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JackRipper


A real lady killer.

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Princess Celestia was hoping that her reunion with her sister would come with little complication; she should have known better. Unable to sleep due to events prior, Celestia asks her sister to join her in a simple game of chess, her favorite game since before her banishment.

Being isolated on the moon for a thousand years debilitates the body; leaving Luna more vulnerable than Celestia had thought.


Cover art by miss-mixi on Deviantart.

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Comments ( 12 )

So, I liked this story I really did. But it wasn't what the description said it was. If you changed the description i'd be happy to give it an up vote, but as it is I just can't. But, once again it's a beautiful story! Great job.

JackRipper
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7196618
I made an adjustment, I think. :twilightsheepish:

JackRipper
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7196559
Graci.
:twilightsmile:

7196809
Thank you, now upvoted.:twilightsmile:

7196811

Oh, and about that forgotten Blood Shower collab, we could probably work on it soon. I wanted to take a brief break from it but I'm kinda in the moodset for some death right now so... :trollestia:

JackRipper
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I'll keep that in mind. :rainbowdetermined2:

Sorry I know it's nitpicky but shouldn't the sentence:

I yearned to see you every day for three-hundred and sixty-five thousand days.

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I yearned to see you every day for three-hundred and sixty-five thousand two-hundred and forty-nine days. Otherwise on average Celestia spent one day every four years not wanting to see her sister.

Otherwise, I really enjoyed this story and have upvoted it.

A nice little piece. With some more practice and an editor, I can see you going places.

JackRipper
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7219274
Thank you! :twilightsmile:

JackRipper
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Thank you. :heart:

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