• Member Since 2nd Oct, 2011
  • offline last seen March 14th

protractror


I write stories, I hope I'm getting better as I go. Watch out for unfortunate go time and Home Alone, not my best works.

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Pinkie has finally had a bad day, and she needs some time to decompress. Just a night of herself, gummy and some ice cream and she'll be all better tomorrow. However, Rainbow Dash wont have it. This isn't shipping by the way, but feel free to call it friendshipping.
Please read and review. I will love you forever. Unless you don't want that, but you know, your call.

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Comments ( 12 )
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Friendshipping: the most pointless tag ever created.

Love it! I think you have the two unseen sides of Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash here and you have them down pat, I can't wait for the rest!

Good. New sides of Dash and Pinkie. Grumpy and somewhat sad Pinkie looks much more real.

You know what really grinds my gears? XD I can't believe someone actually used that line in a fic. Great stuff!

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What does it even mean anyways?

Anyways, enjoyed this little story a lot. A nice sweet little story :twilightsmile:

Great story, look forward to seeing anything else you might write :pinkiehappy:

It was a pretty good story. It can have a chance to get in ED.

This was awesome! :pinkiecrazy: Nice job!

I liked this. A nice and quaint interpretation of Pinkie, Dash, and their bonds as friends. It was also very sweet :twilightsmile:

Not bad. A bit on the nose with the exposition of thoughts and ideas. Dialogue was a bit OOC for both of them in terms of vocabulary and tone. I will say that the theme and main ideas were good and I liked them. Execution could use more work, but hey, that's what this is about, right? Keep writing!

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