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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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We need twilight to find Them haveing sex ????????????

7053293 The way I finished this story it is implied that they will continue to have encounters like this. I left it open for a sequel so something like that could happen, and in the case of Twilight, JOIN THEM!

7053301 uhhhhhhh that sound fun but it would be even funny if she was aggressiv While haveing sex

Welll..... cadence is a piece of shit, thank you for that

7053307 Which one would be funny to be aggressive, Tia, Cadi or Twily? If I write a sequel to this, I would likely make Twily be the sub.

7053726 mmmmm i would make twiliy sub first indtil her fire is woken then she goes dom mmmmm

Just finished first chapter and I guess a lot of people could say tha this feels rushed, but what called my attention was saying that Cadance is OOC in the description. I don't know about that. This is usually said about a character when it behaves out of the normal without a good reason for that, and Cadance's behavior seems justified by the past events and her inner turmoil. Not to mention that Cadance barely has a "canon character" to speak of.

7053737 Actually, that does sound like a good idea. The more you mention things, the more I think about writing a sequel to this. It may not be for a couple of months but adding a third princess would make it all the more fun and more difficult to hide from Luna.

7056482 haha and when luna does twilight fucks her into submission and makes luna her own fuck slave :)

7057876 No, that isn't going to happen. I have Luna's character sculpted in a very specific way in all of my stories. The only time she ever deviated from being a stoic princess was when she aided Colgate in killing Princess Twilight in "Colgate's Practice 2: A Royal Problem" so that she could crown herself queen given that Celestia and Cadence were already dead.

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Cadance's behavior seems justified by the past events and her inner turmoil.

Too often, mothers are told that they should be thinking completely about their children and not at all about themselves (at least based on my experience of the writings of mothers), and often those who admit to thinking "too much" about themselves, their health, their financial and employment situations, et cetera, are stigmatised and shamed (even though those considerations are very pertinent to the wellbeing of children). In at least one case in the 50s, an actual psychiatrist threatened to charge a mother with child abuse for being too emotionally distant from her child.
Combined with the fact that pregnancy is highly disruptive of the hormonal balance of the pregnant person both during and after the pregnancy (and in many cases they are cut off from psychoactive medicines "for the health of the baby", often even when abstinence from medication is demonstrably what harms the fetus*), such behaviour is not only understandable but inevitable.

* In particular I was thinking about opioid maintainance programs, in which opioid withdrawal causes a significantly greater risk of miscarriage:

I Just Found Out That I’m Pregnant – Can I Just Stop Using Now?

Going through opiate withdrawal during a pregnancy greatly increases the risks of miscarriage. For safety, pregnant women are strongly advised to avoid opiate withdrawal.

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I couldn't get past chapter two. Luna's speech just hurts trying to read because it sounds nothing like her.

Ugh i hate it when people write luna talking like that its so hard to read

The moral of the story.

In order to be a great mother. Be an unfaithful wife :ajbemused:

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