A pegasus pony wakes up in a tree with no recollection of who he is or where he came from. This is his story as he tries to remember his past, even as he tries to create the future with the mare of his dreams. This is my first fanfic so any constructive criticism will be helpful! I hope you enjoy it! A.N.- changed rating to teen just to be safe for the future.
"Um...excuse me...but if it's not too much trouble...could you please rate this story? I mean...if you want to...if that's ok with you..." - Fluttershy
Chapters (12)
This has gained my interest. Tracking...
Quite curious, and pretty well written. And, I think we'd all react that way on meeting Twilight.
A good start! Will be tracking this one.
Excellent
Thank you all! I'm glad you liked my first chapter enough to follow the story!
I love this so far! Tracking and I can't wait for more!
183347 Thank you!!
Tracking as well I love flirt RD, looking forward to more!
Your oc he he has phoenix wrights hair
Phoenix wright hair for the win
192624 Lol youre totally right! xD I never noticed that before
PLease, please, please tell me theres more rainbow and cloud cu if not ima go balistic
195786 Im still debating over who exactly the mare of Cloud's dreams is going to be, I'm keeping his options open for now
Yes
Im planning on next chapter starting with flying lessons then being a mainly RDxOC chapter
I can now sleep happiely
I'm glad to hear that
I'll get to work on the chapter right away 
Thanks. do bad i wont be able to read it untell i get back from practice
i ment to bad
Well if luck smiles upon me, it'll be waiting
you did it wrong your supposed to shot "Fus Ro Dah!" not mumble it.
Cloud huh well in that case I'm calling calling the earth pony JENOVA!
198364 Haha, yeah I realized after I published the chapter that I would be calling my oc pony 'Cloud' all the time, which is ironic cuz I don't really like the Cloud from final fantasy xD
First and this dude is in some deep crap now
Ohh very sexy and kinky
Consider 5/5 and tracked!
Very curious about next chapter :P
lol next chapter they will be like
Sir you ave outdone yourself in one chapter then in the others. Challenge compleat
I would gladly take twi's date for you
, but sadly I can't
. RD is still trying to "win me over" and Luna (I think) has a crush on me. Lucky me rarity let me hide in her spare room
Great chapter btw
you sir are royally screwed.
200348 You literally just made me laugh out loud
A/N: sorry everypony for the mostly filler chapter this turned out to be! But I had to kill the entire day that Cloud had before his dates and this is what came to mind
bear with me for a little longer, and soon everypony's emotions will be erupting, both for good and for bad! (But mostly bad) 
Two updates in one day?! Dude you are legendary! I wish I had that kind of free time lately. Won't have the chance to update on a daily basis for almost 2 weeks, have to rely on an update or two each weekend for my fanfic atm, good story too
202010 Thanks! I'm glad you're liking the story!
I'm just on a roll lately!
Keep at it and try this challenge.
One of the stories I'm traking got updated 3 times in a single day. Can you break the record?
202057 I can sure as hell try!
Clouds a dead colt walking isnt he haha
202064 You'll just have to wait and see
I got mixed feelings for wats about to happen
all i know is that if i were cloud i know what i would do
202077 You would go with Rainbow Dash right?
In a heart beat
202093 Im not usually one to brag...but CALLED IT!
haha very funny but is it my fault that dash is my all time fav.
202448 Um...yeah I think it is actually
thats besides the point
I would take twi ( read my bio then ask) I like them both but (in a non romantic way) I like twi better, although dash ( like cloud in this story) tries to "win me over", whatever that means
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202751 Haha, just be patient and Cloud will do the right thing. Maybe
ANd i would be all over Twilight instead of rainbow dash i would go up to rainbowdash and say
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202760 Lol, personally I think I would go for Twilight too
But I'm trying to make Cloud his own persona, not just a ponification of my own. So I still have to decide just who is the perfect mare for him 
At first i was like
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but then i was like
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my final result was
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nO THIS ISNT SPAM THIS IS JUST TO GOOD SO I HAVE TO LET OUT TEH TRUTH!
Forgive me XD