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Eddy13


A major fan of FlutterDash, comedy, adventure, and other MLP things.

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Twenty years ago, an egg born to the most powerful of all dragons and his mate was laid. Fearing the hatchling's potential, an evil, power-hungry dragon led a campaign against the dragon king's stronghold. To protect their child, the king and queen sacrificed themselves to take down the villain while entrusting their child to their closest friend: the alicorn Princess of the Sun. Five years later, the egg hatched and the young dragon has since been living a peaceful, happy life among the ponies, especially the one who was responsible for his hatching, completely unaware of his past.

However, the evil dragon has returned and plans to led an army of dragons in the conquest of Equestria. To save the land and his friends, the young hatchling must learn his true destiny and discover the great power he has within.

Contains Sparity as the main pairing, with FlutterDash and FlashLight as secondary pairings.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

Interesting start. Due to the names of the dragons, I'm guessing you're basing your story off of the Legend of Spyro Series. I named my Legend of Spike Series after the Zelda Series because I based my first story off of Majora's Mask.

I am impressed, and eager to see more.

Nice start! I'd like to see more of this!

*Meanwhile inside my mind*

OOOHHHH MMMYYYY GGGAAAAWWWWDDD LEGEND OF SPYRO!!!! ADADSHSHSGFWBNSK

*ahem*

So before he's even hatched, he's gonna be a Prince at the very least...I wonder how Tia handles being a mother until it's time for the real hatching. :twilightsmile:

7/10 Good start. Dialogue could be more natural. Something about it seems like they're actors reading lines instead of being characters.

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They were OCs. You can't expect me to have nailed their dialogue down perfectly at the first try, can you?

Its nice to see another good Spike story

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Well, only Spike's parents, actually. The villain is named after the infamous dragon from 'The Hobbit' and his second-in-command is named after a villain from 'Teen Titans'. Also, the plot of the story (which I need to start coming up with) will go differently than the 'TLOS' series. Still, glad you liked the idea enough to comment on it.

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Yeah, I got some of the ideas from the 'TLOS' series, but I'm not copying it completely. And don't worry, there will be more coming eventually when I iron out the plot.

Comment posted by DanvilleBengal deleted May 13th, 2021

I hope you make more on the legend of spike.

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:facehoof:Unfortunately, I have so many story ideas going off in my head that it's hard to focus on one. Don't worry. I haven't deserted any story.

Can you do chapter two of the legend of Spike on Christmas?

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Sorry. Nothing's coming to me on it. I need time to think it out.

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