- Member Since 22nd Dec, 2011
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Marshal Twilight
A smut-peddling armchair general with a love for writing and ponies.
Marshal Twilight
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And here we are, finally! I gotta say again, Marshal, that I was really impressed with this one. Nice to see you do some more romantic clop, because you pulled it off brilliantly.
Enjoy that Top Fave spot! 
This was actually a nice read, and it's still good the second time around.
I would read this, but I have a personal vendetta against shipping Fluttershy and Twilight together, in any form.
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6306800 Thank you for the personal validation I was so obviously seeking, good... (non-gender-specific formal title).
Nice to see more rule63 stuff out there.
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Have I ever told you that you're the best thing ever?
6306139 Hi bad!
i like this now i must go take care of something to more clop away
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Awesome, glad you liked it
BarbBad!6306284
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Yaoi loving son of a whore.
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Marshal! Babs! You've done it again! Hot diggity dog! Thumbs up all over the place.
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how do 19 people dislike this? this is perfect
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Incredibly cringe worthy r63 names people insist on using.
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>whining about names that have been around nearly forever in the fandom
That's some hot opinion you got there.
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I'll give you a hint. It rhymes with "homophones," but doesn't involve any.
6309443 seems legit
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Yeah, you mean the R63 names that have 1116 images and 968 images tagged under them on Derpibooru? Those names? The ones the fandom has been using for years?
Yeah, they're obviously quite cringeworthy and unpopular.
6309477 I thought everypony was equal in a land were guys can be bright pink...
this story is amazing, so screw everypony who thinks otherwise 
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Being popular does not make them any less terrible, ask McDonald's.
And they are neither canon nor obligatory, there are a few stories that actually go through the effort of coming up with good r63 names that help make the story readable.
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I will not arbitrarily choose obscure names of my own devising simply because there are a handful of people that don't like the commonly accepted fanon names. And if you think that this story has so many downvotes because of that, then you should take a look at any other M/M stories on this site.
If you have a problem with the names, go take it up with Derpibooru rather than on my story.
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Do as you want, dude, not saying you should use someone else's names, that's actually the problem (for me at least), I'm sure you could come up with better original names on your own in less than five minutes, because it's pretty much impossible to go anywhere but up, and I would credit you a lot more for it, but whatever.
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Ever hear the saying "don't fix what isn't broken"
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Nah, I already said what I had to say, someone asked why the dislikes, and I gave my answer, I knew it was going to be unpopular because I know most everyone who like r63 stuff just can't seem to look past the half-assed names trotsworth came up with for his drawings four years ago, but I did say it anyway, you'll have to ask the other people about their reasons.
Stories like this shouldn't be allowed to be hot and sweet at the same time. Well done!
This was a cute story. Almost sickeningly sweet. Almost.
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Aww, he deleted the comment! I wanted to know what he said!
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I didn't want to do this, since I loathe being known for this sort of behaviour, but...
Really? Really. We have complaints about names. I-is using something that has been proven to work a sin? Is it bad to think that, for their male counterparts, Dusk Shine and Butterscotch are actually really good names, or are we just complaining that the author didn't have to scrape his brain to come up with names for your clopping material?
You will find no bigger advocate for imagination than I, and few who loathe this witch hunt for 'unoriginality' or 'original the character, do not steal' than I. If it don't suit you, that's fine, but you do not need to be rude about it. If you don't like the names, fine, come up with some! Make a list, slap it into a blog post for all to see! Make the community better, not full of hate.
Love and tolerance, guys; far out, it's like it's a long forgotten concept or something...
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You know, people actually search for content using those names. Fanon names actually serve a purpose. Can you explain why you find the names to be so objectionable?
Taking issue with the NAMES is like shopping for a vehicle and rejecting an option because of the logo. What about the story itself?
Very cute. :)
6309546 Can you direct me to someplace with different R63 names? A fix, perhaps?
Definetly in my top ten on fimfiction, deserves a sequel for sure
And once again this fandom makes me question my sexuality. Good read, I'm honestly not into this ship but a good story is a good story. Also that D joke was enough to guarantee an upvote.
Loved it! Very hot.
This was so
hotadorable. I'm a romantic at heart, and this was just too sweetand did I mention hot?. Nice work, Marshal Twilight.Did a reading of this fic, hope someone enjoys!
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...Well this is getting a blog.
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You're right.
Ayyy!
Another clop is going on over there, no doubt. Look what you did, author!
I admire those guys out there without such magical assistance who do that anyway. You brave bastards!
This was insanely well-written. Deserves three-times the likes it got. Well you got mine, buddy, and a favorite as well. Excellent work!
I really liked it! I thought it was a very sweet interpretation of the two's first time.
I have to say, I'm a little surprised, given Butters' hesitance, that they went with penetration on their first time being intimate. I figured the frotting would ramp up to inter-thigh and that'd be about it.
I'm not one to say that's gross. Sex is messy, I happen to really like that it can be messy (though I still prep for butt-fun... there's messy and then there's too much). Sex being messy is what showers and laundry detergent are for.
It's just kind of inconsistent that Dusk casts a sanitation spell on the inside of his own mouth after a little light rimming on his boyfriend, who I assume practices decent hygiene, but then doesn't give a damn about all the bodily fluids+other that are probably covering his dick after anal sex to completion.
But again, really that's a nitpick in what is otherwise a very sweet and also very hot bit of romantic clop.
The clop was passable
The relationship was cute
The real star was Barb