straight.

Also thanks again for the comments and praise I appreciate it. (Note for future reference I suck at spelling untill im writing) :twilightsmile::twilightblush:

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Hey you all. So you are the ones that commented on my Fic so by my book that makes you my most avid readers. Now I love all the support I love the funny comments I love the confusion about R63. I LOVE IT ALL :flutterrage: anyway I just wanted to apologize for two weeks and no updates hope you forgive me :applecry: Well there is a reason for my lack of writing. two really, 1 I had writers block (notice the keyword there :trollestia: ) and 2 if you havent noticed yet Dusk is me, events of his past are the same as my own and in the next chapter... something very personal shows up and I'm happy to share it but nervous about reactions. SO THANK YOU ALL FOR THE SUPPORT LOVE AND PATIENCE! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::ajsmug::scootangel::raritystarry::coolphoto::heart::pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss::rainbowwild::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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Just finished, it's getting edited and I'll put it up soon!
:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::scootangel::rainbowdetermined2::pinkiehappy::coolphoto:

... dang... Good chapter, NEED MOOOAAAR!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:
... thats what you get for writing an interesting fanfiction :twilightsmile:

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............................I LOVE THIS FIMFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::duck::heart::heart:

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Happy to hear you enjoyed :twilightsmile:

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YUS I got lucky on that one :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

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believe it or not it wasn't a saw reference.

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I know it wasn't, I just couldn't resist~ forgive me? :fluttershysad:

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Who said it was a bad thing that you did make a saw reference? :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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Well Celestia damn him! :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

I however approve of such a reference! :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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Don't damn the time travelling professor! Great Scott, what's wrong with you!?

Jokes aside.
I am looking forward to the next chapter sir.

Like the high school Zorro you got going on. Can't wait to see more of that!

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Haha never thought of it like that but i like it. Although he isn't going to be wearing all black anymore, after all half his outfit is with a certain cute filly :scootangel::twilightsmile:

1583120Yeah I know. Though I do have one complaint: WHY DID YOU MAKE TWIST A JERK!? I love Twist! And plastic surgery!? Isn't that going a bit overboard!?

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Hey Twist was nice as a filly and honestly do you hold Spoon and Diamond above tainting the mind of a classmate and putting her through hell so that she were more like them? To be honest Twist was more over my reference to how desire for popularity changes everyone.

Who knows maybe I have a twist that involves Twist? :trollestia:

1583399Fair enough. But I'm pretty sure her parents would never approve of her going under the knife.

whit:twilightoops: scoots and dusk wher:pinkiegasp::rainbowderp:........ niiiiiceeee:moustache::eeyup:

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Um sorry but i misses abouuuuut... all of that :twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightsmile:

This is a good story I was up tell three in the morning till I fell a sleep keep up the good work ^_^

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I am both proud and thankful that I caused that :twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightsmile:

I love this story!

However, it could have been better if there was more build-up in certain parts.

Liked and favourited!

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