Rarity Ships Ponies

After she gets a weird dream, Rarity tells Applejack that they should try to ship a few ponies. They found out that the ship was already there the whole time.

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Shipping Flutterdash. · 9th Mar 2015 · 898 words
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Applejack battles love birds.. · 9th Mar 2015 · 919 words
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Phaedra

Phaedra #1 · Mar 9th, 2015 · · · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

This looks promising.

Wait a minute: -1000 word chapters? Downvote rain!

Tailsic

Tailsic #2 · Mar 10th, 2015 · · · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

really cheesy, but I like it

Melbourne Victoria

Melbourne Victoria #3 · Mar 10th, 2015 · · · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

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Poet Knight

Poet Knight #4 · Mar 10th, 2015 · · · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

CassandraMyOCisBestpony

CassandraMyOCisBestpony #5 · Mar 10th, 2015 · 3 · 1 · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

''Absolutely!'' Rarity said. ''We set the whole thing wrong! It should never have been like a date!

That's right; they should've just skipped to the sex.

anonymousjedi

anonymousjedi #6 · Mar 10th, 2015 · · · Shipping Flutterdash. ·

Judging by the title, this seems to be similar to a fanfic that I'm planning out where Twilight makes a checklist of all the ponies she need to ship. I haven't started reading this fic yet, but I already love the idea!

Lyi

Lyi #7 · Mar 10th, 2015 · · 2 · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

After she gets a weird dream, Rarity tells Applejack that they should try to ship a few ponies. They found out that the ship was already there the whole time.

Now, what's wrong with the tense?...

After she gets a weird dream, Rarity tells Applejack that they should try to ship a few ponies.

Present tense: "gets" "tells" "they should"

They found out that the ship was already there the whole time.

Past tense: "they found" "was already"

Soprano Beat

Soprano Beat #8 · Mar 11th, 2015 · · · Shipping Flutterdash. ·

Whaaaa... I don't understand......!

Soprano Beat

Soprano Beat #9 · Mar 11th, 2015 · · · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

I don't know what I'm doing anymore...

Aurora Dimmet

Aurora Dimmet #10 · Mar 11th, 2015 · · · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

Idea's good, but the dialogue doesn't sound like it belongs to the characters who are speaking, and a goodly number of typos and such.

RachanaRoxx

RachanaRoxx #11 · Mar 11th, 2015 · 1 · · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

To be honest, that story was scary. It was great! Every time Rarity tried something crazy or the other, it was great to see how AJ reacted. Great story! Keep it up!

articunos bitch

articunos bitch #12 · Mar 19th, 2015 · 3 · · Shipping Flutterdash. ·

''Are you crazy!?'' Applejack yelled. ''Are ya sayin that we should set our friends up! We don't even know if they're lesbian, and-and they might love some other mare if they are lesbian and-how much beer did you drink?'''

Who said it would be their mare friends? (I know what the title is called, but Rarity never said it)Also, you have an extra quotation mark at the end.

Besides we know Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are in love!''

That's silly. Fluttershy herself is the shipper of the Main 6. She dreams of TwiDash, Rarijack, FlashDerp...

Rarity fixed them a meal, she put the meal down, and then waited for there arrival.

There-->Their

''Hide in the bushes, I set up some lovely music and hearts around the table!''

Rarity said pulling her friend into the bushes as they heard the trotting of the two mares.

Why not just ship herself and Applejack?

articunos bitch

articunos bitch #13 · Mar 19th, 2015 · 3 · · Applejack battles love birds.. ·

She was having quite a nice dream, and it was too bad that it had to be ruined by the phone call.

It involved her and Rarity doing something adult related...That dirty thing that popped into your head? That was it.

She wrote a note and pasted it on her bedroom door in case her family wondered where she was, she went outside and called Winona out of her doghouse and they headed to the mayor's place.

Going to all this work for a mare who's lost her mind, does Applejack not see she and Rarity should be in love?

she was wearing a very nice light blue outfit, and Applejack had to admit that she looked quite pretty in it.

See?

''I was so immature, and I believed my dream was right when it came to this ''shipping'' thing, I'm sorry I was a total nut..'' Rarity said seeming ashamed.

Tru dat.
Happy ending, .