TOBOR never liked humanity. All he wants to do is run his own diner and get away from humans, especially his crazy creator. Though, the only thing he seems to be good for is being a test dummy. He will never fulfill his dreams... or will he?
TOBOR was called once again by the scientist, Dr. F. to test a machine that will teleport one person to another place. Just like every experiment, TOBOR is not enjoying it. Though, for the first time, it worked well... a little too well. Soon, TOBOR reboots back to life after the incident and finds himself in the land of Equestria. What will our metal friend do?
Find out in The Adventures of T.O.B.O.R.!!
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Chapters (21)
THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!
Magic gave him an update but how does he charge his batteries? Could you tell about it?
More please
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Rainbow zaps him with a thundercloud
7234279 Well, when we all get updates for our systems, there's always a source.
So the question is... who sent it?
7234707 I would of put labeled it Mystery, but I think you all could figure it out who it was from the series.
Hmmm, you've caught my attention, I shall wait for more.
THANK YOU, FINALLY someone who talked some sense into those girls, I really hated them in that episode.
7235777 I agree I hate when they made look like jerk.
7234279 that make it to easy. i bet his batteries aren't run on electrical. but if he is with all the things he have. he going to need a stronger batteries cells to run them from a longer time.
7235977 Not to mention they're huge hypocrites in that episode, they criticize Trixie for her boasting, yet those 3 do it all the time. Applejack's always saying how her apple are the best in Equestria, Rarity is always showing off her dresses and beauty, and do I REALLY need to bring up Rainbow Dash, so yeah, hypocrites.
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This story is looking pretty good so far. I don't know anything about Mysims, but your story seems interesting. However, I noticed quite a few glaring errors in this chapter, and saw that you don't seem to pick a tense and stay with it. You constantly shift between the past and present tenses, often in the same sentence. I don't know if you have an editor already, but I think it would be a wise move to get one for this series.
Either way, cool story, interesting concept, and I'd like to see where it goes.
P.S. If you don't already have an editor, don't hesitate to ask me. I enjoy your work in Minecraft: Beginnings, and I would love to help out here. Good Luck!
this was epic, what game is tobor from i never heard of the characters.
7236440 I think from the wii game Mysims, don't worry I never heard of it ether.
You're both right, he's from the game Mysims Agents.
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OC: "well, might as well check up on-"
*RIIIINNNNGGG*
"DEAR SWEET CELSTI-" *muffled yelling*
This is what I pictured before the pictures events started
tobor weapon won't damage the dragon armor. don't even 20mm can hurt it scales.
I foresee third degree burns in the main six's future. Also I am injoying the story so far keep up the good work.
7306499 thx
unless someone else beat them to it.
A sapient being just died and the only thing Rarity cares about is looting his treasure, Jesus
7368256 lol dragon don't die that! what do you think cause there explode?
7306499 Yeah this is really awesome, just wish it updated more. *sighs.*
7380180 there is next up now chapter
oh great the one of the princess is here...... i wonder what she what?
Oh boy things will get interesting when the concept of robots gets explained to celestia
Now TOBOR can ask some questions...
and Celestia will most likely be a troll.
I wonder how turbo is going to be repaired unless he have a self repair system are Twilight does some kind of spell
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it tobor!
7382178 I blame spell check
7382216 repair spell
no magic can fix tech that high only someone or something that been around tech of tobor level can help him.
only someone who been train in field can help him now.
but what cause there explode against or knock that dragon out of the sky? or that thing he saw you having clue what was that thing?
And then TOBOR let out a spark and a puff of smoke and keeled over.
An error message plays out: "Too much pretty. Emergency sleepmode initiated. Wait 2 minutes for automatic wakeup."
Will this said someone appear soon also
SPACE
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or something!...
Trixie, the master tease
Metal ball sound like a EMP grenade or call magnetic pulse grenade. The clone use in Star Wars or it could ion blaster the jawas use.
7409468 Those things caused havoc with the ODPs. Afterwards, we EMP-proofed them.
7424028 if iam wrong! then what toke tobor offline? he robot emp can shunt down anything!
7424028 there not on earth! there equestrian law or safe to take! form emp.
7425604 Yeah, sorry, thinking about different worlds here.... *armor sparks a little* Not again! *sighs, then starts repairing*
The cover art is cute but the green throws it off. The ears should be grey and the eyes should be blue to match.
7430502 But then he wouldn't match the original coloring from his old body.
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7430532 in that case the green makes sense. It's a suit over a green being. I'm just messing with you anyway lol. I tend to like matching colors and things like that.
Good job
That monkeybut dude or whatever sounds like a evil/cool dude
Nitpicks:
that should be "alright", correct?
And,
this one should be "of", i think.
well interesting chapter. but i think this Morcubus is copying Trixie. Quite badly, i might add.
7432204 Sorry for the grammar. I got bad vision. As for Morcubus, his little exit is the very same thing he did from the game in the first level. He announces his name and laugh in a villain like manner.
7432342 really? i have never played the game, but i might look it up someday.
still feels like morcubus is copying "The Great and Powerful Trixie!"
Trixie is much better at dramatics than morcubus.
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7432384 Dude, the game itself is from 2006. It's a Wii / DS game. In the game, Morcubus is a super villain.
Kind of like those stuck-up higher class villains we all see in movies or cartoon if you know what I mean.