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Eddy13


A major fan of FlutterDash, comedy, adventure, and other MLP things.

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After the truth that Rainbow Dash wasn't eating the pies Pinkie made her came out, Twilight inquired if there was anything else she was lying about, which Rainbow denied.

Turns out that Rainbow still has some secrets.

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Comments ( 19 )

Wow it's awesome :rainbowlaugh:

So Lyra and Bon-Bon aren't the only couple here?

Nice.
Very short. But it was a fun story and its great to see more from you. I should probably see this episode since there's actually a reference that can be taken for Flutterdash.

Comment posted by evilkord deleted Oct 14th, 2017

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I wanted it to be a surprise.

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Oh sorry, I deleted my old comment.

MJP

are you still going to update "you call that a costume"

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Didn't you read the Author's notes?:facehoof: Yes. The second chapter is almost finished. I'm hoping to get it done tomorrow.

Good job! I loved this it was cute!

MJP

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oh, sorry

a lot of authors have a tendency to never finish stories after 1 or 2 chapters

Meh, this is alright but it didn’t really HOOK me in at any point. If it weren’t so short I probably would have quit reading halfway through. There was no major twists or excitement to it and it made reading it a bit dull. Sorry.

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If you found it dull, then why did you read it?:fluttercry:

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To see if it would get better. I’m sorry if my comment didn’t help much. I didn’t know exactly what to say but I had to give SOME sort of feedback.

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I should probably see this episode since there's actually a reference that can be taken for Flutterdash.

There was a reference to that? Where was it?

How come this story doesn't have Fluttershy tagged? She gets just as much screen time in this story as Rainbow Dash does.

Otherwise, I enjoyed this story. I love how Rainbow Dash has somepony to talk to about keeping lies, because the pony she's talking to can relate to it with a secret themselves. This story also makes a good point about how some things are better left untold. Sharing secrets with your friends should be okay. But revealing your secrets with the whole town, that could definitely change how some ponies look at them. (Unless they already know about Lyra and Bon Bon.)

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"Secrets and Pies". After it's revealed that Rainbow Dash didn't like pies, Twilight asked her if she had any other secrets, which Rainbow immediately denied, giving an opening for any kind of secret she has.

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Glad you liked the story.:twilightsmile: As for your question as to why there's no 'Fluttershy' tag, I wanted it to be a surprise. That's why there's also no 'Romance' tag.

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Twilight asked her if she had any other secrets, which Rainbow immediately denied, giving an opening for any kind of secret she has.

Aha! Got it!

Glad you liked the story.:twilightsmile: As for your question as to why there's no 'Fluttershy' tag, I wanted it to be a surprise. That's why there's also no 'Romance' tag.

I see. Unfortunately, that surprise kinda gets spoiled considering what group this is in. Not to mention, it gets revealed very early in the story, so, not much of a surprise there. But hey, I always felt that the Tragedy tag always spoils a story's ending outcome, so, I can understand that.

Ah short, sweet, and cute, just what I need.

ERainbow's Other Secret
Was Rainbow Dash truthful when she claimed she wasn't lying about anything else?
Eddy13 · 1k words  ·  41  2 · 1.6k views

They’re so adorable. I cannot handle the floof.

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