The Doctor, the last surving Timelord of Gallopfrey, travels through time and space, along with his companions from Equestria.
The Missing Cutie Marks: The Doctor is in, making his debut in Equestria! He soon finds that not all is well, however, when ponies’ cutie marks mysteriously go missing… The "disease" is spreading, and the Doctor must find out what's causing it with the help of his new friend, Twilight Sparkle.
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I may not much about the good doctor but I'm gonna enjoy reading this.
More please.
You accidentally the Doctor? Seriously though, thanks, more coming!
I love Doctor/Twilight stories can't wait to see where this goes
You've succeeded in capturing my interest. Running the risk of sounding like a broken record, the DW crossovers are like crack to me.
The Doctor doesn't know?!!! We're so bucked!
It's fairly short, but of decent quality. I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more attention. Some of the memes are a bit out of place, though.
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Thank you for your citizism
Memes? Please elaborate.
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Reference things like this, but don't shoehorn them in. People who aren't fluent in memes will just be left scratching their heads, wondering what the hell that was about.
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Haha omg I left that in there? Thank you for pointing that out!
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Also this.
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As I was reading, I thought "HAS to be the drugs. Why would they have been brought up otherwise?" It makes me happy when characters pick up on leaps of logic as soon as viewers/readers do.
some doctor who creatures you should know.
Sensorite (From the first doctor episode, The sensorite)
The Sensorites
In stature, the Sensorites are somewhat shorter than the average human; but in appearance, they are very different. Their hearts, for example, are in the center of their bodies. Their egg-shaped bald heads are covered with tufts of cottony hair, their ears are pointed and their eyes are lidless. They wear coveralls and seem to have disc-shaped feet. Additionally, they seem to be able to survive the vacuum of space unaided, although they do prefer to travel in spacecrafts which make a high-pitched whine as they approach.
The Sensorites communicate verbally, but can also communicate telepathically if they want to have a private conversation or if they wish to converse with someone a great distance away, in which case they do so by pressing a flat communication disc to their forehead. They can receive quite well without the disc, but require it to send telepathic messages - and, in fact, the disc can even enable humans to project telepathically. The Sensorites can also use their telepathy to control crafts, control brains or blanket out the minds of other beings. The number of telepathic frequencies covering the surface of the Sensesphere are numerous. However, their ability to communicate telepathically is not entirely advantageous - they can be disoriented by a concerted mental attack. It also means that they do not entirely trust non-telepathic races. Anyway, they find human names absurd.
Their remarkable telepathic abilities are countered by their more delicate aural and visual reception - more simply put, the Sensorites hate loud noises and darkness. Their eyes are completely dilated, making them unable to see in even semi-darkness. Sound can be used as a weapon against them, even yelling. Extreme sound stuns their brain and paralyzes their nerves.
The Sensorites live on a planet known as the Sensesphere, where the society is structured in both family groups and a caste system. The elders think and rule; the warriors fight; and the other Sensorites work and play. There also seems to be a scientist caste. Each caste is led by a First, who is aided and advised by a Second (personally chosen by the First), as well as a Third and so on. These are distinguished by markings on their coveralls - for example, the First Elder wears a twin sash, while the Second Elder wears only one sash. While these distinctive markings set the elite apart from the rest, the ordinary people are satisfied with their similarities. There is no disgrace in belonging to any particular caste; it is simply what one is best fitted for, implying that birth has nothing to do with caste selection. Even the City Administrator hails from the lower caste. However, the assertion that all Sensorites are content is a fallacy - some are assuredly not.
In some ways, the Sensorites are very technologically advanced. Among their inventions is a hand-ray weapon - shaped like a metal circle, with crosshairs in the center, on a handle. This can paralyze a being for up to one hour from a distance of as much as thirty yards, burn wood, and even remove the lock from the TARDIS. They have created a disintegrator which can be aimed precisely at almost any point; this is enabled with a firing key, which only the First Warrior and the First Elder possess. They use portable radio-electric lights and have a system equipped with electrothermal cuttles in their palace which enables them to tell where people are. And yet, despite these wonders, their grasp of some basic scientific principles is astonishingly poor - they are not very skilled in scientific method, for example.
Ten years prior to the Doctor's arrival on the Sensesphere, five humans visited the planet. The Sensorites welcomed them, although their minds were closed...but it was a mistake, for the men disovered that the Sensesphere was a very rich planet. They quarrelled, and two of them took off from the planet, but the ship exploded a mile up in the atmosphere. The Sensorites assumed that the others had hidden themselves aboard and fought for control of the ship. Following the visitors' arrival, the Sensorites began dying in greater numbers every year, and soon became severely xenophobic. When a ship approached the planet, the Sensorites would put its occupants into a deep, death-like sleep and provide them with food, but they would not allow them to leave orbit.
When Maitland and his crew arrived at the Sensesphere, one of the crewmembers - John - discovered that the planet contained high levels of molybdenum. The Sensorites detected his excitement and had to silence the ship's crew, lest news of the planet's riches spread. The Doctor was able to ingratiate himself with both the ship's crew and the Sensorites, and persuaded the planet's inhabitants to tell him about the disease that had been destroying their population.
As Ian soon discovered, the first symptom of the disease was a burning throat - and after the appearance of the first symptoms, no-one had lived longer than three days. Oddly, they had noticed, the disease did not affect the Elders. The Doctor discovered why when he was told that the Elders only drank a special kind of "crystal water" from a rare spring in the Yellow Mountains that were around the city. The other Sensorites drank water from an aqueduct beneath the city, though it was well-refined before consumption. The Doctor investigated and narrowed down the cause of the "disease" to atrophine poisoning, a diagnosis borne out when he discovered deadly nightshade in the aqueducts. It had been introduced into the water system by a group of humans who had been living in the aqueducts ever since their crewmates had attempted to leave the planet. Thinking they were at war with the Sensorites, they had tried to kill them all by poisoning the water supply. The Doctor was able to cure the Sensorites and free Maitland's crew.
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Ogrons (Day of the Dalek, frontier in space)
Ogrons are a form of higher anthropoid - tall, stout, ape-like aliens which used to live in scattered communities on one of the outer planets. Their planet is located in an otherwise completely uninhabited sector of Draconian space, and it is a stark, rocky place. The main lifeform on the planet is some kind of large, savage reptile. But to the Ogrons, the main lifeform is a billowy orange monster with tentacles. They fear it, and worship it as some kind of god.
As sentient aliens go, the Ogrons are rather simple-minded and stupid. They are highly subservient and seem to be very happy blindly obeying the orders of their masters. Because they are so loyal, and honest to boot, they are often employed as policemen - or mercenaries, used to do others' dirty work. When the Master employs them to attack and board ships and steal their cargo, to make the Earth and Draconian empires suspect one another, he equips them with a neuronic stun gun which can also kill people, burn through metal doors, and blow the locks off doors. They are very burly and strong. While Ogrons do speak, their speech is slow, reflecting their ponderous thought processes. They usually lumber around, but can be quick when the need arises.
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Tractators (From the episode Frontios)
The Tractators are an insect-like race, bearing some similarities to pillbugs. Unlike the average Earth insect, the Tractators are very intelligent, with highly refined powers of abstract reasoning. They make a gargling scream when hurt. They live underground, where they construct funtionally advanced excavation machines to create extensive and elaborate tunnel systems. To drive these machines, they need the minds of living beings. The individual's body is hooked into the front of the excavation machine.
Tractators can produce a gravity beam with the aid of their antennae. They can even exert this force as far as outer space, if they want to snatch a passing spacecraft or batter the surface of their current planet with asteroids. This force is more commonly used, however, to bring living bodies from the surface for use in their excavating machines. To do this, they first aim their gravity beams upward at a being who is weakened - for example, unconscious or wounded. Pockets of earth around the body begin spiralling downward, and then the body itself is pulled down into the earth. For those living on the surface who see only a screaming man being pulled into the ground, this fate results in fear and paranoia, and phrases like "the earth is hungry", "the appetite beneath the ground" and "Frontios buries its own dead."
The Tractators expand and populate planets beneath the soil, being likened to an infection. The Tractators once attacked Trion in such a manner, either when Turlough was young or far enough in his past to constitute a race memory. On Frontios, they are led by the Gravis, who is capable of speech. Other Tractators are guards. Having been marooned on Frontios for 500 years after their old planet neared the end of its useful powers, the Tractators disabled the first ship that passed and pulled it down to the planet's surface. They allowed the Earth colonists ten years to establish their settlement, then began bombarding the planet with asteroids and culled the weakened humans. With their excavating machines, they smoothed the rock walls to a polish in order to act as wave guides and concentrate the force of their gravitic beams. They intended to build a mathematically-precise ring of tunnels, forming a gravity motor. This would enable them to pilot Frontios through the galaxy using the power of gravity, so that they could infest new planets for breeding, stealing and plundering wherever they travelled.
The Tractators draw their strength from the Gravis; without him, they become harmless, burrowing earth creatures. Isolating the Gravis from the rest of the Tractators, then, is the best way of defeating them. On Frontios, the Gravis coveted the Doctor's TARDIS, thinking it an excellent means of transportation and a way to spread themselves around the galaxy even more quickly. Although the TARDIS had been broken apart under the Tractator's gravitic force, the Gravis reassembled it around himself, cutting himself off from the others. The Doctor transported him to the rocky planet Kolkokron.
FINALLY! IT'S HERE!
"Twilight sighed. More running."
Get used to it Twilight, you've become involved with the Doctor, if you think this amount of running is bad then wait till it has really hit the fan.
This is nothing compared to the running the Doctor goes through on an almost daily basis.
She smiled as he remembered
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Good read. This Doctor appears to be the Eleventh am I correct?
Nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's just like the episode with the living sun!!!!! Noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!! No!!!! NO!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nice catch. Thanks.
As for the Doctor, honestly I'm not sure. Originally, it was supposed to be the Tenth. I started with trying to go for Tennant's personality, but I found Smith's to be easier to write and it just turned into him as it went. More 11 than 10?
887137 Well Smith is more random and random is more fun.
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people are wibbly wobbly about personality. in fact 10 and 11 share most traits in personality wise. just how they would react under circumstances would be diffrent.
10 is still the wounded soldier, he is trying to peice his life together through fun and 11 has done so.
10 can get mad but 11 holds it in till he explodes.
Twi was all dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
Good chapter. Now for the spelling errors.
“I’m not going! Twilight blurted out, her anger returning. "
"I'm not going!"
I can tell you,” “They
I can tell you, they
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She was being controlled She attacked us without mercy.
Twilight no master at lock picking, but she would have to do whatever was necessary to break into…
She saw it was only large cabinet in the corner of the room.
The tan spiky hired pony tumbled out of the cabinet, startling Twilight.
Good chapter. Caught me right before I was going to sleep. Found one error and one possible error.
them…” but I can still help you.
them..but I can still help you.
and reverse to polarity
and reverse the polarity
I think either way could go it's just the way you worded it sounds more like a the then a to.
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your assuming Spike was cooing it for someone else
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Never said that ponies ate it, only Spike. In retrospect, I should have learned my lesson after the Dexter story had the same problem.
325206 that is a big comment
927636 you couldn't make it Hay Bacon?
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Huh. Didn't even think of that. Thanks!
You better make twilight majorly freak out when she finds that the doctors an alien. I love when they do that.
Were did the doctor go?
I'm lovin it
Might want to edit this. Few mistakes. Other than that it's ausom
make another story!¡!¡!
Okay. I really liked this story, but I can't stand it when anyone leaves something even close to a cliff hanger ending. Please make another story!!!
Intro shouldve been here in my opinion
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lolololol
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At least Twilight will stay healthy!
By the time I read the words 'THE END' I was making a squee that could've rivaled Fluttershy.
lol, i say dont worry about where the memes are placed. its a very well written doctor whooves fic. and it actually kinda goes with what the doctor would actually say, at parts
and others 
but still awsome. i say thumbs up to you. have a cupcake, and i just fav'd this story.
aww, that was short! can you please make another one? this rivals the episodes themselves! it would be awsome to see another story like this, mabe with weeping angel type ponies! that would be intersting! anyway, thumbs up for a good story, fav'd, and here, have a muffin
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I agree, the idea of weeping angel-like ponies would be great. In fact, that idea is so great that I will now direct you to the PonyInABox production of Doctor Whooves Adventures, where the first two episodes have the weeping angels, or in this case, the weeping pegasi
2841252 woo! lead the way, that sounds interesting.
I would love to see a sequel
SEQUEL!!!... please?
Awesome ending I like the responses that everyone or in this case everypony got when they realized the TARDIS was bigger on the inside than on the outside. I really want you to make a sequel to this story I actually want to read a series of stories where Twilight is the Doctor's companion instead of Ditzy Doo/Derpy Hooves. I really want to see another story where Twilight and the Doctor go on an adventure together
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