• Member Since 2nd Sep, 2014
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Chase123


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Scootaloo is going to be moving with her family to a different city.
And it's going to be hard to say goodbye.

Winner of this contest: Sisterhood.

Edited and proof read by Jubilee Glider thank you so much Jubilee!

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 32 )

6182775
Thanks!! Glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

That was beautiful. Did you cry while writing it? I would.

6182981
Actually yeah. :twilightsheepish:

6182985 Good for you. You put your heart into this one.

You should make a sequel, about Scootaloo getting to her new house. Or something.

6185305
That might be a possibility. I'll think about that.

This is a beautiful story. Good job. :heart:

You need to do a sequel. Her new life in Fillydelphia and her return on her summer break or how the rest of the CMC takes her leaving.

6206846
A sequel might be a possibility. I will think about it. :twilightsmile:

Very emotional. Clearly shows the strong bond between RD and S. Very good.

6227902
Really? Wow. I never thought my writing would ever make anyone cry.

6227914
It made me cry. So sad. I loved it! :scootangel:

I'm gonna be just like that when my kids leave the nest. :raritycry:

Congratulations, Splash. Great job, my friend. :twilightsmile:

6227956
That means a lot Jubilee.

I'm gonna be just like that when my kid leave the nest.

That makes me sad. :fluttershysad: But it's a part of life I guess..

6229649 It is actually a good thing. There are some parents that still have their kids at home when they should be out on their own.

I'm getting off topic, sorry, that's a discussion for elsewhere. :facehoof:

The feels coming out of this we're unbearable! I almost broke down into tears. Almost. 20% more feels, and I would've. :fluttercry:

:raritydespair: Why did you have to make me cry so hard? No, seriously, it was really good!

I like the story it sad and makes me want to cry but two problems I have

1. Scoot doesn't have parents
and
2. I feel like the story's rush, it would be better if there where 3 chapters. The first chapter is Rainbow learning about Scoot is moving away.second chapter is Rainbow spending time with Scoots on there last days. And last chapter is the goodbye. Good story tho

I don't give a shit about what anyone else says! This brought a single tear to my eye, and I very rarely cry, ever. I went through a similar situation when I was in the 5th grade, I moved and lost all my friends, I tried to keep in touch but we've all been growing apart. Only one talks to me often and one on occasion. So right now, I have the feels on a MAJOR scale.

This was beautifully written my friend you are good /)

6417111
Thanks, it means a lot. This is the best fic I've written so far. :yay:

6490950
I hate you sometimes

6490962 But I love this fanfic Q___Q

6490964
I'd rather hear the sweet soothing sound of your pretty voice :twilightsheepish::rainbowkiss:

6490975 Nah, Google Translate is way better with it's dry, emotionless delivery. I aspire to be just like google translate. Anyway, I should probably leave some relatively helpful feedback for this story.

I love it because there isn't a single moment in the whole fic without description of emotion. People can say what they want about sadfics, but the truth of the matter is that they rely on being descriptive and relatable. When Dash gets emotional over the hill that she associates with her friendship with Scoots? Excellent touch. In grief, it's little reminders that can tear open a wound.

6490987
But seriously your voice is nice..

Thanks, that was nice to hear

Aww, greatly painted emotions here and great choice of words and settings :fluttercry: Noticed a few spots that would deserve a comma, but otherwise, really well played! *sob*

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