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Marshal Twilight


A smut-peddling armchair general with a love for writing and ponies.

Comments ( 27 )

If I had more time I would read this right now, but I will definitely have to read it first thing in the morning

Hot, steamy and sexy, what can i say, it was perfect!!:raritystarry:

Amm
Amm #3 · Sep 21st, 2015 · · ·

Discord added, giving Artemis a rather smoky look. The prince coughed and waved the fumes out of his face.

That is the best written rendition of a Discord thing that I've read in a while.

And it's here. Will read when I have more time later.

Holy shit this is too good. Liked and favorite.
Will there be a sequel/prequel with Discord and Butterscotch?

Good thing I'm in the back of my classroom

-alternates between muttering "Hawt" and "D'awwww"-

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Perfect? Impossible. But I'm glad you liked it. :raritywink:

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Yeaaah these were actually a struggle for me. Translating Discord's bizarre nature into text can be tricky, especially since I usually write pretty straightforwardly. The creative wordplay felt a bit forced to me, so I'm glad I had some hits in there somewhere.

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That's a bit of a leap as far as continuity goes. I won't rule out more Discord clop, but I've already written him twice more than I ever expected. And if I write more Butterscotch I'll probably ship him with Dusk Shine again.

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Getting your money's worth, eh?

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Mission accomplished! :yay:

Comment posted by domosRAGE deleted Sep 21st, 2015

woooow
that was reeeeeeaaally good
and with that i not only mean the clop but the story and the romance
very nice
would love to read a sequel where there realationship grows ^^ and in between Arty and Discord

PHR

Sheesh, what's with all the downvotes? Don't you people like rimming? D:

Actually, I'm not a fan of it either. But, as usual, Marshall did a damn good job describing how much the characters enjoyed themselves, which made me enjoy it. Immensely. Also, kudos for possibly writing the first fic to feature multicock. Didn't see that one coming, yet it (and everything else) totally felt like Discord. Nicely done.

Once again, it feels strange how many M/M fics I, a straight dude, have read and faved. Guess I just care about characters in a loving relationship making each other happy, regardless of gender. Weird, huh?

6450486 I hate it because of Polygmory.

But I didn't read it.

And it doesn't make me feel sick or uncomfortable.

So I don't downvote. It's my rule.

(Edit: I stand corrected.)

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Oh god no, I'm terrible at romance outside sex. I can only write characters properly when they're badoinking. :fluttershbad:

Glad you liked it, though! I won't rule out the possibility of some Discord/Artemis shenanigans (probably not even a clopfic, more comedy and couple bitchiness), but don't wait on it either.

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Sheesh, what's with all the downvotes?

Discord clop, for one, and also because it's M/M. Haters gonna hate.

Don't you people like rimming? D: Actually, I'm not a fan of it either.

Funny, neither am I. Glad that wasn't showing too much. :raritywink:

But, as usual, Marshall did a damn good job describing how much the characters enjoyed themselves, which made me enjoy it.

It took me more stories than I'd have liked to figure that out. Thank you though. :twilightsmile:

Once again, it feels strange how many M/M fics I, a straight dude, have read and faved. Guess I just care about characters in a loving relationship making each other happy, regardless of gender. Weird, huh?

Some kind of sorcery if you ask me. :trixieshiftright:

I might've said it before, but my favorite comments are from straight guys that like my gay clopfics. It's the surest sign I'm doing something right. :yay:

Don't really like Discord clop, but it's Marshal's so obviously it's hot (and the princes more than helped)

You know, I like it better when a story can hit more than one part of the emotional spectrum. And I never expect it pun averted when it comes from erotica.

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You flatter me. Glad you liked it! :yay:

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Thanks! I always worry I'm not making things seem deep enough.

DYUM that cover art! is there a source showing us more somewhere?.....

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Right? Camy did an incredible job, but I can't link the source because her Tumblr is NSFW. It's thefireboundmage if you wanna google it.

6461761 cover image source links haven't had any problem being nsfw from what i've seen :l ....

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It's only on her Tumblr. I'd rather not risk it, since it's heavily NSFW. That's why I put the artist name in the description. She was fine with this arrangement.

Comment posted by EmotionlessTornado deleted Jan 19th, 2018

Whoa another artemis clop fic not only that plus a gay discord and r63 celestia (Solaris) shipping! that's rare.

NmB

I’m a straight guy, I have a lot of trouble reading homosexual clops, but god damn even I have to admit that this was great. I wouldn’t mind reading a second part.
PD I can’t for the life of me, find the cover picture anywhere else.

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