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This story is a sequel to My Little Doctor Whooves: Horsing Around


Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack are now the newest passengers aboard the TARDIS with the newly regenerated Doctor. And for their first adventure, they go to one of the most important points in Equestria's history: the Fall of Discord.
But something's not right. Instead of being defeated, Discord is practically unstoppable. It's up to these time-traveling ponies to find out what went wrong and how to make it go right.

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Comments ( 29 )

I....LOVES IT! but just remember, twilight saw what happened. She would have noticed earlier...Right?

4067167 Well, this is not Princess Twilight Sparkle. I mean, I did use the character tag for unicorn Twilight.

Seems good enough.

ohhh dis gonna be guuudd :pinkiecrazy:

This is well done. You have Discord being intelligent, putting clues together, and getting an answer that makes perfect sense... but is wrong. And it's wrong in the right way. Discord's arrogance would naturally lead him to the assumption that images of himself causing chaos 1500 years from now means he's going to be around that whole time. (It's ironic, because this actually is the more logical conclusion, which means that under other circumstances Discord might have been a lot quicker to figure out that there are other possibilities... but this one hits close to home. If the logical, least complex and chaotic answer is "My life is going to be great for millennia", Discord's ego overrides his love of chaos and immediately assumes "Yeah, that one's right.") I also like the fact that he's portrayed as much more like the guy from the future that we all know than some wholly evil, corrupted, cackling maniac -- he still doesn't believe in killing, he still seems to think that ponies could learn to love chaos if they'd just give it a chance. He's definitely a villain, but not an irredeemable one, which makes sense given that in the future he will be reformed :-), but a lot of fans seem to like writing pre-stoning Discord as some kind of demonic monster, which never makes sense in the light of the fact that when he gets loose, he makes the sky rain flavored drinks and puts tutus on buffalos and does not try to kill his enemies.

4077750 Huh, didn't realize that writing characters (for the most part) in-character was something of a novelty around here.
Seriously, though, I'm glad you like him. I did try to capture that delightfully evil side of him that practically defines his character, even post-reformation. He's just not Discord unless you can laugh with him while he's being a jerk.

I love this story. Needs more rarity

I love this story. Needs more rarity

really liked how this came out ^^ can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

so Twilight created a Paradox with a spell that Celestia taught her.....cool

Well it looks like Discord is:coolphoto:Out of Time

YEAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

4110427 :facehoof: Even for bad puns, that was... just... :facehoof:

I kinda wanted to see the author's interpretation of what went down between Discord and the Princesses but you take what you can get
Although you'll still have to explain why Twilight won't remember any of this so yeah there's that

4110643 sorry I just am REALLY cheesy sometimes:twilightoops:

4111195 Well, once you have what actually happened becoming canon, "author interpretation" kinda becomes a tricky thing to work with. If it make you feel any better, though, I suppose my "interpretation" explains why Discord wasn't scared of the Elements.

I wanna hear about the clamshell, and giraffe :derpyderp2:

awesome story cant wait for the next one

Why would this story do any worse than the first edition of My Little Doctor Whooves? Actually I think this one should do even better, considering it's DISCORD. I meean, how could Discord ever be a bad thing?
Anyway, I just read the prologue so I can't really say anything just yet. If I find anything that might tell you why this one is "weaker" than your other stories, I will!

Very enjoyable. Looking forward to the third story of this series!

4111195 Well this is more like a different dimension were in the show she never met the Doctor and in this dimension were she meet the Doctor looking at the fall of Discord, but even I'm kind of derp at that kind of thing. :derpyderp2:
It's all wibbly wobbly timey wimey :derpytongue2:

Let me say that I am a HUGE fan of Doctor Who and MLP FIM.

4711164 Given how you've read all my DW crossovers in the span of a day, I figured as much.

Comment posted by Swordslash2899 deleted Jul 18th, 2014

4711739 It was a slow day and I was interested.:pinkiehappy:

On a side note, who do you think whould win in a fight Doctor Whooves, or Pinkie Pie?

Would like to see how he fares against other villains...

Can you write a sequel please. I really love this. I want to see why the other 2 choose to go

Cool. I can already see the mental wheels turning and I can't wait for the Doctor and Co to end up meeting Celestia and Luna.

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