WARNING: Can contain some teen-rated terms or allusions.
DESCRIPTION: Rarity is one of the most famous designers in Equestria.
She made tons and tons of dresses. Gala dresses, dresses for very sophisticated Canterlot Ponies, for shows... even a wedding dress for a Princess!
But the request she got was more than all of that. It was so important she wasn't sure to make it. But there will be someone here to give her trust when she'll feel down.
SEQUELS: None for the moment
Cover vectors by: Nedemai and TwilightPoint on deviantART
Chapters (4)
On the Scroll she saw...
Greetings I am Salami El Habbeebee My brother was a president for the National Neighgerian bank .
He was in control of 3587543345677 bits for investments , I need help in .........
"You know how these letters go. It's scam ." Twilight said
as Spike nuzzled Rarity.
Where is this story going? Where do you want it to go Captain?
Yay
The poor grammar makes this story hard to read and it is for that reason I am down voting, but don't let an asshole like me discourage you keep writing and improving. Also just a suggestion submit your story to one of the editing groups someone there can be of great help.
5170136 Yeh I knew writing long stories like this would make people downvote. Cause I'm not a good writer and i'm not really proud of this one.
Spike's internal musings amuse me.
We'll see where this goes.
--Spade
5172105 Thanks! I'm glad you appreciate the story :3
Awesomeness
5172266 Thanks! I wish more people thought like you xD
It needs a little work, Please, It has potential to be the story you want it to be. Random
with a little
And a whole lot of fun.
Its not bad. I'm rather enjoying it. Probably biased due to Sparity, but give it some clean up as has been suggested, and it would be great.
If your a mare and a stallion tries to approach you kick 'em in the nads!!
Wonder what Opal's doing now?