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Rainbow Dash, was coached by the toughest coach in the area, he does not want any pony to show any weakness, and to keep pushing even when your in pain.
But when is it over the limit?
To come back with scars and bruises of stick marks?
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The paragraph repeated itself, although the second time it didn't have two dots, so Im not sure if the two dots is an error.
Good story.
5317924
Yes, I fixed all of them..
The errors are my fault, sorry, about the paragraph repeat.
Hands or hooves. Pick one and stay with it you can't have both.
There are still two repeat paragraphs that need to come out.
And this was my mistake:
It should be hooves, not hands.
Sorry Splash
5318573
This was originally written humanized, and without my editors it would be a lot worse!! Still thumbs up for noticing it, I need all the advice or noticing things I didn't!
5319021
You did awesome still! You noticed thousands of things I didn't!
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Thank you!
Glad you enjoyed it!
5318573 they actually say hand a LOT in the show
I saw the title, and immediately I knew I had to say this: BOW CHICKA BOW WOW!
I'm still definitely read it though
I like the concept and all, and I like the whole Abused!Rainbow (because I'm sadistic like that), but I have to ask... How is this TwiDash? Am I just thick and not able to notice the subtext or something?
5323014
Ha, I posted the exact same thing literally just after you.
5323015
Have I put it on Twidash?
Sorry I click the wrong button sometimes..
There is NO reference to Twidash, or Twilight in the first place.
I think somebody's been putting my stories in the wrong files..
5323096
Well, that's a relief. I was beginning to think my Shipping Sensor had broken.
5323100
Inform me please which group where it was posted as Twidash..
5323187
There you go! As quoted by my feed.
5323193
Thanks!
Wonder why this user is adding all my stories to the wrong file, better track him down..
I like it. I wonder what made the coach become like that?
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There are actual coaches like that in real life. Why are the like that? Mostly because they had very bad raising.
Besides that? I'm not really sure..
At least the coach I created did..
Only a poor coach forces a tired child to keep going, despite the pain a child goes through
that's one tough set of ponies... and one mean coach
This better not be some sort of clop fiction because if it is I am going to FLIP OUT!
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No clop.
Why would you think that?
Well, you did a good job of making me pissed, and having the urge to go find this coach and beat the shit out of him.
I am going to write a sequel.
And you guys are gonna like it.
Just wait.