This story is a sequel to You Call That A Costume?
When Pinkie Pie is in charge of the Independence Day fireworks celebration, she decides to add her own touch with her specialty fireworks. Intrigued, Sunset and Twilight decide to get involved to help take it up a notch. Naturally, hilarity ensues.
Hilarious. Any story that makes a reference to The Producers is worthwhile in my book!
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Ah, so you know what main gag's reference was, huh? It was actually seeing that movie that inspired this story idea.
I love everything about this paragraph. I found it both comedic and fluffy. Bravo good sir, bravo.
Cheesus Ham Sandwich Chrust, Pinkie Pie. Why are you not being contracted by the military.
I was not disappointed by this fic. But then again, your pieces never disappoint me. On the contrary, I somewhat envy the fact you are able to write palatable humor. I have no idea how to write a comedy.
I suggest not using nicknames when addressing the characters by narration, but other than that and a couple of missing punctuation marks in various places, this story's good
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Actually, I think that might've been a typo. I took care of it.
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