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FlameMist


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Rarity falls in love with a dreamboat she calls the stallion of her dreams. In a haste to get married and have a happy ending, she creates a love potion that will cause the second drinker to fall in love with the first drinker. When things go wrong and Spike drinks the potion before Rarity does, Rarity drinks and then instantly falls in love with Spike. Can Spike figure out what's going on and stop this?

Edit 4/4/16: These chapters are very short, but keep in mind I wrote this a long time ago, back when I was experimenting with chapter length. Anyway, proceed with reading.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 43 )

Enjoy the story!

(so far...)

:twilightsheepish:

I think I see a lot of potential in this story. And I hope to read more as it becomes available.

My only suggestion so far (and it is a bit nit-picky, I'll admit) is that the first few chapters really feel like they belong together as the first chapter.

6248508 I can never turn down some good Sarity

6253471 I agree. I probably should start making longer chapters starting with chapter 9.

Comment posted by FlameMist deleted Dec 6th, 2015
Comment posted by FlameMist deleted Dec 6th, 2015

:twilightblush: where's the potion & my book?
:raritywink: Here's your book and as for the potion I threw it away
:twilightoops: Threw it away? How? Where? That's dangerous stuff if it's not handled the right way!
:pinkiegasp: I made cup cakes from the flowers behind Raritys boutique!
:flutterrage: I was thirsty and Angel Bunny gave me something to drink!
:rainbowhuh: :ajbemused::eeyup::unsuresweetie::applecry::scootangel: cup cakes?

:derpytongue2: I just don't know what went wrong 'splash' 'splash' bubbles everywhere!

All of Ponyville wants the Dragon!

He's my Spikey Wikey!:raritycry:

6256159 That is actually a good question. My hunch is that Spike and Rarity hit it off. But at some point Spike figures out that Rarity is not herself. At that point he tries to figure out how to reverse the effect.

Dan dan dananana!:derpytongue2:

6257688 I loved those new chapters. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by FlameMist deleted Mar 26th, 2016

Good thing im ready if they run by *pulls out a smokebomb pellet* i have the antidote in a smokebomb form

Forget beautiful, it's FABULOUS!!!

If I had a dollar every time Rarity says Stallion of her Dreams I would be rich.

Love potions should be outlawed.

THAT LYING SON OF A........

What was your first clue marshmallow?

Rarity's gone crazy.

Pinkie did get Pound Cake out before she grab the potion right?

And then love potions/poisons are outlawed all of Equestria.

I'm a total Sparity fan, but man did that potion do a number on her! This is all pretty cute, a little romantic and funny

Sweetie Belle, sweet Celestia I thought you had learned your lesson with those...:facehoof:

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She doesn't, but she knows that Rarity does, which is why she's curious.

Spike, I got 4 words of advice for you: RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!!!

Gee, I wonder how long it took her to figure that out, lol ^_^

phew, thank Celestia the heat died down

Just odd, she invited him to dinner but they didn't ate anything and he left...

This was amusing. When the crowd went after Spike, I immediately pictured thousands of Pinkie Pie's chasing the poor dragon.

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