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MightyShockwave


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Rumble is lured...err...invited over by the CMC for a playdate, little does he know, they have something else in mind. Something more sinister and...slithery.

Cover pic courtesy of http://lets-ask-rumble.tumblr.com/
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Comments ( 24 )

I laughed at the sexual innuendo about Rumble snake-tail length and thickness :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

i hope there will be a story soon were thunder lane will get the potion

That was weird.



I like weird.

So i suppose the next one will include a snakelike Thunderlane with Flitter and Cloudchaser?

3970180 i hope not. sometime stories need to stick to the main characters.

Another fine addition to the snakepony series, I quite enjoy these being a bit of a hypnosis fan myself. I also tend to like the constriction aspect quite a lot, and though that was mostly absent here I still highly enjoyed it and look forwards to anything else you might care to write, because you are awesome.
Rock on Shockwave, Rock On.

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Thanks, yeah I felt this one was a little underdone because it deals with foals. I had to hold myself back because it felt pedo to make things fetishy here. I even felt a little guilty including that bit where Rumble admires having Apple Bloom in his coils.

Thunderlane, however, is a teenage pone and it'll be a lot more natural when he and the twins "experiment."

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Thunderlane, however, is a teenage pone and it'll be a lot more natural when he and the twins "experiment."

Dah dum dum, dramatic revirbe!

“Whoa whoa whoa whoa…whoa, wait, so you’re telling me that you drank a potion that turned you part snake and gave you mind control powers?” Thunderlane asked.
“Yeah, why?” Rumble asked back.
“Dude…you’ve GOT to get me some of that stuff!”

:rainbowderp: well, this has been...strange...

...i better get going. :pinkiecrazy:

I like how you basically have two kinds of stories here depending on if they are adults or foals and both are quite nice:twilightsmile:

this is so much stupid its hilarius XXXD in a very good way. great job

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Another installment in the one of the best canons in FIMFiction? I can't wait! :pinkiehappy:
(Please don't take another 9 months this time...)

What if the Flim Flam Brothers get wind of this snake oil potion, or if they were the ones who sold it to Rarity or something.

I wonder what Thunderlane would do with the Lamia potion.:unsuresweetie::trixieshiftright::duck:

Comment posted by nerdyGAMERgrl deleted Jan 12th, 2016

4534693 Oh sweet Celestia, I pray that never happens!

“Maybe later. I gotta keep my weight down to go fast on my scooter.”

*snorts*

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An athletic little filly has to watch her diet!

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Just how she said it was funny.

“Dude…you’ve GOT to get me some of that stuff!”

👋because men👋

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*facepalm muzzlehoof whatever it is called*

“Dude…you’ve GOT to get me some of that stuff!”

Me too. I will be a Serpentine general yet!

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