"Friends buy your lunch, but your best friends eat your lunch." - Anonymous
Twilight comes back from the human world with some bad news. Human Scootaloo has found out about the portal to Equestria and wants to go in. The Mane 6 try to block the portal to Equestria, because very bad things will happen if they don't. Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash wants to try a different aproach. She wants to go to the human world to talk to Scoots. An adventure Scootadash fic.
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You should not use such short chapters. 1000 words is the minimum for a good chapter. Either put all three chapters together into one, or better, flesh out the existing chapters some more. It all feels kind of rushed.
I think this is great! You're doing a really good job. I think you're representing the characters really well. Keep it up!
All Twilight has to do is wait at the other side of the portal for Scootaloo to come, then bring her back.
Glad you guys liked it!!
Despite the fact that this has rushed, short chapters, you have caught my interest. I'll track this and give it a like.
I'll try and slow it down next chapter. And make it longer.
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I don't think you quite managed
Pity it was so short. Then again, if my only complaint is the length, then you're doing well.
You're doing nicely
Why, precisely, will they die if they see their alternate selves?
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If two identical copies of the same person come into contact with each other, they annihilate and cease to be. Normally this applies to time travel, but I guess alternate dimensions could also apply. It gets a pass from me, anyway.
More EG Scoots! Yay!
Oh. No EG Scootaloo. That sucks.
Well????? What next?
MOAR!!
That doesn't make any sense as I have had the humans in Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash and Rarity go to Equestria, met their pony counterparts, nothing happened. Is this something from Sailor Moon where in Sailor Moon Crystal, Usagi was not allowed to meet her future self? But then why did Usagi see King Endymion? I also had the CMC go with Sunset Shimmer to Equestria, went to the Pony school even though if they were the younger ponies of CMC, they still had the teen smarts to ace subjects, and they met their pony selves and I even had Applebloom the human that was a pony talking to pony Diamond Tiara about how to make friends with the teen Diamond Tiara, which leads to the human version of Diamond Tiara losing the school election, but then I had Diamond Tiara spending a week in Ponyville learning how to make friends. I just don't get the plot that if you have Scootaloo meeting her pony self...she's going to die? That's like saying in Pokemon Dungeon if the human that's the hero Pokemon meets another Pokemon like him, he or she the human that's a Pokemon would die too? I think Scootaloo should meet her pony self. Also at the end of Friendship Games, Twilight met Sci Twi, nothing happened, the world wasn't doomed.
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I got lost reading this as it's like Back to the Future as I saw Marty seeing Marty and Doc seeing Doc in part 2 of the movie, and nothing got blown up and Usagi seeing her future self as Neo Queen. This is just an overall confusing story that it's like Twilight isn't allowed to be human or to meet Sci Twi.