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protractror
I write stories, I hope I'm getting better as I go. Watch out for unfortunate go time and Home Alone, not my best works.
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A decent story. But it this a one-shot? You have it marked as complete and you left it open for something else.
Ok. You win an Internet.
This was absolutely awesome.
Wait, complete?
No, please, MOAR!
I mean seriously, this is good stuff!
That. Was. Outstanding.
Continuation of this story pretty, pretty please!
Someone clearly has thought out view on the subject of time travel
Pretty good story. There must be more too it, much too fun to leave now :D Surprised out who he rescues...
The Doctor rescued LUNA, where's Celestia?
I feel this should be expanded upon, yet... meh, it's good as it is.
Is this really all of it?
MOAR
Please!
Or else Fluttershy will cry!
Please don't end it like this!
Moar please this has SO MUCH potential.
This really needs a follow up with the adventures of The Doctor and Luna gathering the elements and finding Celestia
Well, this is what happens when I try and write a oneshot. I'm currently in the middle of two other stories I really need to update so I don't plan on starting a new one like this. I also didn't plan on this feedback however, so who knows? Maybe someday I will write some sort of sequel, but in the meantime I think you guys can figure out what happens.
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I'm actually tempted to write a chapter after this. hah
Love it, mate. I love the idea of these two talking casually. Like how an Angel and a Devil and afternoon tea.
Hoping for more.
I once said I never upthumb a fic based solely upon principal. I stand corrected once again.
Edit: Consider expanding and hiring an editor. Still an awesome, awesome concept. You should also add a "crossover" tag. Because much as the Doctor should exist, he's sadly another intellectual property.
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Good catch on the crossover. Sometimes it's easy to forget that he's not a canon character with so much fan works devoted to him.
Also, I totally agree. My work definitely needs an editor
3220418 You don't have one?
Well, if you mosey on down to The Proofreader Group, you can find one with no trouble. Or, y'know, you could just ask me, since I happen to be one.
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Yeah, some of my older fics were proofread through /fic/, but this one and a few others were just too much of a hassle.
I might take you up on that offer whenever I end up making another story.
LOVE IT!